This is pretty awsome Alenthia!!
I love how James Enherited his skin from his Irish Parents xD
We're not all red heads you know ^^
Haha but seriously good read. It could have been slight more descriptive in places so that the story draws on a bit and you're not left with a story that is too short. Unless thats what you want to do! Then continue as is!!
When i first started reading the story started to remind me of something Jon Connolly might write.
Do you read any of his books?