Team Rocket - Miyamoto - Jessies mom

Started by Co500 June 13th, 2009 2:24 PM
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http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/7727/teamrocketjessiesmom.png

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That's not Miyamoto's hair at all. I recommend that you improve your shading, outlining and pallette-deciding to all of your sprites.
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All the female bodies seem very anatomically disproportioned... the waists seem extremely thin... compared to the edited heads... which seem awkwardly placed compared to the rest of the bodies...

Jessie seems to be WAY TO RIGID... she has many strait, unnatural lines... her arm, her legs... they are stiff... they need to be a bit more flowing... not to mention, the leg on the right of the sprite is pointed in an awkward position...

That is not to say that the shading looks good... just some of the outline is dark, especially around the white... it needs to be toned down, since it contrasts too much...

as for jessie's mom, there are the same problems, the outlining is dark, the anatomy is kinda rigid and thin...

there is also a clumpy under the skirt by the leg on the left... that's a no-no... it really detracts from the sprite... you'll want to thin that up!

also, the feet look small and awkward, while the legs are a bit jagged in the outlining... but the pose is great! you just need to clean it up!

same for miya... the pose is good, just clean it up, fix the outlining, and the arm on the left... it is awkward looking in the outlining, and especially near the hand... it needs to be more definative what is going on there...

These are not bad at all, and with a bit of work, they'll be great!

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