Pokémon Deeds of Darkness Page 2

Started by Haruka of Hoenn August 30th, 2009 9:35 AM
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I've been neglecting this thread :(



CHAPTER 5

That day, the ride home was long and bumpy. Sadie remained silent most of the time, listening to the hard rock music Officer Garrett was playing through the car's radio. She had never been a fan of rock, but Rena seemed to be enjoying it. Her best friend was mouthing the lyrics and snapping her fingers to the beat in a matter of minutes. Unlike Rena, Sadie preferred to stare out the window and watch the passing world. The windows of the car were tinted, which meant that Sadie could stare at someone with an unusual hairstyle or clothing for long periods of time without being noticed.

The thing Sadie liked about Officer Garrett was that he seemed like a good-natured guy. He wasn't the type to cause uncomfortable silences and gaps in conversation. Most of all, he didn't address her or Rena like two criminals, but rather like two normal young ladies. He occasionally paused the music to mutter a few words into his police radio, but other than that, he remained peacefully silent.

Almost there,” he grunted as they passed the 'Entering Route 202' sign. At this point, Rena leaned over to whisper to Sadie.

It's almost 3:00. We're actually gonna make it!” Rena's excitement was obvious. Sadie sighed.

For once, will we actually get through without getting in trouble? The very thought gave her hope.

Up ahead, Sadie could see the iron gates that guarded the northern entrance to Sandgem. But the gates were closed, and Sadie immediately knew something was wrong. Rena seemed to be catching on as well.

What idiot closed the gates?” she shouted over the music. Officer Garrett paused the CD, and scratched his chin. “So they're not usually closed at this time of day?”

No...” Sadie said. She tilted her head as far to the side as the window would allow, but she could not see past the trees that blocked the view. “How do we get in?”

We could climb a tree!” Rena suggested. “Wait, no we can't. Our bikes won't fit up there.”

It looked like Officer Garrett was preparing for a reply, but a sudden burst of static interrupted him. He lifted a walkie-talkie from his belt.

Hello? Officer Garrett here.”

Officer Garret!” said a frantic voice. “This is the chief. We're in Sandgem right now and I need you here immediately!”

The policeman chuckled. “I'm actually in front of the gates right now. But they're closed and there's no way for us to get in.”

Sorry about that. We had to close them for security reasons. I'll have a few city officials open them right now, and I'll give you all the details,” said the chief. Sadie exchanged a nervous look with Rena, but remained silent. All she could do was wonder.

About a minute later the gates slid open, revealing the aftermath of some terrible disaster. Police cars were everywhere, their flashing lights reflected by shards of broken glass sprinkled on the ground. Fire trucks were stationed here and there, their crews dousing the last bit of flames on crumbling buildings. People and their pokémon were being led out of their houses by paramedics. Gardens, signs, and paths were completely destroyed.

What happened here? Sadie cupped her hands over her gaping mouth.

Officer Garret made a sharp right turn, and entered a dead-end lane, stopping in front of Sadie's house. There stood a small group of officers along with a team of dogs. Officer Garrett stepped out of the care, and opened the door for the girls. Without a word, Sadie exited the car. The tears that welled up in her eyes had nothing to do with the smoky air. Her house was a ruin. Its windows were shattered, and the door hung loose from its only hinge.

A tall man distanced himself from the crowd to wave at Officer Garrett, who saluted immediately.

Hello, Chief.”

All right, Officer, I need you to...” his voice trailed off as his gaze fell on Sadie and Rena.

Who are they?” he asked.

I was driving these two girls home from Jubilife. They live here.”

The chief's eyes widened. He did not speak for a few seconds. “Well! Aren't you two lucky.”

What... what exactly happened here?” Sadie asked, her voice soft at first.

We don't know,” the chief shrugged. “Around noon, we got a call about a robbery in North Sandgem. Apparently the robber stole the person's pokémon and set fire to their house. Then, two minutes later, someone called about a robbery in South Sandgem. Same thing. Pokémon stolen, and fire. Then, another two minutes later, someone called about two missing girls.” There was a twinkle in his eye at the last sentence. “I see we have one of our problems solved.”

Sadie felt her cheeks flush as she thought of her mother. How can she be back from work so early?

Unfortunately,” the chief continued, “The caller was cut off before she could finish the conversation. We heard glass breaking, and then the phone falling to the floor. Our CSIs are still working on it.”

WHAT?” Sadie shouted with involuntary astonishment. “My mother! What happened to her?”

The chief shrugged sympathetically. “We got there in time. She suffered a head injury and a few broken ribs. But she should be fine now, she was airlifted to Oreburgh Central about an hour ago.”

Sadie shoulders sagged. What was I doing an hour ago? Enjoying myself with Rena while my mom was worried sick! And now she has to pay for my stupidity. Her vision was blurred by warm tears.

Sadie... I'm sorry,” Rena said slowly, but Sadie turned away.

Here, I'll show you the damage inside. Follow me,” said the chief. He turned to lead the way, but Sadie stepped ahead of him. The interior of her house was a mess. The furniture was dirty and displaced, and the TV screen was cracked. The carpet on the stairs was splattered with mud, and so were the walls.

This isn't my house... Sadie sighed. I don't care what they say... this isn't my house...

Sadie entered the kitchen, her fingertips sliding over the surface of the counter. The refrigerator was knocked on its side, and so was the table. The potted plants that stood near the small window were all over the tiled floor. The sink was still running. Gently, Sadie stepped over a fallen chair and shut off the flow of water.

Behind her, Rena was also exploring the scene. She was sitting in the exact same spot she had been in hours before, with a curious expression on her face. Sadie walked over to her, and Rena rose from her seat.

I'm really, honestly sorry about this Sadie. Maybe if we were there, we could have done something...”

Sadie sighed. “It's not your fault. Mom wouldn't have wanted us to be there when the house was being robbed. She'll be glad that we weren't hurt. At least, not physically.” Sadie allowed herself a smile. “I want to go see my room. To find out what they stole.”

Rena followed her to her room, where more destruction lay. Papers were scattered all over the floor, and her bed looked like someone had repeatedly jumped on it. Her books lay on the floor, most torn to pieces. The soft green paint of the walls was chipped and blackened. But Sadie's gaze remained fixed on the windowsill.

My pokémon!” she cried out, rushing to the opposite side of the room with her arms spread in front of her. A scream escaped from her lips when she realized that no pokéballs were there.

They took your pokémon!” Rena cried. “Wait... maybe they didn't check in your backpack! It's over there, look!”

Immediately, Sadie rushed to her backpack, which was carelessly thrown against a wall. She withdrew a single pokéball from the inside pocket and tossed it into the air.

Go!” she shrieked, nearly hysterical. The silhouette of her Luxio emerged with a flash of red light. The electric pokémon growled in confusion, darting back and forth across the room. Just before it reached the wall, Sadie returned him and withdrew another pokéball.

Go!” she yelled, and out came her Roselia. Just as the last bit of red light faded from its slender body, the pokémon was called back in. With a confused cry, Roselia was sucked back into the pokéball. Defeated, Sadie let her backpack fall in a lump beside her.

That's it,” she whispered.

Oh no, Sadie...” Rena was biting her lip. The two girls met in a hug.

I only have Luxio and Roselia left...” Sadie sobbed. “Cherubi, Wingull... all g-gone!”

Rena said nothing, but hugged her tighter. Before leaving the room, Sadie packed a few more things that were spared from the robber's attack. The only photo that wasn't smashed was on the very top of the wooden shelf, which made it difficult to grab. It depicted her at a young age, smiling next to her mother. Once she removed it from its frame, she put the photograph into her backpack.

Sadie opened her jewelry box, which was kept a shelf lower. The robber obviously wasn't interested in her accessories, since the box didn't seem to be tampered with. Her fingers dug into the pile of necklaces and bracelets and withdrew a silver chain with a heart hanging from it. It was a gift from her grandmother, and it was one of her most treasured possessions. She fastened it around her neck, then led Rena out to the hallway.

Her mother's room was in a similar state. The wallpaper was peeling, the curtains were torn, and the carpet was flattened. Her possessions littered the floor in a messy heap. The only thing left untouched was the safe her mother kept her pokéballs in. Though it was dented from many blows, the safe remained intact. It comforted Sadie to know that there was one thing the robbers couldn't get.

You're taking them?” Rena asked as Sadie knelt down before the safe. Sadie nodded as she turned the knob.

I don't want any policemen getting them. These pokémon are really special to Mom, and I'm not letting them out of my sight.” Sadie placed each pokéball into her backpack gently, separating them from her own. Then she rose to her feet. “Let's go. There's really nothing to do here anymore, and I can't look at this place anymore. It's too painful.”

Rena nodded silently, and the two girls exited the room, later the house. They met with Officer Garret outside, who was talking with another officer.

Hello girls. Sorry... eh, about the house. We're doing everything we can.” He nodded to Sadie.

Is there a way for us to quickly get to the Oreburgh Central Hospital? I'd like to visit my mother,” Sadie said.

The officer seemed surprised. “Well, I suppose once this mess has been cleared up, I can drive you on my way home. But I won't be there to pick you up, so you'll have to find other means of transportation.”

Thank you!” Sadie nearly screamed.

Hold your horses, we're not going anywhere yet. I have a lot of things to do, so you're probably looking at three more hours here. I'm afraid you'll have to stay close to me for the time being.”

