Hey you need to get three more up or else this will get closed. As for critique, I don't like the way the head jutts in on our left. And it needs more shading but it isn't a bad start.
I suppose I will redo it in a little while.
Thanks for the critique :]
The pallet was off, so that's part of it.
Just gonna have to use better colors and work on the line art :]
In the night I hear them talk,
The coldest story ever told,
Somewhere far along this road
He lost his soul,
To a woman so heartless