Ritchie's Fakemon

Started by Ritchie July 13th, 2009 12:28 PM
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Male
Mexico
Seen August 15th, 2009
Posted July 30th, 2009
28 posts
13.9 Years
I've started spriting days ago and here is my work, (10 sprites, 4 Fakemon). Note that these Fakemon were created / thought / imagined by me so don't steal them or use them somewhere else.

01 - ???



Spoiler:
Name: ???
Type(s): Rock
Species: Helmet Pokémon
Abilities: Rock Head / Rivalry
Description: Males fight against each other during the mating season, any Pokémon or person near the battle can get badly hurt.
Moves: Head Smash, Zen Headbutt, Tackle, Superpower, etc.
Evolution Chain: Does not evolve.

Comments: My first sprite. Female sprite needs improving and I'm not sure about shading on both sprites.
Palettes: Marowak, Omanyte - Omastar, Golem


02 - Larvug

& (by me) --> & (by me)

Spoiler:
Name: Larvug
Type(s): Bug / Water
Species: Larvae Pokémon
Abilities: Swift Swim
Moves: Bug Bite, Crunch, Rain Dance, Aqua Jet, etc.
Description: It swims in ponds in search for prey. Its wings will develop in less than a week.
Evolution Chain:
- Evolves into Mostug at Lv11, during night-time.
- Evolves into ??? at Lv11, during day-time.

Comments: I don't like the way it ended up. It was made in a hurry.
Palettes: Gengar, Tentacool - Tentacruel


03 - Mostug

(by me) --> (by PBFHDude) --> (by me / Nintendo*) --> (by me) --> (by me)
*Right fingers from Haunter's DP Sprite.

Spoiler:
Name: Mostug
Type(s): Bug / Ghost
Species: Annoying Pokémon
Abilities: Insomnia / Levitate
Description: Its wings form a blood drop pattern.
Moves: Bug Bite, Crunch, Drain Punch, Shadow Punch, Agility, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolves into Hemosquito at Lv21 during night-time if .

Comments: Its name comes from mosquito, ghost and bug. The wings try to simulate blood drops, they need improving.
Palettes: Gengar, Tentacool - Tentacruel, Yanmega


04 - Hemosquito



Spoiler:
Name: Hemosquito
Type(s): Bug / Ghost
Species: Annoying Pokémon
Abilities: Insomnia / Levitate
Description: It sucks other Pokémon's blood in order to feed its larvae. Once it has sucked blood enough its belly turns red.
Moves: Leech Life, Crunch, Drain Punch, Shadow Punch, Agility, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolved from Mostug at Lv21.

Comments: I really like this one, its name comes from "hemo-" or "haemo-" meaning blood (as in hemorrhage) and mosquito. Its eyes and wings need improving.
Palettes: Gengar, Tentacool - Tentacruel, Yanmega


05 - ???

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Spoiler:
Name: ???
Type(s): Bug / Flying
Species: Fly Pokémon
Abilities: Compound Eyes
Description: None.
Moves: Giga Drain, Drain Punch, Shadow Punch, Lock-On, Agility, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolved from Larvug at Lv11.

Comments: None.
Palettes: Yanmega, Tentacool - Tentacruel, Umbreon


06 - ???

& (by me) --> & (by me)

Spoiler:
Name: ??? - Shelfly
Type(s): Bug / Steel
Species: Shell Pokémon
Abilities: Sturdy / Swarm
Description: It's hard shell protects it from predators, it feeds with leaves while it awaits for evolution.
Moves: Iron Defense, Toxic Spikes, Pin Missile, Harden, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolves into Camoufly at Lv27.

Comments: This one's the best so far, it is based on an insect I saw yesterday. Don't know what it was but it was cute.
Palettes: Shelgon


07 - Camoufly

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Spoiler:
Name: Camoufly
Type(s): Bug / Flying
Species: Leaf Pokémon
Abilities: Sturdy / Swarm
Description: None.
Moves: Camouflage, Razor Wind, Silver Wind, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolved from Shelfly at Lv27.

Comments: Same as below.
Palettes: Umbreon, Houndour - Houndoom


09 - ???

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Spoiler:
Name: ???
Type(s): Water / Posion
Species: Finger Pokémon
Abilities: Poison Point / Poison Heal
Description: None.
Moves: Fling, Poison Sting, Tickle, etc.
Evolution Chain: Does not evolve.

Comments: This one turned out well.
Palettes: Parasect


10 - ???
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Spoiler:
Name: ???
Type(s): Water / Ice
Species: Skii Pokémon
Abilities: Quick Feet / Swift Swim
Description: Scientists discovered its cell composition to be similar to the one of tear drops, its conductivity decreases or increases depending on its mood.
Moves: Agility, Aqua Jet, Fake Tears, Hail, Rain Dance, Icy Wind, etc.
Evolution Chain: Does not evolve.