Sadie nodded. “It's okay, we don't mind.” She noticed the police chief making his way over to Officer Garrett. He held a clipboard, and was writing furiously.

Anything new, Chief?” Officer Garrett asked.

The chief did not look up from his writing. “Yes. The CSIs recovered DNA from the homes, and there's a pattern of the same four individuals. But the thing is, they were reported missing months ago. And some of the homes they broke into were theirs. This doesn't add up. Why would you steal your own stuff?”

Maybe to cover their own tracks? What did they take from the homes, exactly?”

They did a good job of wrecking things, but all they really took were pokéballs.”

So a group of people who steals other people's pokémon. That's not unheard of.”

I hope it'll be as simple as that. Crime gangs aren't too hard to capture these days. We already have a profile of the people. Now all we need to do is find their whereabouts.”

Do you need my help with anything, sir?”

Not really. We have everything covered already. The residents are begin evacuated, and the paramedics have taken care of everyone. Tell the other officers that they can go home. The CSIs and I do all the work from here,” he chuckled.

Officer Garrett saluted once more, then made his way over to his car. Sadie stepped inside, ready to see her mother.

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BTW: This is Chapter 5, not 6 :P

Wow. You drop a bombshell this chapter. Needless to say, getting in trouble with her mom is now the least of Sadie's worries. Her town and home are in shambles, her mom is hospitalized... a simple trip to the next town over results in this chaos?

And the description of the devastation and Sadie's reaction to the mess is much improved this time. There's definitely a heightened sense of despair and hopelessness this time around, and that makes the chapter all the more intense.

This is the chapter, IMO, that draws the girls into the main plot, and it's carried out very well. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I think you know why ;P

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I'm terribly sorry. Chapter 6 will be delayed for the next few lines.

CHAPTER 6

Come on plane, land!” the girl muttered to herself. Next to the other passengers, who were lazily gathering their things, her fidgeting was strangely out of place. She frequently took out her cell phone to check the time, following with a quick glance out the window and a pause to adjust her position. Her gold necklace bounced with her motions.

Calm down,” the man sitting next to her said between gulps of soda. “The pilot said we'll be on the ground in a few minutes.”

Completely ignoring his comment, she continued to groan. “Man! I told that pilot to go west to avoid the headwind! He's wasted so much time!”

Do you ever stop complaining?” the man continued, opening a bag of potato chips.

Do you ever stop eating?” she countered, her nose crinkling as the man swallowed. “In a span of five hours, you've burped forty seven times, spilled your soda five times, and talked with your mouth full twelve times! Including now!”

For a moment, the man's tiny eyes fell on his stained shirt, then back to the girl. “It's none of your business how I eat!” As he said this, he opened a can of soda.

You better not get any of that on my dress!” the girl threatened, then turned away. According to the small TV screen on the seat in front of her, the plane had lost 500 feet, and was now making its way to the Jubilife Airport. The girl's fist tightened around the skirt of her dress, which had been a nervous habit of hers for as long as she could remember.

I'm not gonna make it in time! I'm not gonna make it! Lindsay better be okay! What if something did happen to her? I can't imagine the guilt!

Her thoughts were scattered and frantic. When the plane skid to a stop, she was the first one up. She shot the pilot a glance as she passed by the cabin, then ran to the terminal as fast as her flats would allow her. But to her dismay, the building was packed to such extent, she could not get past the entrance. There appeared to be some sort of holdup within the building. People were gathering around one point, murmuring behind cupped hands.

Outta my way, MOVE!” The girl yelled, shoving her way through the crowd. She pushed herself to the front of the crowd, ignoring the abuse others yelled at her. The commotion was coming from two police officers who were wrestling with a teenage boy. He didn't look like a criminal to her, however. His attire was that of a plain city boy, dressed in a simple white shirt and baggy jeans. The only thing that seemed out of place were his glasses, their dark lenses making it nigh impossible to see his eyes.

Maybe he's an undercover fugitive... She watched as the officers continued to wrangle, but the boy was surprisingly tough. He seemed to be overpowering them, slowly but surely.

Backup, I need backup!” one of the men yelled into his walkie-talkie. A few seconds later, three more officers rushed to the scene. The crowd gasped in shock as they overwhelmed the boy, and bound his hands with a pair of shiny handcuffs.

Thought it would be a good idea to sneak a knife onto the plane, eh?” Lisa caught an officer say the boy was led off.

And just like that, the day resumed as if nothing had ever happened.

Hmph!” the girl snorted to herself as she continued her walk. “Criminals... at such a young age, too.” She was momentarily distracted with opening her purse, so she did not anticipate what would happen next. As she brought down her left foot, she felt something give way beneath her. She screamed as she fell to the floor, hands flailing. The force of the impact stung her knees and palms, and jarred her vision. A few people gathered around her as she scrambled to her feet.

Then, she heard a woman's voice exclaim, “You stepped on my daughter's... brand... new... BACKPACK!” Several gasps followed, and a small crowd began to gather.

I'm sorry, I'm sorry!” she cried, and broke into a run. She exited the airport building and entered the blistering heat of Jubilife City. As she stood in the parking lot, she zipped open her purse. She withdrew her purple cell phone and began to dial a number.

Hello? This is Lisa Northwood. I'm at the Jubilife National Airport, 1117 Buck Street. I need a taxi to drive me to Oreburgh Central Hospital pronto!”

A few minutes later, a large brown car pulled up to the parking lot. The driver was a tired-looking man wearing a fancy black cap. He appeared nervous as he pulled up to the girl.

Sorry, ma'am,” he said in a thick accent. “We would have gotten you a more luxurious car, but it broke down and we had to get a Buick LeSabre instead.”

But her smile only grew wider. “It's perfect!”



...



By the end of his first few days at the hospital, Dalton was finally getting the hang of things. His wrist was almost fully healed, and Doctor Christopher or Abraham would drop by at least once a day to check up on him. The hospital itself was very fast-paced. Occasionally, Dalton caught bits and pieces of conversation between the staff. There was an unexplained rise in patients lately, all of them afflicted with the same condition – Darkrai nightmares. When he learned this, Dalton reacted with a gasp.

The first time he had heard the term was a year ago, when the Darkrai conflict was just beginning. Apparently, Darkrai possessed an unearthly power to inflict any living thing with eternal sleep, tormenting them with nightmares of their greatest fears. The victim would appear normal on the outside, but would occasionally mutter things and shake violently depending on what they were dreaming. Once someone was asleep, there was virtually no way to wake them. All you could do was watch them suffer. Such cases were extremely rare, though.

When Dr. Christopher next entered his room, Dalton posed the question to him.

So, you overheard some of our other doctors talking?” the doctor had replied, raising an eyebrow from his latest paperwork.

Yeah, and I've heard that Darkrai nightmares are extremely rare. So what's up with all these sleepers?”

Dr. Christopher sighed, preparing his reply. “Well, we have been getting a lot of sleeping patients lately... they've been given the entire second floor too. We get about three new cases per week, which is a very shocking amount! Can you believe that before all this Darkrai stuff started happening, people never even knew what a Darkrai nightmare was? Darkrai has finally found a way to harm the citizens.” His expression turned somber as he gazed out the window. “I fear that things will take a turn for the worse...”

The next few days were dark and rainy. Dalton was always woken in the middle of the night by a clap of thunder, then lulled to sleep by the rush of falling rain. During his waking hours, he occupied himself with The Mysteries of Sinnoh. The book wasn't very interesting, despite the promising title. Apparently, 'mysteries of Sinnoh' could mean anything from ancient ruins to weather patterns. Many of its topics were left open, as if the author was asking the reader to tell him more. One chapter, titled 'Did you know that Mt. Coronet is a chain of volcanoes?' barely extended down to a page.

Every once in a while, Dalton's gaze would fall on the Lunar Wing. It lay in the exact same spot he had left it a few days ago, but it looked different somehow. At night, it seemed to glow with the light from the window. Sometimes Dalton would just sit and stare at it, wondering where it came from and how he had attained it. Though he never saw the mysterious red-eyed Starly again, his mind flickered to it every so often, triggering thoughts such as, Am I really hallucinating? Or was it really there? Could it have something to do with the Lunar Wing?

The morning before his checkout date, Dalton woke in a relatively good mood. He was well-rested, and was finally able to finish his entire breakfast when it was given to him. The storm clouds had begun to clear, allowing streaks of sunlight into his room. Greg, the receptionist, entered his room with a cheerful “Good morning!”

Morning, Greg,” Dalton said as the man handed him a clipboard.

Just some papers giving consent to your release tomorrow, and your bill,” Greg explained with a yawn. “Barely got any sleep last night... I'm no good in all this wet weather.”

Mhmm,” Dalton murmured absentmindedly, skimming through the tiny black print.

Just hand those in to the front desk when you're ready.” Greg trudged to the door and slammed it behind him.

Dalton rather liked the silence – it gave him peace of mind and time to think. And now, with the tip of his ballpoint pen inches away from the signature line, he began to wonder for his future.

After I get out of this place... where will I go? I can't be in here forever... I can't go home either. Go back to the military? Maybe...

During his time at the hospital, Dalton had been pondering his mysterious survival. Had it been a miracle of some sort? Was it meant to be this way?

Maybe it's a message for me to ditch the military... Dalton wondered, the paper covered in marks from his tapping pen.

