Originally Posted by Twilight Requiem
In the Beginnig there was One
"Beginnig" should be "Beginning".
Originally Posted by Twilight Requiem
The Two were known as Dailaga and Palkia
"Dailaga" should be "Dialga".
Originally Posted by Twilight Requiem
soon raised an army of ghost
"ghost" should be "ghosts", as an army is a group.
Originally Posted by Twilight Requiem
and it's power matched Mew it self
"it self" should be "itself".
Originally Posted by Twilight Requiem
fight Arceus for controll of the universe
"controll" should be "control".
Also, be careful with commas - you should have a space after every comma. For example, "Azelf,Uxie and Mesprit" should be "Azelf, Uxie, and Mesprit". Also, be careful with capitalisation - at some points in the story, like with "Evil Spririts", you capitalise non-proper nouns mid-sentence.
Apart from that, you've got an interesting verse up there that has a lot of potential to be developed into a good story, but it needs to be longer, so we readers have more to think about and enjoy. :)