*Sips Tea* This is My Gallery~

Started by ReyRey-Pyon July 31st, 2009 11:40 AM
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ReyRey-Pyon

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Age 29
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Posted January 5th, 2012
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So here we go, most recent first
Spoiler:

this is what happens when i attempt backgrounds ._.


SHO MINAMIMOTO~ (The world ends with you)


Shinji


Lucian~


Soul; (HGSS Heroine)


Silver



Zoey Spectrum, an OC i made for a roleplay on another site >.>;;



no i do not plan on coloring it
im lazeh


whatever, comments and critique are greatly appreciated <3

ShinjisLover

Seen May 11th, 2016
Posted July 5th, 2010
3,043 posts
14.5 Years
Unlike the previous, I will give good, constructive critique. Consider it a. . Gift from one Shinji fan to another.

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It seems like you can draw more realistic-looking faces very well at a glance. Upon further inspection, this seems to be true, except for the obvious anime mouth, of course. As for precision, the pigtails could stand to be a bit longer. Looking at a picture of Soul, her pigtails go way past the shoulders.



Chibi Silver! <3 The lines on his jacket seem rather shaky. And most of the strands of hair on his head (down by his shoulders) don't connect with each other. But who can resist those cute eyes?



This one is much more well done. Evil Silver. >=3 I actually can't find anything wrong with it. ^^" Oh, God, my eyes are failing me! TT 3TT



This is just too cute. The shoulders could stand to be bigger, though. Much bigger.


↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions
Wow! ^^ Someone has actually wowed me. Great job. =3 I came here looking for Shinji! >=( WHERE IS HE!!?

ReyRey-Pyon

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surprisingly
i've only really attempted to draw shinji a few times
but i gave up because i wasn't too happy with the results
*crunch* i add it to the heap ;3; /hit

i'll attemp it again someday /gazes towards sunset


thank for the critique and all that good stuff lmfao :D

~(ouo)b

ReyRey-Pyon

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i am not familiar with this
can someone tell me if im doing this "update" thing correctly? /hit



Lolz Chibi lucian <:'DDD



YES <3
though im not completely satisfied with the results D;


also not very happy with the results, specifically the hair, but oh well



a request from a friend
i added a little something to the background
speaking of backgrounds ._. this is what happens when i try to draw a background
thats a field of daisies btw D;

i was on a roll today :D

WOOT

{Swan}

I Never Asked For This.

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Posted October 8th, 2015
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I shall pull a Shinji's Lover here and add some criticism.

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The legs kind of look like they are floating. If you wanted to let it look like he's sitting the feel should have been bigger and more forward..
The three fingered hands are kind of a pet peeve of mine, but the drawing still looks cute <3 Also I love the way you drew the glasses.
Overall, it's adorable.



The jaw seems majorly misplaced. It should tip inward quite so much. Also the mouth should have been a little bit more to the left. Remember that a mouth is right under the nose, even if he's pulling it like that ><

What I do like is the hair and eyes. The eyes are really dark and well shaded in my opinion. Hair has always been kind of my thing so I pay a lot of attention to it and I like the way you did it here.



The hair is actually not that bad here.

The (my) left hand looks like it has three fingers O_O There should have been more tips showing unless you were going for the alien look xD Which is cool with me. also you could have added a bulge in the pocket of the shirt where his hand is and the hand should have been thicker. I am not sure if you were going for the wrist or the hand that is just sticking out between the end of the sleeve and the pocket, but it looks like it should have been the hand and its waaay to thin in comparison with the (my) left hand.

What I do like is the overal clothing and the feet. I'm missing the eyebrows, the brow seems too empty, btu the rest of the head is good too.




first off the underarms. If you are going for the rounded look go for it on both sides. Now it looks with the top going inward and the bottom going outward that there's something wrong with her arms. Also, you need a little bit more of a wrist.
The (my) right leg seems way thinner than the left one, and it should have been the thickness of the left. The left foot also seems off. Skirt also seems to be a bit too uni-length with the folds.

