Check out some of my drawings

Started by Cerese912 May 29th, 2009 6:09 PM
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Age 28
Miami
Seen September 11th, 2010
Posted March 27th, 2010
63 posts
14.1 Years
It's of a character I made. Her name is Ayana Kinahashi

Here's the link.
http://morgancerese.blogspot.com/

I loved pokemon since I was 6 years old. Fast foward 9 years and I'm still lovin it. :)
Part of the Eevee Fanclub!
My FC is 3051-3530-7652. Contact me if you want to do something.
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I love making AMVs and Parodies! Check them out!

Age 28
Miami
Seen September 11th, 2010
Posted March 27th, 2010
63 posts
14.1 Years
Haha. Yeah. You guys should have seen my first drawings from years ago. 0_o. Like my drama teacher always said "Critique is to improve yourself and your performance." I'm just now learning how to do hair and eyes. ^_^

I loved pokemon since I was 6 years old. Fast foward 9 years and I'm still lovin it. :)
Part of the Eevee Fanclub!
My FC is 3051-3530-7652. Contact me if you want to do something.
Check out my designs on

Spoiler:


I love making AMVs and Parodies! Check them out!

Raaji

Back up, I got a stick!

Age 29
that way.
Seen August 25th, 2014
Posted November 9th, 2010
196 posts
14.1 Years
Hi Everyone!!
I'm a new Graphic Design student and I created this spot to publish
and share things related to what I'm studying and enjoy as well.
Mainly I'll be posting things related to Drawing, Painting,
Photography, Graphic Design, Web Design, Graphic Design Software such
as Photoshop, Illustrator. My own stuff/drawings I do for practice and/
or assignments from class.

I'm fairly new to everything myself so It's also a way for me to learn
better by sharing what I'm learning and will learn along the way. It's
nothing professional basically I would like to create a Network with
people that share my interest, and I would love to see other related
blogs to follow as well, but they are so hard to find so this is why I
posted this note here. So, anyone who has a blog related to any of
those topics has my interest already! lol

So you're welcome to visit me and I'll definitely check out yours as
well.
Spam much? I don't think this should go in other people's threads.

And the drawing are pretty good, better than I could do anyways. But as others have said, probably work on proportions.
Is paired with teh awesome ShinjisLover.

Corvus of the Black Night

Wild Duck Pokémon

Age 30
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With the Birds
Seen January 9th, 2015
Posted January 9th, 2015
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What is definately wrong about this character is that their limbs are round! No real person in real life as limbs as flexible as a rope. Anime/Manga imitation is all about trying to get the human figure perfect, so keep working at it.

The girl's head is proportioned unusually, and the chin is offset way too much, giving the girl a very, er... masculine feel ._.
Age 28
Miami
Seen September 11th, 2010
Posted March 27th, 2010
63 posts
14.1 Years
0_o maybe i drew it out of habit. i'm a pretty masculine girl.

i'll work on it.

I loved pokemon since I was 6 years old. Fast foward 9 years and I'm still lovin it. :)
Part of the Eevee Fanclub!
My FC is 3051-3530-7652. Contact me if you want to do something.
Check out my designs on

Spoiler:


I love making AMVs and Parodies! Check them out!

ShinjisLover

Seen May 11th, 2016
Posted July 5th, 2010
3,043 posts
14.4 Years
Raaji-chan (Blahman117) said you wanted me to critique your newest works, correct? That's what I'm here for, hun. ^_~

For your latest picture, you need to make the hands a bit bigger. The hand should be about as big as the face is, speaking in an anatomically correct manner, of course. When connecting the neck with the shoulders, you should make the lines touch each other. What you have here makes it look like her back is slightly hunched. Unless she is Quasimodo's sister, this shouldn't happen.

Also, with the arms, they should be thicker. Not too thick, of course. What I find helps is if you look at yourself in the mirror and check the parts of your body that you wish to draw. Mind, it does sound silly, but it works. The clothes look fine to me, but the purse should be more detailed. It looks like a square, basically. Just a pink square with a line coming out of it. Not just that, but the coloring on it is mediocre at best.

Whew, that was a lot. I hope this helps you.
Age 28
Miami
Seen September 11th, 2010
Posted March 27th, 2010
63 posts
14.1 Years
Raaji-chan (Blahman117) said you wanted me to critique your newest works, correct? That's what I'm here for, hun. ^_~



For your latest picture, you need to make the hands a bit bigger. The hand should be about as big as the face is, speaking in an anatomically correct manner, of course. When connecting the neck with the shoulders, you should make the lines touch each other. What you have here makes it look like her back is slightly hunched. Unless she is Quasimodo's sister, this shouldn't happen.

Also, with the arms, they should be thicker. Not too thick, of course. What I find helps is if you look at yourself in the mirror and check the parts of your body that you wish to draw. Mind, it does sound silly, but it works. The clothes look fine to me, but the purse should be more detailed. It looks like a square, basically. Just a pink square with a line coming out of it. Not just that, but the coloring on it is mediocre at best.

Whew, that was a lot. I hope this helps you.

Wow thanks. I knew that was pretty random but it really helped alot.

P.S I'm surprised you didn't say anything about her cat making that nasty mess lol

I loved pokemon since I was 6 years old. Fast foward 9 years and I'm still lovin it. :)
Part of the Eevee Fanclub!
My FC is 3051-3530-7652. Contact me if you want to do something.
Check out my designs on

Spoiler:


I love making AMVs and Parodies! Check them out!