It was a bit too short to be a first chapter, much less a prlogue. There wasn't much to suggest any sort of plot, so I can't say "it's gonna turn out into a real thriller!" since ~I have nothing much to go on. There was capital letters at radnom interviles, like:
Pulling on My shoes and grabbing my gear I head out, On the path of a dream, with my Dad Standing in my way.
It should be:
Pulling on my shoes, I grabbed my gear and went out; On the path of my dream, of which my dad stood in the way.
Or something like that.
As it was too short really to give anything about a plot, all I feel there is to say is keep writing, but hinder the advice and sustain it throughout.