~The Heart~

Started by Claire September 24th, 2004 7:50 AM
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Posted May 9th, 2006
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This is a poem my friend John wrote for me..it's about one side of my personality that i wish i didnt have, but he's written it in a flattering way
He's a really incredible poet, so i thought i'd show one of his pieces ^^ (he's not part of this forum)

The Heart
A heart that sits in the moonlight,
Awaiting the caress of the stars,
Dreaming of their voices,
Deep, unending, beautiful,
Tempting to eye and mind.

They bow down in adoration,
Caressing her with their radiance,
Silver, constant, and glorious,
A lesser beacon to her own,
The moon that bears her needs.

The heart wavers, a tear is made,
She lies prone in the darkness,
Awaiting to be healed,
Healed by the starlight,
And all the stars obey her call.
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Seen December 26th, 2005
Posted November 10th, 2004
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18.8 Years
0_0 I like it very interesting. Althoug I would like you to ask who he means by "they" in the second stanza as I found that part to be a bit unclear.

"The heart wavers, a tear is made,
She lies prone in the darkness,
Awaiting to be healed,
Healed by the starlight,
And all the stars obey her call."

-this last stanza really wrapped it up for me, the second stanza was not really cohesive, but this brought it all into persepctive. give John a pat on the back.
"We must carry war into every corner the enemy happens to carry it, to his home, to his centers of entertainment:a total war. It is neccesary to prevent him from having a moment of peace, a quiet moment outside his barracks or even inside; we must attack him wherever he may be, make him feel like a cornered beast wherever he may move. then his moral fiber shall begin to decline, but we shall notice how signs of decadence begin to disappear."- Che Guevara

"shoot, coward, you are only going to kill a man"-Ernesto "Che" Guevara