In truth, the past year was definitely his worst in the army. The president had announced the Darkrai mission at the beginning of the year, and divided the squads among sections of Sinnoh. They were trying to track down Darkrai and kill it once and for all. The instructions were vague, for Dr. Berry had not mentioned exactly how it was to be done, or what to do after it had been done. The result was utter chaos, with each of the squads executing their own interpretation of the plan. One of his buddies had already dropped out, deciding that it was finally time to return home and 'get a real job'. Dalton was contemplating the same, but bit down the idea for a good month. Was this finally the time to act?

But they can't possibly kill Darkrai like that! Dalton realized with a burst of silent rage. Bullets have no effect, and Darkrai can wipe out an entire squad with one attack... how does it do that? The other squads will be helpless! I can't let all those soldiers die...

And then, he knew what he had to do.

I'll go to Snowpoint City... Somehow, I'm gonna get to the President and tell him that he needs a new plan of action.

In about five minutes, Dalton had signed all his papers. Clipping the pen back to the clipboard, he rose from his seat and left the room.

His room was at the end of a long, bright hallway. His bare feet felt strange on the cold floor, and Dalton suddenly wished for a thick pair of socks. Taking a deep breath, Dalton started walking. The entire hospital was like an extension of his room - neat, orderly, and identical. The hallways all looked the same, except for the numbering on the walls that indicated the various rooms. Dalton soon found himself lost in a sterile white maze, jumping from elevator to elevator in a panic. Twice he tried to ask for help, only to be silenced by someone who was “On the phone!” or otherwise occupied. As his frustration began to build, Dalton began to walk faster. But everywhere his head turned all he could see were more doors.

What kind of place is this? he cried out in his mind.

When he reached the nearest elevator, Dalton jammed his fist into the button on the wall, muttering angrily under his breath. Dalton stepped into the elevator, overcome by a rush of cool air. The rows of buttons on the doors were blinking simultaneously, and Dalton selected the lowest floor option: Floor 2. As the elevator jerked downward, an old pop song began to play from the single speaker on the ceiling. As he waited, Dalton found himself transfixed by his own reflection in the mirror walls.

Dalton could not place it, but something about his appearance had changed. As he peered into his own eyes, which had dulled in color ever so slightly, he saw a mysterious new emotion hidden behind them. The very thought made him feel detached somehow, as if the person in the mirror wasn't him. His face appeared sunken and hollow under the light, as if something were missing. But before Dalton could begin to wonder, there was a loud screech.

The elevator doors slid open, revealing a long hallway ahead. To Dalton's surprise, it was completely deserted. Dalton just stood there for a moment, unsure of whether to proceed. He stepped out of the elevator cautiously, the low hum of the radio replaced by screaming silence. There was a final beep as the elevator doors closed behind him, their low thump echoing through the empty space. Just then, Dalton began to feel very dizzy.

Suddenly, a muffled scream sliced through the air. Dalton felt himself jerk to a stop, his blood cold in his veins. His palms were sweating with the same anticipation he usually felt before he was about to venture out on a mission with his squad.

Slowly, Dalton turned to the door to his left, his head still spinning. His surroundings blurred ever so slightly, but he could still read the brass numbers on the wall: '209'. The door stood slightly ajar, giving him a glimpse of the room behind it.

Dalton could see the side of a bed where a figure lay, thrashing violently. The creature gasped and shivered, its motions in time with a faint beeping noise. Dalton's hand closed around the knob as he slowly opened the door. He did not know what prompted him to do this, but he found himself standing inside the room, beside the bed. The creature was a young girl, about five years old. She was flinching and squealing, her eyes tightly closed. Frequent spasms wracked her frame.

Darkrai nightmare... The words slipped through Dalton's thoughts, and he wondered what this girl had been seeing behind her closed lids.

And then, almost as if by impulse, his hand found the Lunar Wing nestled in the pocket of his gown. He slowly withdrew it, and held it near the girl. The Wing began to glow, its light filling the entire room. The girl's shivers lessened, and she let out a sigh. Her grimace was replaced by the face of a silent, peaceful slumber.

Oh my God...” someone said, and Dalton jumped. He turned to see a wide-eyed doctor standing at the doorway, gripping the knob with a pale hand. She eyed the Lunar Wing with wide eyes.

I... There was a scream, and she was having some sort of seizure... And I held this in front of her, and it... stopped,” Dalton managed.

The doctor blinked twice, and stepped forward, her slick ponytail swishing behind her. Dalton placed the Lunar Wing into her outstretched hand. The doctor began examining it under the light.

This poor little girl was having a Darkrai nightmare... but this - this stone, you say, cured her?”

Dalton nodded. “The Lunar Wing.”

When she turned back to him, her cheeks were wet with tears. “I must inform the staff of this! With this... Lunar Wing, we could heal the entire second floor!” her voice had a hysterical edge to it, as if she didn't believe her own words. She turned for the exit, then shot Dalton a glance over her shoulder.

Are you... a patient here?”

Yeah, I was trying to get to the first floor... but this place is like a maze! I have to get these papers over to Greg, the guy at the front desk. I'm checking out tomorrow.”

I'll lead you to the front desk then. Follow me.”

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Author's Notes: If you haven't guessed already, Chapter 6 features Lisa from LeSabre's fanfiction, which can be found here. Thanks to LeSabre for helping me out with Lisa's personality!

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Okay, first I need to say to everyone else that I do approve of the inclusion of my character here.

Keeping my character in, well, character (lol)isn't much of a problem here. Lisa's done very well in this chapter and displays her typical charms and quirks. I like to see when someone can take your character, give them their unique spin, and still keep them true to form. And she does indeed become a nervous wreck sometimes.

“You stepped on my daughter's... brand... new... BACKPACK!”
Uh, oh, someone's in trouble :P But ah, yes, the crowded airport scene. Anyone who's ever been there has probably had to deal with a crowded terminal sometime...

“We would have gotten you a more luxurious car, but it broke down and we had to get a Buick LeSabre instead.”

But her smile only grew wider. “It's perfect!”
Buick LeSabre... the car of choice for teenage math nerds and 84-year old PC members alike :)

I also think that the nature of the Darkrai nightmares was described in more detail this time around, like the sudden increase in incidents over the past year and the president's haphazard "plan" for dealing with it. Against a foe that powerful, and with instructions that ague, I would've dropped out of the military in the first place. Not that I'd enlist in the first place XD

And we get to see the Lunar Wing in action as it cures a nightmare victim. Though Dalton may be sticking around the hospital a little longer than he planned...

Well, that's about all I had to say. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, and to see how everybody eventually meets up. Good work on the chapter!

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Chapter Five doesn’t have much going on. For now the robbery seems to be random to me, but I’m sure there’s a reason for the robbery. Have to say though you did the emotions of the two girls well on their thoughts and reactions of the destruction they saw.

Chapter Six I thought has more stuff dealing with the plot here, like the Lunar Wing and people getting nightmares as LeSabre mention. Also, like how you expand Dalton’s personality a bit there with him thinking about the military. Nice job there.

As for Lisa in this story…:3 Yeah, I thought you did well with her character there. You showed her nervousness, rashness, and quirks there (like the LeSabre Buick :P

Yeah, sorry for the short review. LeSabre bugged me to get this review soon and I’m supposed to study! Also, he pretty much already said my thoughts on your chapters D: However, I really enjoyed the last two chapters and looking forward to what’s going to happen next!

(urgh, now LeSabre is going to bug me trying to get a review for his fic, but I’m busy at the moment D: lol)
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Keeping my character in, well, character (lol)isn't much of a problem here. Lisa's done very well in this chapter and displays her typical charms and quirks. I like to see when someone can take your character, give them their unique spin, and still keep them true to form. And she does indeed become a nervous wreck sometimes.
Don't forget that you helped me with Lisa too :) Glad I did a good job, though!

I also think that the nature of the Darkrai nightmares was described in more detail this time around, like the sudden increase in incidents over the past year and the president's haphazard "plan" for dealing with it. Against a foe that powerful, and with instructions that ague, I would've dropped out of the military in the first place. Not that I'd enlist in the first place XD
Yeah, by now you know what that plan is. Don't reveal anything to anyone else though :P

Chapter Five doesn’t have much going on. For now the robbery seems to be random to me, but I’m sure there’s a reason for the robbery. Have to say though you did the emotions of the two girls well on their thoughts and reactions of the destruction they saw.
The robbery actually plays a big role later on, but I can't say what without revealing a part of a future chapter...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! I really apreciate them! Chapter 7 will be in a week, just like usual. (The reason this one was delayed so much was because I was busy with non-writing things. Hopefully it won't happen again)
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CHAPTER 7

In contrast to the outside temperature, the lobby of the Oreburgh Central Hospital was cool and refreshing. An involuntary 'Ah' escaped Sadie's lips upon entering. The lobby was empty except for a teenage girl in an expensive-looking dress. She sat in a chair near the doorway. A clerk sat behind the counter, face obscured by a computer screen.


Names please?” the clerk asked, tilting his head so he could see her. He was a small man, appearing to be in his late thirties.

Sadie Catherwood and Rena Bradford. We want to visit someone named Katherine Catherwood, but I'm not sure which room she's staying at.”

Once again, the man's face disappeared behind the screen. After a while, he replied, “Miss Catherwood is staying in Room 361... but she's in critical condition. I'm sorry ladies, but no visitors are permitted.”

We get that! That's why we want to visit her! To see if she's okay!” Rena snapped, placing both fists onto the counter. Sadie was about to pull her back, then the man responded.

