Peom recommeded for some of the older kids

Started by Rave Master October 6th, 2004 2:27 PM
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Age 31
Wisconsin
Seen November 14th, 2005
Posted March 3rd, 2005
44 posts
18.6 Years
here is a peom i made up, not recommeded for young kids:

here it is:

There is a bobcat in a mountain
A bird in a tree

I drink a mountain dew
then i take a pee

Gunna go upstairs
Get myself some chow

Guna have some s*x
right about now

When u go upstairs
then u will see
a beautiful girl
doing it with me!

let me know what u think
G'bye all.
Age 35
Band room
Seen December 26th, 2005
Posted November 10th, 2004
329 posts
18.8 Years
x_x I can't tell you what I really think because there are young children about. But in short this is trash, sorry it just is. Its total dribble, a bastardization of a beautiful art form. A trained monkey could pump out something more meaningful given a typewriter and 20 minutes...
"We must carry war into every corner the enemy happens to carry it, to his home, to his centers of entertainment:a total war. It is neccesary to prevent him from having a moment of peace, a quiet moment outside his barracks or even inside; we must attack him wherever he may be, make him feel like a cornered beast wherever he may move. then his moral fiber shall begin to decline, but we shall notice how signs of decadence begin to disappear."- Che Guevara

"shoot, coward, you are only going to kill a man"-Ernesto "Che" Guevara