Do you like it?

Started by Kalak August 4th, 2009 12:33 AM
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Bethel Park, Pa
Seen August 11th, 2010
Posted April 22nd, 2010
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13.8 Years
Hey, I'm new here, and I was drawn in by the fanfic forums. I was wondering...I already have the beginning of my story, and was wondering if anybody wanted to offer suggestions/criticisim. feedback please! you can find a link to the story in my signature.
Suddenly, when things seemed pretty hopeless, Kira heard a voice say:

“Shinx, use bite on it!” Then, the voice’s owner stepped out of the trees and Kira was stunned to see Kalak, especially commanding a Pokémon
(Please give my Pokemon story a read! You can find it here!