I'm sorry again, but I can't let you or anyone else visit her. Hospital rules.”

Rena made a face, and Sadie was immediately glad he could not see her.“...Okay,” Rena said, her voice upbeat and cheerful. “Thanks for the help.” With that, Rena turned away and walked over to a nearby chair. She motioned for Sadie to follow.

Aren't hospitals supposed to have those family-friend rules?” she mumbled as she sat down next to Rena. Her voice seemed unusually loud in the quiet lobby.

Sadie, calm down. Your mom's in good care. But if we can't visit her, then it's not worth getting upset about,” Rena said, her voice just a bit louder. Then she leaned closer, and her voice dropped to a whisper. “We can't act like we're upset! That guy will think we're a couple of mental teenagers, and then he'll kick us out of here. All we need to do is ask directions for the bathroom, then we go to Room 361 when that nutcase isn't looking!”

She glanced over to the clerk, who had remained still the entire time. Obviously, he hadn't heard Rena's last words. Sadie bit her lip.

Well, what harm could it do?

All right,” she whispered to Rena. “But this better work.”

Don't worry, people do this all the time!” Rena winked, then swiftly rose from her chair.

Her smile was erased as she approached the counter, replaced by a businesslike expression. “Excuse me, do you know where the bathroom is?” she asked innocently, playing with the edge of her shirt.

A sigh came from behind the computer. “If you're trying to sneak past me to see Mrs. Catherwood, then you might as well give up. There's a bathroom over there.” He pointed to a narrow hallway across the room, in the opposite direction from the main hallways.

Rena made no attempt to hide her frustration. Sadie stifled a laugh as Rena stomped back to her chair, mumbling to herself all the way.

Stupid clerk,” Rena said through gritted teeth. She let herself fall into the chair, and groped a nearby table for a magazine.

You too?” said a new voice, and Sadie turned. The teenage girl was looking at them now, her brown eyes narrowed with interest. It was only now that Sadie noticed her unusual outfit – fancy blue dress partially concealed behind a green blouse, and straight brown hair underneath a white hat. Sadie had never seen anyone in Sinnoh dress like that, and immediately assumed this girl was foreign.

What?” Rena asked defensively, looking up from her magazine. “A girl can't read Championship Battling?”

The girl giggled. “No, I was actually referring to you guys getting sent back from the clerk's desk. The guy won't let me see my sister!”

That's terrible!” Sadie exclaimed. “What happened to her?”

I don't know... Yesterday I get a call from her, saying that she's about to go up against Roark. He's the Gym leader here apparently. And a few hours later, I get a call from the paramedics, saying that something bad has happened to her and she's being hospitalized.”

Yeah... something like that happened to my mom too. Rena and I weren't home at the time, but we came back and found an entire investigation going on in our town,” Sadie found herself saying.

Was it Sandgem?” the girl asked, catching Sadie by surprise.

Well... yeah, how did you know?”

I was listening to the radio when I took the taxi here. They said that there was some sort of raid on Sandgem Town. Something about a crime gang setting fire to people's houses and stealing their pokémon...” her voice hardened at the last sentence. “I've had enough of crime gangs, trust me.”

But the police said that most of the houses that were robbed belonged to the robbers. You wouldn't steal your own pokémon, because you already have them. And you wouldn't burn down your own house even if you were in a crime gang,” Rena replied, not taking her eyes off the pages.

The girl shrugged. “You'd be surprised at what kind of people live in this world. I've met a man who barks more than he talks!” Sadie couldn't help but laugh at the thought.

A long gap in conversation followed, during which Sadie let herself fall into a daydream. She sat in content silence, observing the day through the glass doors. She watched as the landscape outside dimmed and brightened with the steady movement of clouds, and how the plants swayed with the breeze. The only sounds she could hear were the tapping of the clerk's keyboard and the flick of turning pages.

I'm Lisa, by the way,” said the girl. “Lisa Northwood.”

It took Sadie a moment to find her voice. “Nice to meet you. I'm Sadie Catherwood.”

Rena Bradford.”

Lisa nodded slowly. “So where do y'all plan on going now that your hometown is a crime scene, and your mom is in the hospital? It sounds like a pretty bad situation.”

Sadie was about to answer, then she realized that Lisa was right. Rena's parents, along with the other inhabitants of Sandgem, would be forced to go live in another city while the crime was being investigated. Meanwhile, she and Rena were at the hospital, with no money and no means of getting home.

...This sucks,” Sadie said after a while.

We could always call my mom,” Rena put in. “We can find out where she is, and after she's done screaming at us, we could stay with her for a while. Until your mom gets better.”

Good idea, but we don't have a cell phone. It wasn't in my backpack when we were battling in Route 202, and I guess I forgot to pack it when I was in my room...” Sadie's cheeks burned with her own shame. Her mother had always told her to never leave her house without her cell phone. And now, the day she needed it most, she didn't have it.

You could borrow mine,” Lisa suggested, handing them a small purple phone.

Uh... thanks!” Sadie said, sheepishly taking the phone. She passed it to Rena, who began dialing immediately.

Hello?” she said loudly, bringing the phone to her ear. She remained silent for a few seconds, biting her lip and staring at the ceiling. But after a few seconds, she snapped the phone shut.

That's weird... No answer. She always answers, especially when I'm calling...”

We'll try again another time,” Sadie said. “Right now, we have to get a place to stay. We can't sit here forever.”

But where are we gonna go? Mom's not answering.”

I'm staying at a Quality Inn not far from here,” Lisa spoke up. “It's a very good hotel, and it's pretty cheap too. Y'all can get a room there!”

We don't have any money,” Rena groaned. “We can't go anywhere.”

We could always get a free room at the Pokémon Center,” Sadie realized. “They're funded by the Pokémon League, so the rooms are free.”

An expression of horror crossed Lisa's face. “A room at the Pokémon Center? For free? I haven't seen the Pokémon Center rooms in Sinnoh, but one time I had to stay in one back home... and let me tell you, it wasn't exactly five-star quality. The doors were literally falling off their hinges, and the bathrooms were disgusting! The toilet was overflowing and the tiles were covered in mold. The pillows were hard and the blankets made me itchy. The windows wouldn't open, so I couldn't get any fresh air. The air condition apparently 'wasn't working' at the time, so I had to breathe in stinky bathroom air. The first hour in there, I felt like I was going to puke! So I left after the first day and drove all the way to the next town, where there was a Quality Inn.”

Wow,” Sadie said. “Was the Pokémon Center room really that bad?” To this, Lisa nodded.

Sinnoh Pokémon Centers aren't that dirty,” said Rena incredulously. “My cousin stayed at one before. He said it was a little musty, but it wasn't any worse than a cheap hotel was.”

Well, if it's the only option then we might as well get going. Come on, Rena.” Sadie rose to her feet and turned to her friend. Rena remained where she was for a moment, skimming through the last of the magazine page. Soon, she stood to join her.

I should probably go too,” said Lisa, rising along with them. “I don't wanna spend any more time here than I have to.”

Have a nice day,” the clerk called after them, right before Rena slammed the door shut.

Now he's acting all nice...” Rena murmured.

The girls started down the dirt path slowly, the beat of their footsteps drowned out by the sound of passing cars. There was really no need for paved roads in Oreburgh, since the soil itself was flat and smooth. The city had always appealed to Sadie, mainly because it was surrounded by snow-topped peaks. Trees were a rare, but beautiful sight. She especially loved how the green of the grass and leaves stood out against the rich brown of the soil. In Sadie's eyes, every inch of it was picture-perfect.

They walked for several minutes, occasionally conversing with one another. But most of the walk was spent in silence, with each girl looking in a separate direction. Lisa had a habit of muttering to herself, and frequently paused to examine her shoes. To the questioning glances Sadie shot at her, Lisa replied “Well I can't get dirt on my flats!”

Oreburgh's Pokémon Center was a few blocks away from the hospital. Like the standard, the building was large and square, and topped with a red roof. Here, amongst historical buildings and worn-out landscapes, the smooth glossy building seemed out of place. Sadie had always assumed that this was done on purpose, to make sure trainers from around the world could recognize the building. Rena had once said that all this 'modernization' was ruining the cultural identity of the cities, and Sadie agreed wholeheartedly. She cringed as the door slid open, swallowing them into a brightly-lit lobby.

The interior was a bright pink, with slippery tiles and bright wallpaper. Like most Pokémon Centers, this one was equipped with a row of computers, where trainers could contact their relatives and friends for free. A row of chairs lined the walls, in which trainers sat feeding and grooming their pokémon. A booth off to the side sold pokémon food, water, and travel equipment.

Wherever you go, the only thing that remains the same are Pokémon Centers,” Lisa said, taking a few steps into the room. “While you guys get a room, I'm gonna go. Have to get back to my hotel for lunch. It was nice meeting you, Sadie and Rena.”

Nice to meet you too,” Sadie said. “See you around!”

Yeah, see you around. Bye!” Rena said. Lisa gave a final wave, and her blue dress disappeared behind the door. Sadie's gaze remained on the closed door for a moment, then she turned to face the front of the room. The lady behind the counter was clad in all white, a red cross adorning the cap on her head. She nodded to Sadie and Rena as they approached.

How may I help you?” she asked plainly, pursing her glossed lips.

We'd like to rent a room please,” Sadie said.

For how many nights?” her questions came in a monotone, as if given by a telephone operator.

