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Old May 22nd, 2009 (2:08 AM). Edited May 22nd, 2009 by Kindo.
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    Long ago.......In the middle of the night.......Pikachu was playing in a silent meadow, when an unexpected sound sliced through the air.....Pikachu was drawn to the location where the sound was coming from......If Pikachu had never been drawn none of this would happen

    Chapter One

    "You are awake"said a deep voice.
    "Pika?" Wondered pikachu as he stepped closer into the bright sun,he thought that he was outside when he heard a strange sound.
    He crept closer to the sound.....and closer.......then came to a stop because of the wall in his way.
    "Pika!Pika!pikapika!"Screamed pikachu as he ran into the wall again.
    "Do not try to escape because there is no escape from my clutches"Said the deep voice.

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    Old May 22nd, 2009 (10:00 PM).
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      Wrong section to start off with.

      Also, this really doesn't meet the standards of PFF&P. It's sloppy work, with good grammar missing. There's also no description, so it's very confusing and hard to follow.

      It's also unfinished.

      Closed for not meeting the standards, as per the rules.

      The prologue begins now! Before you start to run
      Reach out with your hand and grab your freedom
      An absolute protagonist, a perfect hero...
      Sadly, these are things I'll never become

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