Comments: It was made in a Laptop WITHOUT A MOUSE! Imagine the horror...
Palettes: Manaphy


12 - Dodo


Spoiler:
Name: Dodo
Type(s): Normal / Flying
Species: Small Bird Pokémon
Abilities: Run Away / Early Bird
Description: Though it has small legs it can fastly run away from possible predators.
Moves: Pin Missile, Spikes, Peck, Drill Peck, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolves into Doduo at Lv15.

Comments: Based on kiwi birds.
Palettes: Doduo


13 - Pavidisus


Spoiler:
Name: Pavidisus
Type(s): Grass / Flying
Species: Paradise Pokémon
Abilities: Chlorophyll
Description: It's beautiful crest is said to bring happiness to anyone who touches it.
Moves: Razor Leaf, Wing Attack, Agility, Drill Peck, Peck, etc.
Evolution Chain: Does not evolve.

Comments: It's based on bird of paradise plant.
Palettes: Dustox, Shiftry, Blastoise, custom blue by me.


Other

Spoiler:
Fusions / Recolors / Etc:

Revamps:
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

My sprite showcase (w/Fakemon).
Male
Mexico
Seen August 15th, 2009
Posted July 30th, 2009
28 posts
13.9 Years
Added another Fakemon:
It's an anemone ( Water / Posion ), it can use its "tentacles" as fingers so it can learn elemental punches.




I've received no comments so far, but that hasn't let me down. I'll keep adding sprites, see you everybody.
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

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Eos Aduro

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The number 8 one looks like an Ambush Bug, sort of! And they concepts are good, but there are a few things you may want to rework.

The left leg of the first sprite appears to be unconnected to the body, moving it to be aligned with the right leg may work.

The body of the Larvug appears 2 dimensional because of the shading.

The tip of Mostugs nose blends a little bit too much with its hand, maybe give it a darker outline. And its body also needs different shading.

The Ambush bug thing needs darker outlines, but its a great sprite nonetheless.

All of your spiritng is excellent still, but I found those things to be issues if you wanted to improve the sprites.
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They;re weird looking (in a good way) but I love the coloring and shading. Its also great how you named the Pokemon that you use to create those fakemon. My favorite one is number 09


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Mostug is my favourite, but how come only one of his hands has
an arm, and the other is floating?
I think the arm is his nose
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Esper

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Seen June 30th, 2018
Posted June 30th, 2018
Your Camoufly is pretty monochromatic. Give it a little more color. And the line down the back seems awkwardly straight. Wouldn't it be rounder?

#9 looked like a heart, then I saw it's tiny, tiny eyes. Could it have bigger, more noticeable eyes? I like it's tiny, tiny legs, though. Go figure.
Male
Mexico
Seen August 15th, 2009
Posted July 30th, 2009
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13.9 Years
Thanks everyone for your comments.

The number 8 one looks like an Ambush Bug, sort of! And they concepts are good, but there are a few things you may want to rework.

The left leg of the first sprite appears to be unconnected to the body, moving it to be aligned with the right leg may work.

The body of the Larvug appears 2 dimensional because of the shading.

The tip of Mostugs nose blends a little bit too much with its hand, maybe give it a darker outline. And its body also needs different shading.

The Ambush bug thing needs darker outlines, but its a great sprite nonetheless.

All of your spiritng is excellent still, but I found those things to be issues if you wanted to improve the sprites.
Thank for the advice!

Right now I made a few changes to 08, the "ambush" bug.
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Mostug is my favourite, but how come only one of his hands has
an arm, and the other is floating?
I think the arm is his nose
Yeah, the "arm" is its nose. I'll take Eos Aduro's advice and give it a darker outline. The hands float because it's supposed to be a ghost like Haunter or something.


Your Camoufly is pretty monochromatic. Give it a little more color. And the line down the back seems awkwardly straight. Wouldn't it be rounder?

#9 looked like a heart, then I saw it's tiny, tiny eyes. Could it have bigger, more noticeable eyes? I like it's tiny, tiny legs, though. Go figure.
I agree it's monochromatic. I'm working on Camoufly's sprite right now; it's wings (back) became a headache.
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

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Mexico
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Posted July 30th, 2009
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to make it seem more noticable u could try taking a leaf out of haunter's book and try outlining the hands
like this

Just a suggestion
Thanks, I'm working on Mostug right now. In the meantime, I made this new Fakemon.



Name: ???
Type(s): Water / Ice
Species: Skii Pokémon
Abilities: Quick Feet / Swift Swim
Description: Its body has a similar structure to water, it can blend with it during rain or hailstorms.
Moves: Agility, Aqua Jet, Fake Tears, Hail, Rain Dance, Icy Wind, etc.

Comments: It has the shape of a tear drop but it also has skii feet.
Palettes: Manaphy
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

My sprite showcase (w/Fakemon).
Male
Mexico
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Posted July 30th, 2009
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13.9 Years
NEW! I made this fusion of Metang, Foretress and Venonat.


NEW! Mostug sprite was remade from scratch, this one's better and even proffesional looking! I'm proud of myself.

