Can You Guys Critique My New Drawings

Started by Cerese912 August 7th, 2009 8:26 PM
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Age 28
Miami
Seen September 11th, 2010
Posted March 27th, 2010
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These are my new drawings I did in the past two weeks. I've improved since the last time I made a thread. These pictures are based on a story I'm about to write. I have the basic storyline in my head.

















This is what happens when I'm bored playing around with paint on my computer. This is a old drawing btw.



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Age 29
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Posted August 18th, 2009
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You're quite talented. A much finer artist than myself! ;)
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Age 31
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Posted November 17th, 2009
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Yeah, these are pretty nice. To improve, i'd reccommend working on Anatomy and proportions, there are plenty of tutorials on the net and deviantart for that kinda thing.

Also, a little thing to think about, hands are about the same size as your face, if you put yours up to your face, you'll see. :3 so yeah, make them a little larger than you do at the moment and you'll soon be even better than now! :3

ooh, if you're feeling advernturous, why not even try drawing from various angles on their faces theyre all facing forwards besides one, so maybe a new angle would be interesting for you too!

from these i can see you're talented, and you have a really wonderful creative mind, so keep it up, keep working at it and you'll definatly be a name to remember! :3!

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Age 28
Miami
Seen September 11th, 2010
Posted March 27th, 2010
63 posts
14.2 Years
You're quite talented. A much finer artist than myself! ;)
Yeah, these are pretty nice. To improve, i'd reccommend working on Anatomy and proportions, there are plenty of tutorials on the net and deviantart for that kinda thing.

Also, a little thing to think about, hands are about the same size as your face, if you put yours up to your face, you'll see. :3 so yeah, make them a little larger than you do at the moment and you'll soon be even better than now! :3

ooh, if you're feeling advernturous, why not even try drawing from various angles on their faces theyre all facing forwards besides one, so maybe a new angle would be interesting for you too!

from these i can see you're talented, and you have a really wonderful creative mind, so keep it up, keep working at it and you'll definatly be a name to remember! :3!


Thanks you guys. *blush*
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Part of the Eevee Fanclub!
My FC is 3051-3530-7652. Contact me if you want to do something.
Check out my designs on

Spoiler:


I love making AMVs and Parodies! Check them out!

Age 31
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Bronx, New York
Seen September 4th, 2014
Posted September 4th, 2014
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17.3 Years
I think at first you should make a lighter outline so if you mess up, you can always erase your mistakes. But the outline is way too dark, I think you should lighten it up for some of the pictures


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