Beautiful

Started by Alec_ June 20th, 2009 7:04 AM
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Age 14
Female
strip club.
Seen January 9th, 2016
Posted January 8th, 2016
947 posts
15 Years
Beautiful
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I am beautiful
Not only because of the curve of my hips
Or the shape of my body
Not only because of the fullness of my lips
Or the curl of my eye lashes

I am beautiful because I want to be
I am beautiful because God made me that way
I am beautiful because in my eyes
There is no one more beautiful than me

I am beautiful because I have a heart
And that is a beautiful thing
I am beautiful because I have a brain
And that is a beautiful thing
I am beautiful because I give advice
And that is a beautiful thing

I am beautiful because I want to be
I am beautiful because God made me that way
I am beautiful because in my eyes
There is no one more beautiful than me

I am beautiful because I have confidence
I am beautiful because I have determination and wit
I am beautiful because I have goals and I plan to reach them
I am beautiful because I am always there to lend a helping hand

I am beautiful because I want to be
I am beautiful because God made me that way
I am beautiful because in my eyes
There is no one more beautiful than me


~Fairytales. ( :DDD. Hope you like it. XD;..)
→ IT'S PARTY TIME!

now the party won't stop till i walk in. dont stop
make it pop dj boom my speakers up tonight ima
fight till we see the sunlight! tick tock on the clock

seeker

Ireland
Seen November 1st, 2019
Posted May 20th, 2018
10,593 posts
14.1 Years
It's very good ~Fairytales ^^
I like it. I love how you have the confidence to portray yourself in a positive way. we see less than we need these days i think... Self confidence i mean. I like the poem but the only Critics i'll give is that it doesn't flow as well as it could maybe. Try changing your ways of saying things that will keep it less repetitive and give the poem a bit more flow. Try reading aloud after writing and then see wheter its easy to say and if the words flow from your tongue.
It's very good though keep it up ^_^
You've almost convinced me to put my own poetry up =]
In good time