Ritchie's Fakemon

Ritchie · Jul 13, 2009

I've started spriting days ago and here is my work, (10 sprites, 4 Fakemon). Note that these Fakemon were created / thought / imagined by me so don't steal them or use them somewhere else.

01 - ???

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02 - Larvug

♀ & ♂ (by me) -->

♀ & ♂ (by me)

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03 - Mostug

♀ (by me) -->

♀ (by PBFHDude) -->

♀ (by me / Nintendo*) -->

♀ (by me) -->

♀ (by me)
*Right fingers from Haunter's DP Sprite.

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04 - Hemosquito

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05 - ???

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06 - ???

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♀ & ♂ (by me)

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07 - Camoufly

♀ & ♂

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09 - ???

♀ & ♂

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10 - ???

♀ & ♂

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12 - Dodo

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13 - Pavidisus

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Other

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Ritchie · Jul 16, 2009

Added another Fakemon:

It's an anemone ( Water / Posion ), it can use its "tentacles" as fingers so it can learn elemental punches.

I've received no comments so far, but that hasn't let me down. I'll keep adding sprites, see you everybody.

Hyperpulse · Jul 17, 2009

Although some of them are shaped a bit strangely, these are really good!
I like the ideas put into these Fakemon. Keep up the good work!

Eos Aduro · Jul 17, 2009

The number 8 one looks like an Ambush Bug, sort of! And they concepts are good, but there are a few things you may want to rework.

The left leg of the first sprite appears to be unconnected to the body, moving it to be aligned with the right leg may work.

The body of the Larvug appears 2 dimensional because of the shading.

The tip of Mostugs nose blends a little bit too much with its hand, maybe give it a darker outline. And its body also needs different shading.

The Ambush bug thing needs darker outlines, but its a great sprite nonetheless.

All of your spiritng is excellent still, but I found those things to be issues if you wanted to improve the sprites.

Hyperpulse · Jul 17, 2009

Camufly's shading is a bit 2d, just thought I should point it out.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ · Jul 17, 2009

They;re weird looking (in a good way) but I love the coloring and shading. Its also great how you named the Pokemon that you use to create those fakemon. My favorite one is number 09

:t354:TG

Vyro · Jul 17, 2009

my personal favorite is the metal bug thing(number 8)

Hyperpulse · Jul 17, 2009

Mostug is my favourite, but how come only one of his hands has
an arm, and the other is floating?

PBFHDude · Jul 17, 2009

Hyperpulse said:
Mostug is my favourite, but how come only one of his hands has
an arm, and the other is floating?

I think the arm is his nose

toastx2009 · Jul 17, 2009

AWESOME!

These sprites are pretty nice. One of the best ones I've seen all week! I like the mosquito Pokemon, no one I know never came up with that!

Esper · Jul 17, 2009

Your Camoufly is pretty monochromatic. Give it a little more color. And the line down the back seems awkwardly straight. Wouldn't it be rounder?

#9 looked like a heart, then I saw it's tiny, tiny eyes. Could it have bigger, more noticeable eyes? I like it's tiny, tiny legs, though. Go figure.

postmaster · Jul 18, 2009

How do I put imge here...

someone could help me...I don't now how put image

Ben. · Jul 18, 2009

numer 9 is my faviorite looks cool
i wish it was mine :'(
anyway are you using them in a game?

Ritchie · Jul 19, 2009

Thanks everyone for your comments.

Eos Aduro said:
The number 8 one looks like an Ambush Bug, sort of! And they concepts are good, but there are a few things you may want to rework.

The left leg of the first sprite appears to be unconnected to the body, moving it to be aligned with the right leg may work.

The body of the Larvug appears 2 dimensional because of the shading.

The tip of Mostugs nose blends a little bit too much with its hand, maybe give it a darker outline. And its body also needs different shading.

The Ambush bug thing needs darker outlines, but its a great sprite nonetheless.

All of your spiritng is excellent still, but I found those things to be issues if you wanted to improve the sprites.

Thank for the advice!

Right now I made a few changes to 08, the "ambush" bug.

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Hyperpulse said:
Mostug is my favourite, but how come only one of his hands has
an arm, and the other is floating?

PBFHDude said:
I think the arm is his nose

Yeah, the "arm" is its nose. I'll take Eos Aduro's advice and give it a darker outline. The hands float because it's supposed to be a ghost like Haunter or something.

Scarf said:
Your Camoufly is pretty monochromatic. Give it a little more color. And the line down the back seems awkwardly straight. Wouldn't it be rounder?

#9 looked like a heart, then I saw it's tiny, tiny eyes. Could it have bigger, more noticeable eyes? I like it's tiny, tiny legs, though. Go figure.

I agree it's monochromatic. I'm working on Camoufly's sprite right now; it's wings (back) became a headache.

doesn't matter · Jul 19, 2009

postmaster said:
How do I put imge here...

someone could help me...I don't now how put image

First off, this isn't your thread to put images in, and secondly, you need to have at least 15 posts to be able to put images in your posts.

PBFHDude · Jul 19, 2009

to make it seem more noticable u could try taking a leaf out of haunter's book and try outlining the hands
like this

Just a suggestion

Ritchie · Jul 20, 2009

PBFHDude said:
to make it seem more noticable u could try taking a leaf out of haunter's book and try outlining the hands
like this

Just a suggestion

Thanks, I'm working on Mostug right now. In the meantime, I made this new Fakemon.

Name: ???
Type(s): Water / Ice
Species: Skii Pokémon
Abilities: Quick Feet / Swift Swim
Description: Its body has a similar structure to water, it can blend with it during rain or hailstorms.
Moves: Agility, Aqua Jet, Fake Tears, Hail, Rain Dance, Icy Wind, etc.

Comments: It has the shape of a tear drop but it also has skii feet.
Palettes: Manaphy

Ritchie · Jul 21, 2009

NEW! I made this fusion of Metang, Foretress and Venonat.

NEW! Mostug sprite was remade from scratch, this one's better and even proffesional looking! I'm proud of myself.

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As you can see it's wings resemble those of Hemosquito and it's shading improved, its pose changed (obviously). Tell me what you think?

Xatoku · Jul 21, 2009

Ritchie said:
NEW! I made this fusion of Metang, Foretress and Venonat.

NEW! Mostug sprite was remade from scratch, this one's better and even proffesional looking! I'm proud of myself.

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As you can see it's wings resemble those of Hemosquito and it's shading improved, its pose changed (obviously). Tell me what you think?

The hands are what made it look better, and the hands aren't even yours. Perhaps don't try to pull off calling Nintendo's Haunter's Hands your own. The sprite itself IMO still needs some work too, the end of the body is all jagged and I'm still finding it hard too see the mosquito portion of him, except for the stinger/nose. 3/5 but 2/5 cuz of the stolen hands.

Ritchie · Jul 21, 2009

Xatoku said:
The hands are what made it look better, and the hands aren't even yours. Perhaps don't try to pull off calling Nintendo's Haunter's Hands your own. The sprite itself IMO still needs some work too, the end of the body is all jagged and I'm still finding it hard too see the mosquito portion of him, except for the stinger/nose. 3/5 but 2/5 cuz of the stolen hands.

Haunter had three fingers.

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They look similar but that's because I copied shading and fingers in the right hand.

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