My First Sprites

Started by Dannwe123 April 30th, 2009 7:17 AM
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Age 27
Male
Sweden
Seen January 17th, 2019
Posted April 14th, 2016
107 posts
14.6 Years
These are my first decent sprites.
Make sure to leave some feedback!!



Scratch sprites:
Spoiler:
Same one without glow lol








Fusions:
Spoiler:
Blastoise + Giratina


Rhydon + Dusknoir
Magneton + Steelix + Registeel + Foretress + Scizor + Electrode
Typhlosion + Ditto + Swalot + Grimer + Muk + Gastly


I'll probably add more later

ShinjisLover

Seen May 11th, 2016
Posted July 5th, 2010
3,043 posts
14.4 Years
Your Giratina/Blastiose's horn doesn't really fit on its head. Your scratches have crappy shading, especially the one with the flames. It seems like the flames don't light up the bottom of the sprite, even though they should. Also, both scratch sprites have a pretty bad outline. They're not straight or curved where they need to be and they're too dark.

Also, the flames on that one scratch seem. . Bad. It's hard to explain, but it just doesn't seem like flames.

However, your Rhydon/Dusknoir is excellently done.
Age 27
TX =p
Seen December 12th, 2010
Posted January 3rd, 2010
60 posts
14.2 Years
^Some of what she said.=p

But yes, the horn is placed wrong and the outline is bad, but I actually like all of those.=p
And you saved in .png! Unlike me and my first post.=p

Although To me, the giratina wings just kinda spoiled it.=p And the 2nd scratch...I just don't like it.=p

But overall they're good, and your scratches are better than anything I've scratched.=p

Robert Conley

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Male
The Anti Spiral Homeworld
Seen June 17th, 2013
Posted August 17th, 2012
330 posts
14.6 Years
Blastoise + Giratina
the horn=no
and the tentacles could be a little lower along with moving the left ones farther left.

Typhlosion + Ditto + Swalot + Grimer + Muk + Gastly
did you even recolor the muk parts? if so it doesnt look like it.