Shedinja's Poetry

Started by Shedinja8 April 20th, 2009 4:57 PM
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Shedinja8

Niger, atrum vel malum. Sumo.

Age 27
Male
Darkest corner of your mind...
Seen December 17th, 2012
Posted May 21st, 2011
134 posts
15 Years
It is forever...
Never can it be controled...
Only embraced...
Its strength, unfortold...
Destroying all it should see...
Tainting it...
Destroying happiness and glee...
Leaving nothing else wanted...
Nothing but Darkness...


Also, I will accect HELPFUL critisism (Don't just say it sucks.). I will be glad to listen and improve my work.
I generally avoid temptation unless I can't resist it.
- Mae West

WriteThemWrong

LetMeHearYourPokemon's___ Voice

Age 31
Male
Tucson
Seen September 22nd, 2011
Posted June 19th, 2011
1,130 posts
14.3 Years
um can i ask why you decided to put ellipses after each line?
and you spelled embrace wrong
They confiscated my monkeys.
Dammit sky!
It's hard talking to cactus.

I think my head is dying
It's like being trapped in a room of smells

Shedinja8

Niger, atrum vel malum. Sumo.

Age 27
Male
Darkest corner of your mind...
Seen December 17th, 2012
Posted May 21st, 2011
134 posts
15 Years
um can i ask why you decided to put ellipses after each line?
and you spelled embrace wrong
Thanks for findind the spelling mistake, and for the ellipses, I thought it would and a bit more drama.
I generally avoid temptation unless I can't resist it.
- Mae West