It's very good ~Fairytales ^^
I like it. I love how you have the confidence to portray yourself in a positive way. we see less than we need these days i think... Self confidence i mean. I like the poem but the only Critics i'll give is that it doesn't flow as well as it could maybe. Try changing your ways of saying things that will keep it less repetitive and give the poem a bit more flow. Try reading aloud after writing and then see wheter its easy to say and if the words flow from your tongue.
It's very good though keep it up ^_^
You've almost convinced me to put my own poetry up =]
In good time