a romantic rap...rate it or i'll eat u!

Started by darkblastoise89 September 26th, 2004 2:22 PM
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Age 34
east siiide
Seen March 20th, 2005
Posted December 19th, 2004
420 posts
18.7 Years
i'm typing as i think of this...

when you say my name
i get in a strange daze
feelings mixed up like a maze
some primal kind of craze
used to think it was a phase
but it's lasted many days
and it's you, i realize that has my mind in a haze

i'm not used to thinkin about someone consantly
whatever hold you've got me in,
i don't wanna be free.
you don't see the effects that you have on me
and it's impossible to describe your gravity

you keep me interested even when i wanna go
you're so different from every other girl i know
i just wanna show you,
i wanna get to know you
don't listen to the lies
that other people told you
i just wanna look in your eyes as i hold you
and let the truth of my love unfold you...

day in and day out,
you're the one i'm thinkin' 'bout
you turn my eyes to waterfalls
and my toungue into a drought
i couldn't imagine my life being without
the person that keeps my love locked up
without a doubt...
-matt
name changed to ~\Ethereal_Knight/~

Sumomo & Kotoko

Seen February 14th, 2012
Posted February 14th, 2012
1,947 posts
18.8 Years
I love it,thats how I feel bout this girl I love.Its word for word.I couldn't have done a better job.I give it a 999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999

Kiri

Breeder & Berry Grower

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Seen July 28th, 2008
Posted March 28th, 2005
435 posts
18.7 Years
Yeah, I'll give it the same as Raven. Maybe even a 9.999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,9999,999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999etc.

Yes- Kiri's BACK and she's STILL vaguely sleepy! PM me and I'll do a pic like this for you...
Age 37
In A Place Called Verdigo
Seen January 17th, 2010
Posted August 17th, 2005
439 posts
18.6 Years
When i first meet my girlfriend Nancy i felt the same way i give in a 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/10
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Age 37
In A Place Called Verdigo
Seen January 17th, 2010
Posted August 17th, 2005
439 posts
18.6 Years
10/10 then, because i can realate to how i feel about Nancy (nobody knows Her)
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Age 29
Non-binary
New South Wales, Australia
Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
14,976 posts
18.7 Years
Awesome! Very rappy, I can imagine it to a rap beat, and the words are pretty cool.

Because I can't be bothered rating it overboard, I'll put 10/10.

And a rep point.

DP

EDIT - Crap, you disabled rep points.
PON PON WAY WAY WAY

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