the sanny collection!!

Started by sanny the hedgehog July 22nd, 2009 12:27 PM
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Age 27
Male
Anywhere but here
Seen May 20th, 2013
Posted May 19th, 2013
587 posts
15.1 Years
yeah just a bunch of art i has made over a period of time
EDIT: AH HAH YES!!! 300 VIEWS! do you know what this is? THIS IS MADNESS!!!
THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
most recent:
well guys its been FOREVER since i last posted here.
but its okay i have more and BETTER stuff.

awesome sonic.
awesome
what else?

just a girl i drew.

star wars themed guy i drew for my friend

CLASS DISMISSED!!
and i wish you all a very merry christmas.

a sanny the hedgehog thing i drew also outta boredom.

a femme sonic i drew

well thats just about it for now. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!

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tell me what you think of it and be sure to check out the rest of the gallery!!
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[IMG] its mega man (and used to be my avatar)
[IMG]a picture of link i drew awhile back
[IMG]its-a me mario!!


yeah and thats all im posting for now and theres always the sonic that i drew in my sig so also look at that!
yeah and thats it for now!
hope you like it!!
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seeker

Ireland
Seen November 1st, 2019
Posted May 20th, 2018
10,593 posts
14.1 Years
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Okay first off you shouldn't draw a notebook. I would advise you to get a sketch book because it's hard to draw on as the pages are very thin. As well as the fact a lot of colours go through the page and what not. Aquire a sketch pad.
To the crit:
First of all you have very little shading. While this is not a bad drawing it lacks a lot of depth. Your outline is way to dark. Try making it look a little more subtle. Saying that your outline on the rgiht hand side is much lighter than the outline on the left and on the right the outline is fine. The head maybe needs a slight lift off the body as it looks like he has no neck. The face is drawn well and it is majorly a good drawing. The dark blue you are using is a bit rough so i'd advise usong softer colours.Also clean up your out lines. I can still see lines that shouldn't be there. The page itself also needs a run over with the rubber.

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Well the first thing i noticed about this is that Links head is slightly big for his body. Next is your lines, you should clean them up big time.. It looks a bit like you scribbled over your drawing. Besides that the drawing itself isn't too bad just work on the dimensions and make it a little less retangular. When you are drawing try to picture a real person or how the character would look in real life rather than basing it off the in game character. If you ever look at concept are of characters it's a lot more in depth and natural that then the in game character.
For example if you look at pokemon sprites then look ay Ken Sigamori's art there is a major difference.

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The quality in your drawing takes a dramatic leap here. This drawing is great. The shading you did on the upper part of mairo looks extremely well but as you down say twirds the jacket the shading isn't so great. The jacket is very plian. Try adding a pocket and such to it then you can add shading and viola you have life.Hands need to be workes on. The hand touching the hat is very big and messy where as the other hand is very small and skinny. I also think the legs could have a slight width increse but it's not ruining the drwing or anything.The text is nice again it just needs a slight touch up. It's very bold.
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Meh i wouldn't be mad about this.. It looks like a bunch of scribbles bit to be honest it's more the way you presented the individual letters. They are kinda smushed so i cant see them at all.. I can make out about 4 letters. I sugest redoing each letter big and on a sereate page each. It's just a little messy though i think if you did as i sugested and took your time these could be a nice little set. Try not to go out of the confounds of graffeti and into script wrinting as these just look like someones hand writing in places. So study a little more about graffeti and see different styles and i'm sure you'll get the hang of it.

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It's readable which i like. though the black ruins in for me.. Have you seen a lot of black graffeti? It's generally colourfull. Remember it is art, art isn't all black. Not bad though the lettes are nice and readable though again it is a little messy. You need to fill n the with dots here and there and make the letters stand out a bit more.


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Wow i like the colouring in this! It's a smashing drawing! The original outlines need to br rubbed out. So you need to clean up around The edges. Mario's head is a little big though thats the only thing. I think it could have been about a centimetre smaller all around but not too bad well done

Overall your drawings are above average. For your age the mario is very good and the other drawings are pretty cool too.
Things to work on:
Shading
Graffiti
Outlines
Colours

Things to buy:
More colours (perhaps)
A sketch pad
Age 27
Male
Anywhere but here
Seen May 20th, 2013
Posted May 19th, 2013
587 posts
15.1 Years
okay sorry my bad the first few pics were on lined paper and i do have a sketch pad
another thing the graffiti letters are supposed to be like that. smushed together is the main idea, and it was done in about five seconds. so thats why it really sucked, its not the best i could do. and about the lighting, you see i dont have a scanner so thats why the lighting is terrible. (sorry thats partly my fault for being to lazy to get one, ahh well whatever. and i could use some more colors or just use gimp and be cheap, but i'd never do that. the reason i dont have that many colors is cause im kinda tight on money right now)
see heres another example for graffiti

well its not exactly the same type of graffiti but you get the idea
and if you cant figure out what the word is, its the word coach.
but yeah thanks for the review, could use some advice!

The text is nice again it just needs a slight touch up. It's very bold
and one more thing, the text is bold because thats they way its supposed to be.
but hey its okay, you didn't know. (i think)
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Skip Class

previously zappyspiker, but rainbow keeps trying to get me to skip class

Age 28
Female
New Zealand
Seen July 7th, 2021
Posted July 24th, 2020
4,713 posts
14.8 Years
Man I love Sonic, you made it look really good! And I could tell it was Zero Gravity before I even read it. I agree with you, Zero-G wasn't the greatest game - I liked the 1st one better


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