I've got bored one day after watching ben 10, so I made this:
Ten
My favorite number is ten
I write it using my pen
When I had lost my pen
I didn't like ten from then
So I gave it to my brother Ben
But he doesn't like number ten
So he gave it to his friend Gwen
But she doesn't like number ten
So I asked it back again
That's the end of number ten.
A poem of Ten?
And, You lost your pen?
Oh, what men...
They forgot again.
Well I can
Lend you my pen
I got it when
It was thrown by Gwen
But don't worry, Ben
I still have Ten.
P.S. = LOL x10
Nostalgia. Last log-in was 2009. Lots have changed ever since.
A poem of Ten?
And, You lost your pen?
Oh, what men...
They forgot again.
Well I can
Lend you my pen
I got it when
It was thrown by Gwen
But don't worry, Ben
I still have Ten.
It has a nice rhyming scheme. However, I didn't enjoy reading it. It seemed rather. . Pointless. Of course, you were bored, so I suppose that's an excuse. Right here is where I disliked it:
So I gave it to my brother Ben
. . .
So he gave it to his friend Gwen
There seemed to be a lot of syllables here that ruined the flow.