We're not sure yet... can you put us down for three? We'll tell you if we need to stay longer.”

Are you girls trainers?”

No, not really...” Rena shrugged.

Well there's a non-trainer fee for renting a room. You also have to be a trainer to benefit from our pokémon-healing center, pokémon battling rooms, and massage therapy. If you're not a trainer, you have to pay twenty dollars plus an extra fifteen for full services.”

But we're two unaccompanied minors whose hometown has been burned down! We don't have a place to stay and our parents are either hospitalized, or vanished off the face of the Earth! We're flat broke!”

I'm very sorry, but I can't give you a free room unless you're a trainer!” There was a honest trace of sympathy in her tone.

All right, we are trainers! Now will you give us a room?”

The nurse smiled wryly. “Let me see your Trainer Identification.”

Sadie immediately turned to Rena, who simultaneously turned to her. Sadie stiffened. “I... I have my Contest pass. Does that count?”

No,” the nurse sighed.

Rena rolled her eyes and let out a groan. Several people turned their heads for the source of the sound, but she did not appear to notice. “Look, all we need is a roof over our heads! We don't care about the fancy room service or toe massages! Just give us the cheapest room you have, and we promise to keep it clean!”

The nurse appeared to be ready to rebuke, but something made her pause. She took a step back and considered them for a moment, her blond curls shifting with her movements. “If you're really that desperate, I could give you room O-16. It's the smallest room, and everyone's been complaining about it. I'll give it to you for free for one week as long as you don't cause a nuisance for the other trainers staying here. You also won't be able to benefit from our trainer-only services.”

Deal,” Sadie said, before Rena could utter a protest.

The nurse nodded again and handed them a laminated card key. “The room is the fifth door down the hallway to the left. Have a nice stay.”

Sadie followed the nurse's directions to room O-16. The hallway was several meters wide, and packed with trainers of all sorts. Sadie caught words like 'badges' and 'PokéDex' from their conversations, very much unlike those of regular teens she saw. They all wore colorful outfits, all bearing the official pokémon insignia. She recognizes trainers from Hoenn, Johto, and Kanto. Some mingled amongst themselves, and others stood back in groups of three or four.

A few daring trainers were having full-blown battles in the middle of the hallway, shouting commands over their peers. A few bystanders cheered them on, recording the events with strange blinking devices. Others were exchanging money in a frenzy, betting on the opponents.

This... Sadie concluded, is an entirely different culture.

Hey you!” the sudden shout caught her off guard. Sadie turned to see a boy of no more than eleven years old standing in front of her, his features pulled back into a grimace. He was dressed in a blue jacket, a plain T-shirt, jeans, and a brand-name hat – clothes from the Trainer Department Store. He clutched two pokéballs in his hands, and four more were attached to his belt.

I challenge you to a battle, right here and now!” He pointed a twitching finger to Sadie. She had never been confronted in this manner before, and was unsure of how to respond. As always, Rena beat her to it. She crossed her arms and stepped forward, until her face was inches apart from the boy's.

Look kid, we don't have time for your battling nonsense! What we're doing is ten times more important. So tell that poor little Chimchar that he's not gonna get any today!” Rena met the boy's grimace with her own, causing him to step back. He looked at her for a few seconds with tearful eyes, then ran away sobbing.

You didn't have to make that poor kid cry,” Sadie teased, watching as the boy's cries grew into screams. He tripped a few times on his untied shoes, then disappeared behind a corner.

Trainers have no dignity whatsoever!” Rena said as they resumed their walk. “They just go up to any random person and challenge them to a battle right then and there!”

You want to be a trainer one day, if I remember correctly.”

Yeah, but not like them! They're idiots! Or, as they say it, noobs.”

Noobs? Is that even a word?” Sadie giggled.

Rena shrugged. “Trainers, like I said before.” They entered a quieter part of the hallway, in which the roar of the trainers was considerably muffled. The door labeled O-16 was right next to a broom closet. A card slot was attached to the area where a handle should have been. Sadie slid the card key into the slot, and the door opened.

The room, just like the nurse had said, was rather small. It was built in a rectangular style, with two beds separated by a glass table. The floor was shiny and reflective, and the curtains matched the soft pink of the walls. They were drawn to reveal a beautiful slice of the Oreburgh landscape. Sadie dropped her backpack onto one of the beds and sat down, eager to rest her tired feet. A small TV stood on a table in front of her bed, with the remote perched on top.

This seems like an okay place,” Rena admitted, taking the bed beside Sadie's. The room was in good condition, and there was a constant breeze of cool air from the vent on the ceiling. The only damage Sadie could detect were the walls, which bore the signatures of countless trainers who had stayed here before. They wrote things like 'Number one trainer!' and 'Pokemon League, Dec. 1992'.

Why do you think people complained about this room?” she asked, leaning against the backboard of the bed.

No clue... hey, let's try calling my mom again.” Rena lifted the black receiver and quickly dialed her mother's number. She held the phone to her ear for a few moments, only to slam it down again. “No answer again! This is getting really annoying.”

Let me try.”

Sadie took the phone into her own hands and dialed again, paying attention to every key her finger touched. She brought the phone to her ear, and gave a satisfied smile when she heard it ring.

See? You just have to dial slower.” Rena remained silent, and lay back down on the bed.

Sadie twiddled with the phone cord as it rang, anticipating Regina's merry 'hello' any second. She crossed her legs, and uncrossed them. She looked around the room, sighed, and played with her hair. For a long time, all she could hear was ring ring... ring ring....

Then she finally came to her senses. A minute had passed, and the phone was still ringing. Evidently, Regina would not pick up. With a groan, Sadie slammed down the phone and leaned back against the headboard.

Well?” Rena asked.

Sadie had to collect her thoughts for a moment before answering. “It's really weird... it just kept ringing. There was no operator voice or anything. Just... ringing,” Sadie shrugged. “It's like she's getting the call, but she's not around to answer it.”

She probably lost her phone again,” Rena groaned. “We'll call tomorrow, okay? I'm starving!”

We can't get lunch. We have no money...”

So? We can't starve! Let's go back to the hallway and battle that poor kid. I hear trainers give you money if you win their battles.”

A few seconds passed before Sadie answered. “Okay.”

The girls rose in unison, putting on their shoes and gathering their pokéballs. Sadie locked the door behind them, leaving the room silent and empty.

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I enjoyed Lisa’s appearance there. Oh gosh, I soooooooo remember Lisa freaking out when she went in the Pokemon Center. Priceless. XD;

Hm, the disappearances got more interesting with the disappearances with Lisa’s sister and Rena’s mom (or so it seems). Trouble afoot! D:

I find it weird the Pokemon Center won’t allow coordinators to use the services for free. I think coordinators should have the same privileges as trainers since they have to travel for contests (heck, in the games and anime contests are somewhat farther than gyms) and train their Pokemon for them. Also, shouldn’t Sadie and Rena be technically registered trainers already, considering both have Pokemon and having contest passes? In the anime and games, you registered as a trainer, but in anime, May and Dawn went the contest route.

I enjoyed this chapter a lot due to the mystery behind it and Lisa’s appearance. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
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I find it weird the Pokemon Center won’t allow coordinators to use the services for free. I think coordinators should have the same privileges as trainers since they have to travel for contests (heck, in the games and anime contests are somewhat farther than gyms) and train their Pokemon for them. Also, shouldn’t Sadie and Rena be technically registered trainers already, considering both have Pokemon and having contest passes? In the anime and games, you registered as a trainer, but in anime, May and Dawn went the contest route.
The way I write the Pokemon world, I give it a more real world-like description. As in, you don't have to be a trainer to have Pokemon. Trainers in my fic-world are people who are serious about Pokemon and raise them competitively. Sadie and Rena are the 'regular teenagers', and aren't really competitive yet. Sadie isn't a full-time coordinator; she's just aspiring to be one. I didn't really get into detail in the first few chapters, but I'l have more of that along the way. Glad you mentioned it, though.

Thanks for the review, Bay!

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Yeah, when I was proofreading it, I didn't pay attention to the whole "coordinators can't use Pokemon Centers" thing. But since a Contest Hall would probably have their own Pokemon healing stations within it, that could make sense. Plus, in my own fic, coordinators are looked down upon by trainers and vice versa *coughcoughCristinParmercoughcough*

Love how Lisa freaks out at the mere mention of a Pokemon Center :P Mind you, she doesn't mind healing her Pokemon there, but the rooms terrify her.
but one time I had to stay in one back home
Actually, since home for her is Anderson County, South Carolina, there wouldn't be any there. There were some in the region she traveled in, though (even though I spared her the horror of staying there :P )

Rena's mom is missing... I don't recall that in the original version, and I think it adds a bit of added suspense to the whole situation... Yet another mystery that needs to be solved.

And rude hospital employee is rude.

Well, I enjoyed this chapter, as it brings Lisa together with Sadie and Rena for the first time. I look forward to seeing what roles each will play as the crisis that looms over Sinnoh plays out.

Till next chapter!

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Since a coordinator's Pokemon doesn't really get hurt, there's no need for Pokemon Centers for coordinators.


Rena's mom is missing... I don't recall that in the original version, and I think it adds a bit of added suspense to the whole situation... Yet another mystery that needs to be solved.
In the first version, I didn't even mention Rena's parents :P Major plot hole ftw.

