her eyes...

Started by darkblastoise89 September 21st, 2004 3:27 PM
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Age 32
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Seen October 24th, 2004
Posted October 24th, 2004
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Oh dang!There goes my promise not to get back into romantic lovey dovey crud.Oh well.


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Age 35
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Seen December 26th, 2005
Posted November 10th, 2004
329 posts
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Well I thought it was nicely written short, concise, and to the point. However, some of the rhymes seem a little forced, like you placed them there just for the sake of rhyming. Other than that good show..

oh yeah almost forgot, would anyone mind taking a look at one of my poems that I just recently wrote, "Icarian Dreams" its been giving me a lot of trouble. So if anyone wants to take a look at it, I would appreciate it.
"We must carry war into every corner the enemy happens to carry it, to his home, to his centers of entertainment:a total war. It is neccesary to prevent him from having a moment of peace, a quiet moment outside his barracks or even inside; we must attack him wherever he may be, make him feel like a cornered beast wherever he may move. then his moral fiber shall begin to decline, but we shall notice how signs of decadence begin to disappear."- Che Guevara

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Age 35
Livin somewhere... I dont know...
Seen March 7th, 2014
Posted September 10th, 2007
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18.8 Years
Oh dang!There goes my promise not to get back into romantic lovey dovey crud.Oh well.

i agree with ya E_E


wow!! this is very good for a short poem 10000/100





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Age 34
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Seen April 23rd, 2018
Posted September 10th, 2013
11,126 posts
19.2 Years
Nice and short. ^-^

Good job.
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