A Letter To The Media....

Started by Kyosuke October 4th, 2004 4:23 PM
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Kyosuke

.·Simple Complexity

Age 34
Pickering, On
Seen August 8th, 2018
Posted May 17th, 2014
2,485 posts
19.7 Years
This is a poem that I thought of, after getting so fed up with the way society and the media, telling teens how to act in life.


You paint our faces and put on our clothes,
You make our personality and invent our roles,


You silence our voices,
You don't see us calling,
You don't see out fears.


You control our self-esteem and kill us inside,
You've destroyed us enough now we want to guide.


See our ways, ours souls, what's real,
From now on we'll decide how we feel.


We'll show you how we really are,
Your image of us has gone much too far.
"Life isn't perfect, but sometimes you have to make the best of it."

After 7 years, Xbox Live is Still Amazing

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Kyosuke

.·Simple Complexity

Age 34
Pickering, On
Seen August 8th, 2018
Posted May 17th, 2014
2,485 posts
19.7 Years
Thanks, I really didn't know what to think of it as any good, but just me trying.
"Life isn't perfect, but sometimes you have to make the best of it."

After 7 years, Xbox Live is Still Amazing

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Kyosuke

.·Simple Complexity

Age 34
Pickering, On
Seen August 8th, 2018
Posted May 17th, 2014
2,485 posts
19.7 Years
Lol, works for me I didn't really think it was even a 7/10 I was thinking more of a 4 XP.
"Life isn't perfect, but sometimes you have to make the best of it."

After 7 years, Xbox Live is Still Amazing

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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
1,912 posts
18.6 Years
I like it, LT! I think the flow could use a bit of work, but the true meaning of the poem stands out perfectly, and that is one of the most important qualities in a poem, for without the meaning, a poem means nothing. Great job. ^_~

~Kelsey
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Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~