In the next chapter things will get a bit more complicated... but like I said, I have a really good plan for how things should work out. See you next chapter! :)
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CHAPTER 8

After the incident with the Lunar Wing, life in the hospital seemed to speed up. Dalton was no longer in his hospital room for most of the day. Instead he was on the second floor, rushing from room to room, waking patients by the order of the doctors. Just like the first girl he saw, the patients' bodies were wracked by convulsions. Occasionally, they murmured incoherently. As the Lunar Wing glowed, they were eased into a peaceful sleep and woke within a few hours.


Dalton was allowed into the ultra-clean laboratory from time to time, where the Lunar Wing was under constant observation and testing. The hospital halls were teeming with scientists from around Sinnoh, all carrying stacks of data and papers.

Just a few days ago, the Lunar Wing was just a piece of colored rock. Now it was a hot topic.

Dr. Christopher dropped by occasionally, keeping him up to date with the news about the Lunar Wing. Apparently, the lab had fully and completely analyzed its properties, and even managed to derive a good-sized sample. Still, they hadn't been able to make a medicine from it yet, which Dr. Christopher mentioned with sagging shoulders.

One morning, he entered Dalton's room in a joyous mood, scribbling something on a clipboard while humming to himself. He ended the line with a flourish, and turned his smile onto Dalton.

That's it! You're set to go!” the doctor said, snapping the clipboard shut.

This caught Dalton by surprise. “What do you mean, I can go now? Like, check out?”

The doctor smiled brightly. “Yep! Greg has your backpack at the front desk. Let's go!”

The lobby was still empty and quiet. The noise of the hospital was significantly muffled here, which Dalton liked. Greg's chair was turned away from the computer, so the man sat facing them.

Here are your things,” Greg said, lifting Dalton's backpack with a grunt.

We have your rifle, a bottle of water, and an energy bar as a little gift. Oh, and we also put the Lunar Wing in there. We've taken care of all the sleeping patients, and the lab can't get anything else from it,” he said.

There might be more sleepers outside of this city. It'll be up to you to find them, Dalton,” Christopher said from behind.

Dalton nodded in thanks as he was handed his backpack. It was considerably light, and he hoisted it onto his shoulders with ease. He looked around the empty room, suddenly unsure of what to say.

Well... I guess that's it. Thanks for everything, guys.”

You're the one we should be thanking! Because of you, half the patients in here are cured!” Dr. Christopher beamed. “Before, we had absolutely no way of taking care of them. We couldn't let them out of our sight because their hearts were still beating, and we couldn't ease their pain because we weren't sure if they were feeling any! We were in quite a pickle.”

Where are you planning on going now?” asked Greg, his face once again visible from behind the computer screen.

Snowpoint City,” Dalton answered, and both men raised their eyebrows.

That's pretty far away. I must say, good luck on your travels, Mr. Rogers.”

Thanks. Good luck to you guys too.” Dr. Christopher smiled slightly as Dalton backed out of the room. He gave them a final wave before turning around. The figures of the two men vanished behind the doors, and that was that.

These people have really done a lot for me. I should have at least brought them a present or something... but what would they have wanted anyway? A new stethoscope? Heh.

Calm, easy thoughts settled in Dalton's mind as he walked down the path. The hospital was bordered by thick trees that mostly sheltered the area from light. The air in the town was fresh and cool, despite its reputation for being a strict mining town.

The sun was shining high overhead when Dalton came across Helix Avenue, the street nearest to the hospital. He was surprised to see that there were no paved roads in Oreburgh, and that the cars and pedestrians were content to move across plain dirt paths. No one seemed to notice that he was dressed in a military uniform and had a gun clipped to his belt, for there were people who were dressed even more heavily. Hikers walked amiably with large pickaxes and thick vests. Others were clad in mining boots, their hard hats still clipped to their necks.

Dalton walked past several blocks of trees and earthquake-resistant buildings, until something familiar caught his eye – a Pokémon Center.

I might need a place to stay before I can get a good train ticket out of here... these Pokémon Centers are free, I think.

But the nurse on duty wasn't as kind as Dalton had hoped. The second he entered the room and made to approach the front desk, she called out, “There's a fee for non-trainers, sir.” She had said this rather loudly, causing several bystanders to snicker.

I just need a place to stay. How much will it be?”

The nurse sighed. “Twenty dollars for the room, and an extra fifteen if you want to benefit from our trainer-only services.” She barely paused for breath before continuing, “And no weapons are allowed inside the Pokémon Center.”

I'm a soldier,” Dalton said, pulling out his military I.D from his backpack. He slapped it on the surface of the table, and immediately followed with a sum of twenty dollars.

The nurse examined the card under a special light, then handed it back to him. She bent down under the counter for a moment, then drew herself up with a card key. “Your room is O-23. They've been having some air conditioning problems in that part of the building, so the windows are open. Have a nice stay.” For some reason, he found it hard to thank her.

Dalton's room turned out to be rather modest, with clean floors and a coffee maker sitting on a table near the beds. The only thing that bothered him was the wallpaper – bright pink with white polka dots. The colors flashed and throbbed in his peripheral vision, and his head began to ache as he set down his backpack.

As he further explored the room, Dalton became aware of a slight breeze blowing through an open window above the beds. The curtains billowed around the area, as if affected by some unearthly force. While it remained open, he could hear everything that was going on outside, from chatter to car horns. Dalton made to close it at first, but then remembered the words of the nurse.

How the hell am I supposed to sleep with that?” he mumbled to himself, sinking down into the mattress.

...

That night, Sadie tossed and turned. Behind her closed eyes, her dreams were hazy and distorted...


A field of tall grass stretched out as far as the eye could see. Overhead, a black sky...

And then, out of nowhere, Rena appeared. Her red hair was twisting and writhing in the wind, covering her closed eyes. Her Buneary stood at her side, expression blank and unknowing. For a moment, Rena's body remained suspended in the air. Then, her eyes opened, and Sadie was gripped with unearthly fear. They seemed to penetrate to Sadie's soul, and shake her being.

“Coward! Coward! Look at you, your pokémon doesn't even listen to you!” Rena mocked, lips curling into a wicked smile.

“That's not true!” Sadie heard herself say. Her voice was hoarse and cracked. Just then, she became aware of something pressed against her leg. She turned, and saw the blurry image of her Luxio. Yellow eyes narrowed with spite. Slowly it bared its teeth.

“You're a coward, little girl! Give me a command! Do it!” Luxio urged in human tongue.

Her lips struggled to form words, but none would come. Would she stand there forever before she could muster an answer? Her body was entirely immobilized. She watched in agony as the scene slowly dissolved before her...

It was immediately replaced by a lonely road. She saw the scene from high above, two girls on their bikes pedaling furiously, as if to run from something. Then, she was on her bike, with Rena on her immediate left, and her path stretching out before her. It was filled with twists and turns. Ups and downs. But mostly downs.

“Sadie, hurry! She'll catch up to us!” Rena screamed.

“I don't want to! I don't want to go!” Sadie screamed. But for some reason, her legs kept turning the pedals. They pressed on, though she urged herself to stop. The force of her will was crumbling, leaving only an unknown destination. They rode faster and faster, until her surroundings were reduced to an indistinct blur.

“She'll catch us, Sadie! She'll catch us! We have to make it home!”

“No! Rena, no!”

And then she saw it. She had been fearing it all along, the final drop. There was no turning back. She had made her choice.

The road, the landscape, everything ended here. It was a fine line, separating her word from... that one. A white sky then a black sky. As the space between them closed, the bike sped up. Evil machines, carrying her to her doom...

The last image was of her mother. Broken, on a hospital bed. The anger was etched forever into the lines on her face.

“NO RENA NO!” The bike tipped forward.



When Sadie opened her eyes, she saw a dark room. Her mind went blank for a moment, then slowly eased into awareness.

It was only a dream... thank God...

The memories and emotions from the dream faded and blended, until Sadie could only recall a few short snippets. She slowly lifted herself into an upright position, and was affected with a slight dizziness. The digital clock on the table read 1:45. She let out a soft groan, then glanced towards Rena's bed. She was sound asleep, her breathing slow and relaxed.

I should try and get back to sleep... Sadie thought to herself, letting her head sink back into the pillow.

But before she could close her eyes, her motions were cut off by the slightest of sounds. It was a long, quavering note that was too deep for any human to utter. As the sound progressed, cold fear crept up her spine.

Rena, Rena!” Sadie hissed, nearly hysterical. She leaped out of bed and gently nudged her on the arm.

Rena!” she continued to whisper, until Rena stirred at the sound of her name.

What is it... what do you want?” she mumbled, slowly lifting her head.

Rena, wake up! I heard something...” Sadie whispered. Rena met this with a scowl.

Oh great. Another premonition... What did the noise sound like?” she finally said.

It was really deep, and it sounded kinda like... eep.”

Rena was silent for a few moments. Sadie could almost picture her expression at the moment, blank and incredulous. Then, Rena sank back into her pillow. “I'm not in the mood for a horror story right now, Sadie.”

But it sounded so weird! It was like... eeee-eeee-eeep, and it echoed and stuff!” Sadie did her best to recreate the sound, but Rena didn't seem interested.

Sadie, I'm friggin tired! Go deal with the sound yourself, I want to sleep.”

Sadie was prepared to reply when the noise cut her off, that same ominous vibrato. It was louder this time however, and sent a rattle through the building. Sadie could feel it through the carpet – a steady rumble that suggested a shifting world.