Once again I like the hair and the jacket. I like her expression too =]

Cloche

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I really like your style. The Lucian one makes me Squee like a fangirl, so it's my favorite one, along with Silver. XD
I love how you use different line widths, it gives it more detail in my personal opinion.
Keep up your great work!

ReyRey-Pyon

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they all look the same.
Or is that me?
what?

I assume your talking about my cartoon-ish style
which in response, there isn't much i can vary other than eye style
and maybe how chubby i make the character
plus i drew everything with a mouse, my hand hurts, and i tend to draw at night/early in the morning

but im just making assumptions
you didn't even tell me what looked the same about it, much less which style you thought looked similar.
obviously Zoey Spectrum and Chibi!Lucian look nothing alike.
helpful; that post is not.

congratulations
now im going to be thinking about this all day because you didn't bother to post any details
when someone points out a flaw in my work
i kinda expect them to at least tell me what they mean by that, and to be a little more helpful ._.

ReyRey-Pyon

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/rolls around

lol pic dump
So i was working on a new style,
well, just the "fayses"
and i thought they came out really cute, so i started making more



My, nuff said


Rick; from the "Harvest Moon" series


Gary EFFING OAK


Shinji lol


JUUUUNN
which is my favorite by far compared to the others u_u lolsuckycoloringjob

But then i decided the coloring i used sucks
And i ALWAYS wanted to try a coloring style like thiiiiss:




so lmfao
I really liked how it came out, <3
so clean and simple and JSKODHFKLJSDFH ;U; I really love the results eue


not so sure about how i did him though

SO YAYYY

New style, woooooo
i might re do all the older ones in the cleaner style *u*
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ahhhh Misa Amane, from DN, good Ol' days of watching that anime I really miss it. The coloring is really done well. But her cheeks seem to be uneven (or is it me)


:t354:TG

Friend Code: 3136-6961-3807 Friend Safari:Steel: Metang, Magneton and Klefi

Juu-Chan

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OMG
yay


//clears throat
Now, because I am an unhelpful person who really has too much time on her hands, my critiques and opinion shall be all smushed into the one big comment and and
chances are there won't even be critiques
I'm unhelpful, remember? :\

hgubk,uygubhk I love your style
I love it !!
I want to marry eet
it's all cute and chibilike
yay

prettygirlwithflowersandpinkandbackgroundandstuffsandgoombaofsorts:. eu, a female
oooh
she looks so happy
its contagious
now im happy
//lalalalala~
backgrounds are ghey
I love the design, its so pretty
her little ankle socks X33
and teh her, all wavy

i think however (and dont heed much attention to me, cuz i cant draw anywhere near like this) the pose is a little awkward : \ Just the way she's balancing. I think she'd be kinda prone to falling over
But apart from that, is awesome
i especially love how much detail you put into the sun

SHINJI-KUUN~<33:. oooh, it's like he's eyeballing right at me...He looks so cute !! (like that's helpful) okay, this picture is obviously awesome
due to its shinjiness and shinjifullness
I love the overall design, especially the hair *W* Only criticism is the lines are a little shaky

DUDE:. What the other person said about the mouth and such is the only critique I can give ^^; //triesonhat

Lucian~:. OMFG
Yes
Yessu
Adorable, he looks surprisingly well in chibi-style
I love teh lil' espeon~ //somuchcute
his expression is X33 also~

QueenOfHearts:. Wow. Just...wow. I love everything, EVERYTHING !! :0 The design, the pose, the expression the lulzness. I want to draw liek yooou~

SilverpicsOfAwesomeness:.
Nu
Now you just make me want him >.<

RandomChibiHeads:. OMFG they are teh cuteness !! They're so adorable like...little cupcakes or something...okay, i shouldn't be allowed to talk >.<
the jun one is mine yes?
yes
i thought so

Misaaa~:. i didn't request this in my sleep, did i? Death Note fan. Misa Fan. made of win. you should draw her surrounded by little rainbows and smiley-faces
=333

Well, thar ya go. I just wasted few minutes of your life and spammed up your page with stupid unhelpful comments :S I can't help it !! When it comes to good art I have to make long comments even if they are madeoffailplz (I need a Deviantart account...)
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