Dark Void (PG-13)

Started by Soccerryle June 29th, 2009 4:27 PM
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Earth
Seen January 8th, 2010
Posted January 8th, 2010
28 posts
14.4 Years
I'm always accepting Constructive Critasism, lol.

Prolouge

"I...

I... Am...

I... Am... Sa..."

The Earth begins to crack. Blood rises through the cracks, sweeping the streets. Horrid humans awe in fear. Stare deep into the sun; You see no trace of light. Instead, a Dark Void. The Void can sense fear, as it destroies all in it's path. The more you panic, the faster your death. It can't be stopped, it has to run it's course. What happens if you escape the void? You consider yourself the luckiest bastard alive. Satan doesn't kill his own kin...

Jason Inclu is the average teenager.. Satan prepares to go on a killing spree, looking for his son...

Fail-Z

Yeah, I'm a profile buzzard.XD

Age 29
Actually... I'm not real sure...
Seen May 7th, 2011
Posted August 4th, 2009
16 posts
14.9 Years
SOunds quite interesting... One spelling mistake at " as it destroies..."
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