There! There it is!” she exclaimed. “And it's louder than before! That means it got closer!”

Rena did not respond this time, but pulled the covers over her head. Sadie sank back into her own bed in dismay, her head tilted slightly in the direction of the window. The sky was pitch black, but she could still see the faint outlines of trees and buildings in the background. A quiet night. Then, far off in the distance, something shifted. It was subtle yet clear, like a single leaf displaced from a group. Sadie felt her skin go numb.

There's something outside... I mean it, I saw something!” this time, she couldn't stop the words from leaving her mouth.

It's probably some idiot trainer who thought it was a good idea to let his pokémon out at night. It'll go away. Now let me sleep!”

But soon, the silence was sheared with another inhuman screech. It was like a spear through the walls of Sadie's mind, a hair-raising screech that made her grit her teeth. Through the disturbance, she could barely hear the rustle of blankets as Rena got to her feet.

You have got to be kidding me!” she nearly screamed, throwing a glance at each of the windows, then to Sadie. “Where did you say you saw the person?”

Sadie pointed a shaking finger to the window above her bed, where the night remained as still as ever. Her gaze lingered on the window for a moment. When she turned back around, she was surprised to see Rena already at the door with her shoes on and the card key in hand.

I'm giving this dude a piece of my mind,” she explained, each syllable carrying the weight of her frustration. “What kind of deranged moron lets his pokémon out at night?”

Sadie sighed, trying to calm the quakes that still wracked her body. “N-no. Not a good idea, Rena. What if it's... you know... something dangerous? I don't want to risk it... Look, I'm sorry for waking you up, but we should really tell someone about this. The management should know! They can deal with it!”

Put on your sneakers, and lets go!” Rena demanded, and Sadie began to slip on her sneakers with shaking fingers.

The door opened to a silent hallway. There were no windows here, which left her surroundings almost pitch black. Sadie could barely distinguish Rena's outline as she slowly locked the door.

We'll use the back door,” she hissed, and Sadie felt her arm jerk forward.

Sadie made a silent rule to remain two paces behind Rena the entire time, and listen to the faint echo their steps made in the narrow passage. Her shoulder brushed the wall, as an anchor to keep her from getting lost. They finally came across a single door, which was labeled as the emergency exit. Rena pushed on the bar, and accompanied it with a forceful kick that opened the door to its full extent.

When Sadie stepped out of the building, she found herself in an empty lot bordered by an iron fence. The still air was frequently disturbed by a bone-chilling breeze that carried with it a sense of danger. Or maybe she was just imagining it.

The second they got outside, Rena began pacing around the bare terrain, hands on hips and mouth moving with inaudible words. She frequently stared out at the surrounding buildings, waiting for something to happen.

Several moments passed by in silence, but the scenery remained unchanged. Rena returned with a shrug.

Well, the noise is gone. See, I told you it was just some idiot trainer and his pokémon. And you were going all paranormal and stuff...” Rena began to turn around, but something stopped her.

Was that... a person?” she asked, slowly turning to face the backyard. She slowly approached the picket fence, and Sadie was immediately by her side.

What, what did you see?” she demanded, no longer able to control her shivering.

Rena's eyes narrowed as she surveyed the landscape. “I don't know, but it looked like a -”

BANG!

The sound of a gunshot rang in Sadie's ears, making her jump with surprise. Instinctively, her eyes darted from left to right, but she could see no change in her surroundings.

What was that?” her friend exclaimed, eyes widening.

It sounded like a gun... I told you someone was here!” Sadie shrieked. Then, in a much lower tone, she added, “We have to get back inside... what if there's a mass murderer out there or something?”

Rena did not respond. She was leaning against the fence, her grip tight around the bars. Her gaze remained fixed on a location off in the distance.

Rena...” Sadie began, but she immediately silenced her.

Look!” Rena pointed. Sure enough, Sadie could see a silhouette amongst the trees. It was unmistakably a human. Sadie drew in a breath, and felt Rena tense next to her. Though she wanted to run, Sadie found herself rooted in place, unable to move and unable to scream.

The figure drew closer, until its features became more pronounced. First came the tips of black flats accompanied by a pair of white pantyhose. As the legs walked on, Sadie saw that they were connected to the hem of a blue dress. Through the overhanging branches, she could make out a green cardigan and long brown hair.

When the girl approached them, her expression was marked with surprise.

Lisa?”

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Interesting chapter with the whole dream sequence and everything... very creepy and bizarre, but in a good way :P And then the mysterious noises outside... where are they coming from and what do they mean? I don't think Lisa's the cause, knowing her character firsthand, but who knows... Dalton's got a gun and he's still in town... maybe he was the one who went BANG!

Wow, a lot of suspense here, with the weird going-ons here in Oreburgh, and they've awakened Sadie. Rena, Lisa, and who knows who else. What's the cause of all the commotion?

Needless to say I like the spooky aspect of the chapter and the many questions it raises. Maybe next chapter will have the answers..

Great chapter!.

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I got very good help with my dream scene on SPPF. And yes, the next chapter definitely will have all the answers :) I love writing all these spooky scenes. They're just really fun to write, with Sadie's scardiness and Rena's stfu faces... The next chapter will be intense, but I'm not telling you anything else >:0

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BANG!

The sound of a gunshot rang in Sadie's ears, making her jump with surprise. Instinctively, her eyes darted from left to right, but she could see no change in her surroundings.

“What was that?” her friend exclaimed, eyes widening.

“It sounded like a gun... I told you someone was here!” Sadie shrieked. Then, in a much lower tone, she added, “We have to get back inside... what if there's a mass murderer out there or something?”
In this part the mentions of gunshot sounded repetitive. Maybe get rid of “sound of a gunshot” and put “noise.” That’s just me, though.

I have to say, I thought you did well with the dream. Very dark and creepy images there. As for the ending…I’m a bit confused. Did Lisa use a gun, then? If so, she’s cool now. XD

Dalton’s scene not much action or development going on, though it’s pretty interesting we know a little bit more about the Lunar Wing, or at least it’s working. :P

In short, the second part you did the suspense quite well with the dream and the ending. Can’t wait for next chapter!
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No, Lisa didn't use a gun :P I have no idea what LeSabre would say if she did, lol.
You'll find out who used the gun in the next chapter, and why...

It's really weird, since most of my chapters start all happy and carefree and end with suspense and terror. I have the first two pages of the next chapter done. Expect it sometime this weekend. Thanks for stopping by!
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Egads! Sory this oen took me so long. I was pelted with homework for most of the week, and I barely found any time to write. Hopefully no one's ditched me :P
CHAPTER 9
“Sadie, Rena!” Lisa cried, and broke into a sprint. When they met on the other side of the fence, she was still gasping for breath.

“What – are you guys – doing – here?” she breathed. “And did you hear that shot?”

“Yeah!” Rena exclaimed. “This is so weird! I mean, first Sadie wakes me up in the middle of the night because she's hearing strange noises, then we hear a noise -”

“Wait.” Rena seemed to be getting started in a riveting tale, but Lisa held up her hand slowly. “What kind of noise did you guys hear? What did it sound like?”

“Uh... it was sort of like... eeeeeeeep, only it was a lot deeper than that.” Sadie mimicked the note as best as she could. A flash of recognition appeared in Lisa's eyes.

“That's exactly the noise I heard! My Quality Inn isn't too far from here, and I heard the exact same thing! I couldn't sleep for some reason, and then I heard the noise. So I went outside to check it out.”

“There was a second noise, though,” Rena cut in. “It sounded like someone scraping their nails against a chalkboard.”

“Yeah, that one too! I heard it while I was walking down the street, and by that time I was really scared! I started to turn back in the direction of the hotel, and along the way, I saw you two.”
The conversation eventually simmered down to a silence. Lisa's presence added an air of calm to the situation, but nevertheless, Sadie could not keep from stealing a quick glance around. Beyond the trees and buildings, she had an awful feeling that they were not alone.

Finally she asked, “What should we do now?”

Lisa shrugged. “I guess there's really nothing else to see here. We should go back inside.”

“Still, what if there's a gunman here? Shouldn't we let someone know?”

“Sadie, I really don't care what's out here anymore. It's much safer inside anyway,” Rena said, turning for the door.

Sadie was about to do the same, when something in the corner of her eye made her stop cold. Somewhere within the shadows, she saw a flash of red.

“Whoa whoa whoa, what was that?” she said aloud, immediately rushing back to the fence. When she turned the light was gone, the streets empty.

“What? What did you see?” Rena groaned, approaching the fence.

“There was something red... off in the distance...”

“Ugh. Where?”

“There!” Sadie pointed. She was still staring at that same spot, a larger-than-normal gap in between two office buildings. Beyond that was a large cluster of trees, where two red dots were once again visible amongst the shadows.

Upon her indication, Rena squinted and leaned forward. She turned back with a snort.

“Well? Open the door.” Rena eyed Sadie expectantly.

It took a few seconds for the message to sink in. Sadie's eyes widened. “Rena, no! I am not leaving this Pokémon Center! That's like walking right into our deaths! Rena, we can't! What if... what if it's something dangerous? Really Rena, think!”

Rena shook her head. “It's okay. I slipped a couple of pokéballs into my pocket. We'll be fine.”

Rena pushed her way through the gate, her grip painfully tight on Sadie's arm. She closed the gate behind them, and turned to Lisa. She had been standing by the fence the whole time, her arms folded across her chest.