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As you can see it's wings resemble those of Hemosquito and it's shading improved, its pose changed (obviously). Tell me what you think?
Name: Richie
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Xatoku

Game Developer

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Canada
Seen April 16th, 2013
Posted February 23rd, 2013
451 posts
14.2 Years
NEW! I made this fusion of Metang, Foretress and Venonat.


NEW! Mostug sprite was remade from scratch, this one's better and even proffesional looking! I'm proud of myself.

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As you can see it's wings resemble those of Hemosquito and it's shading improved, its pose changed (obviously). Tell me what you think?
The hands are what made it look better, and the hands aren't even yours. Perhaps don't try to pull off calling Nintendo's Haunter's Hands your own. The sprite itself IMO still needs some work too, the end of the body is all jagged and I'm still finding it hard too see the mosquito portion of him, except for the stinger/nose. 3/5 but 2/5 cuz of the stolen hands.
Male
Mexico
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Posted July 30th, 2009
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The hands are what made it look better, and the hands aren't even yours. Perhaps don't try to pull off calling Nintendo's Haunter's Hands your own. The sprite itself IMO still needs some work too, the end of the body is all jagged and I'm still finding it hard too see the mosquito portion of him, except for the stinger/nose. 3/5 but 2/5 cuz of the stolen hands.
Haunter had three fingers.
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They look similar but that's because I copied shading and fingers in the right hand.
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

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Xatoku

Game Developer

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Posted February 23rd, 2013
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14.2 Years
Haunter had three fingers.
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They look similar but that's because I copied shading and fingers in the right hand.
That's exactly my point though lol. You said you had made him 100%, so I think atleast Gamefreak/Nintendo whoever disserves some credit.
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That's exactly my point though lol. You said you had made him 100%, so I think atleast Gamefreak/Nintendo whoever disserves some credit.
Oh. I'll give credit for the fingers then.

I made a new version of the sprite, Haunter's hand glow was removed (didn't liked it too much), the hands were re-made to be less Haunter-like, and the end of the body was made less jagged.

(by me) --> (by PBFHDude) --> (by me / Nintendo*) --> (by me)
*Right fingers from Haunter
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

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Mexico
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Posted July 30th, 2009
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NEW! Made a fusion of Houndoom, Mightyena and Torkoal. Recolored as Blaziken.


NEW! Larvug's got a new evolution, it's the Fly Pokémon:


Name: ???
Type(s): Bug / Flying
Species: Fly Pokémon
Abilities: Compound Eyes
Description: None.
Moves: Giga Drain, Drain Punch, Shadow Punch, Lock-On, Agility, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolved from Larvug at Lv11.

Comments: None.
Palettes: Yanmega, Tentacool - Tentacruel, Umbreon

NEW! Improved Mostug, better shading.



NEW! Improved Larvug, new pose, better shading, new colors.

Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

My sprite showcase (w/Fakemon).
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Mexico
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Posted July 30th, 2009
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13.9 Years
NEW! Marowak's RB revamp.



NEW! Two new Pokémon: Doduo pre-evo and Paradise Pokémon, Pavidisus.



Name: Dodo
Type(s): Normal / Flying
Species: Small Bird Pokémon
Abilities: Run Away / Early Bird
Description: Though it has small legs it can fastly run away from possible predators.
Moves: Pin Missile, Spikes, Peck, Drill Peck, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolves into Doduo at Lv15.

Comments: Based on kiwi birds.
Palettes: Doduo



Name: Pavidisus
Type(s): Grass / Flying
Species: Paradise Pokémon
Abilities: Chlorophyll
Description: It's beautiful crest is said to bring happiness to anyone who touches it.
Moves: Razor Leaf, Wing Attack, Agility, Drill Peck, Peck, etc.
Evolution Chain: Does not evolve.

Comments: It's based on bird of paradise plant.
Palettes: Dustox, Shiftry, Blastoise, custom blue by me.
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

My sprite showcase (w/Fakemon).
Male
Mexico
Seen August 15th, 2009
Posted July 30th, 2009
28 posts
13.9 Years
NEW! Three new Pokémon, tell me whay do you think?



Name: ???
Type(s): Normal / Flying
Species: Hatchling Pokémon
Abilities: Early Bird
Description: N/A.
Moves: Rollout, Fake Tears, Peck, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolves when exposed to a Reaper Cloth.

Comments: Aw.
Palettes: Poochyena, Murkrow, Clefable, Togetic



Name: Pavidisus
Type(s): Ghost / Flying
Species: Scavenger Pokémon
Abilities: Pressure
Description: N/A.
Moves: Shadow Ball, Pain Split, Drill Peck, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolved.

Comments: None.
Palettes: Poochyena, Umbreon, Clefable, Togetic



Name: ???
Type(s): Normal / Fighting
Species: Punching Pokémon
Abilities: Iron Fist
Description: N/A.
Moves: Fire Punch, Mach Punch, Spit Up, Close Combat, etc.
Evolution Chain: Evolved from ???.

Comments: None.
Palettes: Slakoth, Slaking, Vigoroth
Name: Richie
Friend Code: 0130 8107 4717

My sprite showcase (w/Fakemon).