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She/Her
In a cardboardbox aside the main highway
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-ahem- Certainately not that cardboard box...
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Nice detail for such a small piece. The shape of the flower is a little lopsided, but that may just be because of the odd perspective. The shading is pretty good, except for a few places on the bottom of the flower where the outline gets a little dark. The clouds are cute, though it would've been a little better if you had either copy/pasted the same cloud or made them all different. Two being the same and the third being different just bugs me for some reason. The hills are shaded well, except for the part near the bottom. Those bottom two colors contrast with the others a bit too much. My last problem is.. where is your light source? I'm assuming it's the sun, but the shadow of the flower is going towards the sun, which really makes no sense. Overall, it's pretty good.



