“Are you coming or what?” she called.

After a few silent moments, Lisa nodded. “But I'm sending my Weezing out just in case.” She began to rummage through her purse until she pulled out a pokéball. The container opened, revealing a chunky, spherical pokémon. Black smoke emanated from its pores, saturating the air around it and making Sadie's eyes water.

"All right, I'll send out mine too." Rena lifted two pokéballs out of her pocket, and tossed each of them in turn. They opened to reveal her Buneary and her Cranidos. Both pokémon staggered lazily, evidently annoyed that they had been aroused.

"Let's go. The sooner we get to the bottom of this, the sooner we can get back to sleep." With that, Rena skipped forward.

Aside from the crunch of their footsteps, the town was silent. The streets were illuminated with circles of orange light, the rest being left in the shadows. Nevertheless, there was a definite confidence in Lisa's step. The pokémon huddled by her side, grunting and squealing to each other. Rena remained at least five paces ahead of the group, swinging her arms actively.

As they walked, Sadie found herself staring up at the sky, to the point where the city skyline was well out of view. Up above was a black veil. New moon. No stars. Sadie was the only one who was shaking.

They entered the alley. The grass was more frequent here, and tickled Sadie's bare ankles as she walked. Up ahead was a large clearing that formed the boundary between city and forest. Rena took the first step, followed by Lisa, and finally Sadie. Her gaze immediately went to the circle of trees that loomed in the center of the area. From the safety of the Pokémon Center, they seemed so tiny, so innocent. Now, as they approached, Sadie felt a sense of danger. A low growl rumbled in Cranidos's throat. Buneary began to shift its position, her large ears perking at a sound Sadie could not hear.

“Maybe... maybe we should go back...” she whispered, pressing her fingertips to her lips. Her hands were ice cold. The trees surrounded her in a wide arc, closing off all means of escape.

Rena did not respond, her gaze locked on the patch of trees. Over the steady whistle of the wind, Sadie could make out a low rumble.

"What is that?" Lisa hissed, instantly drawing closer to her Weezing. Her body had begun to shake as well.

"It's the noise again..." Rena said. Her tone was surprisingly calm.

The wind began to howl. The branches writhed and twisted, until they opened wide enough to give them a view of what lay within. Sadie could see the beginnings of a large, angular silhouette perched somewhere within their depths. She traced the contours of a large arm, neck, back, and sloping tail. Sadie stiffened. The creature was almost as large as the tree itself.

A wide, purple head slowly separated itself from the shadows, to look at them with a pair of angled eyes. A bloody red hue spilled out from where the whites should have been. Sadie clamped her hands over her mouth.

In the blink of an eye, the pokémon had uncoiled itself from the tree trunk. It drew itself up to its fullest height, nearly as tall as the trees themselves. It arched its neck in a snakelike motion, and lunged forward.
Sadie jumped aside just as Drapion's jaws struck the ground. In that second, she had documented each razor-sharp point in the Drapion's mouth, the awful stench of decaying flesh that reeked from its mouth, and most of all, the pure, unadulterated hatred in its eyes. This pokémon was fighting to kill.

Sadie was scrambling to her feet just as Lisa appeared beside her.

"Weezing, use Sludge Bomb!" she cried, her voice shaking. Weezing drifted forward, and launched a jet of purple matter at the Drapion's face.

The pokémon staggered under the volume of liquid, giving them time to turn for the alley. But the Drapion regained its balance quickly, and with a single swipe of its tail, struck down a tree. A scream of despair sprang from Sadie's lips as the trunk crashed in front of her, cutting off the view of the alley.

"We're trapped! We're dead!" she yelled, throat searing with pain. Beside her, Lisa was on the verge of tears.

"No!" Rena groaned, throwing her arms into the air. "No! We're not gonna die here! Who does that Drapion think he is anyway? I'll tell you what! I'm gonna kick his ass! Cranidos, Buneary, come on!" Without pausing to hear Sadie's protests, Rena charged towards the Drapion, her two pokémon by her side.

At her command they sprang forward, proceeding to circle the Drapion's feet in a blur of color. At first the Drapion was unaffected, but it was soon swallowed in a whirlpool of dirt, grass, and leaves. Sadie watched all the while, her back pressed against the tree.

"Brilliant..." Lisa muttered, almost inaudibly. Squaring her shoulders, the teen stepped forward.

"All right Weezing, let's help them out! Use Sludge Bomb!"

A jet of purple sludge shot from Weezing's open mouth to meet the Drapion full in the face. The pokémon staggered, but regained its balance. With a single screech, it sent a twisting Shadow Ball hurling towards Weezing.

"Watch out!" Sadie called, almost by impulse. But her warning was not needed, for Weezing had dodged the attack with perfect form. It sent another stream of mucus for the Drapion's face.

Lisa emitted a triumphant yell when the Drapion staggered. The effort Rena's pokémon were making was just enough to send the Drapion spinning. Its neck twisted and craned over to the land below as it tried to locate its target. Sadie caught a glimpse of Rena, watching her pokémon from the sidelines. She was staring up at the Drapion intently, as if trying to decipher a difficult problem. Her arms hung loose at her sides.
The dust cloud began to settle as Cranidos and Buneary slowed. Their punches and kicks grew less frequent, and soon stopped altogether. They were reduced to the point of mindless, ceaseless jogging. Their defenses were low, and their breathing was labored. With a single swipe of its armored tail, the Drapion struck them upon the ground, where they lay twitching and convulsing. A jolt of pain, and Sadie realized she had been biting her lip through the entire time.

"We can't let it win!" Lisa said. "Weezing, use smokescreen to block that Drapion's vision!"

"Weez Weez!" the chunky pokémon huffed in approval. Sadie watched as a cloud of black smoke spewed from Weezing's pores, invading the air around them. Sadie's surroundings were entirely obscured by smoke, though the sounds were as clear as ever. Her coughs were drowned out by the Drapion's agonized wails, and Weezing's deep bellows. The volume was so great that Sadie found herself on her knees, palms pressed against the sides of her throbbing head. Hot tears streamed from her eyes, and her tongue was dry and sticky in her mouth.
And just like that, it stopped.

The screams had vanished without warning, as had the sounds of attacks and roaring wind. The ringing silence was all that remained; that cold, dreadful silence that follows a bloody battle. Sadie slowly opened her eyes.

Without warning, she felt a body collide with hers. Sadie fell on her side, stomach paining and head spinning. A few feet away, Sadie saw the silhouette of the Drapion's tail, which had missed her by a few feet.
Beside her, Lisa's outline was barely visible. Slowly, she raised a finger to her lips. For a few terrible, silent moments, they sat against the tree. The Drapion's form became visible occasionally, accompanied by the rustle of grass and foliage.

It's only a matter of time before it finds us... The very thought made her shiver. Would it hurt to die?

The Drapion's footsteps grew softer over time. Its form faded off into the distance. All of a sudden, Sadie heard a piercing screech.


BANG!


The familiar sound seared through the silence, drowning out the Drapion's screams. Someone had fired a gun. The shot was followed by a groan and snapping wood. And then, silence.

Sadie risked a whisper. "What the hell just happened?" Beside her, Lisa shrugged.

They slowly rose to their feet. Sadie's heart was thumping furiously, to the point where it almost hurt.

"Who's there?" said a voice. It was definitely male.

"W-we're right here!" Sadie called out, her voice hoarse. There was no answer, but a rush of heavy footsteps. Out of the haze, a rough outline of a person was nearing them. The form became clearer and clearer until Sadie locked eyes with a tall man, looking to be in his late twenties. He wore a soldier's uniform, which stained from hours in the dirt. A beat-up rifle was clutched in his hands.

"Who are you?" Lisa asked.

"My name is Dalton Rogers," the man said. "I stay at the Pokémon Center not too far from here. I heard a noise, and came out to see this huge Drapion lurking around the edges of town. I missed it with my gun though, and it escaped. I hunted it for a few minutes, and it led me here. And the next thing I know, I enter this meadow and see you two being mauled."

"Wait." Sadie said slowly. "You said two. There were three of us. Me, Lisa, and Rena."

Dalton raised an eyebrow in confusion. "I only saw you two. And a Weezing."

"But where's Rena?" Sadie said, taking a quick glance around. "And Cranidos? Buneary?"

"I don't know..." Lisa said. Sadie scanned the area. The grass was flattened from where the two pokémon had ran, and there were two distinct skid marks where she guessed they had fallen. yet, there was no sign of them anywhere.

"Oh my God! Sadie!" She jerked at Lisa's sudden outburst. Sadie turned to see Lisa standing before a particular spot in the meadow, not too far from the Drapion's body. One arm was pointing to a spot on the ground, and the other was clamped over her mouth. Sadie hurried to her side and saw a trail of footsteps in the dirt. She recognized the shoe mark at once - Rena's favorite pair of sneakers, which she had received for her birthday a few months ago. The trail continued to the edge of the meadow, where it was unexpectedly cut off.

"Rena's... Rena's... gone..." the words felt strange on her tongue. Their weight was let down upon her slowly, gradually. The first tears began to fall.

"Who is Rena?" there was a trace of impatience in Dalton's voice. "What happened to her?"

"She disappeared!" Sadie blurted. "She was running towards the Drapion with her pokémon, and there was so much smoke from Weezing's attack that I... that I couldn't see what was happening! And she's gone!"

"Sadie... calm down. I don't think Rena's dead. If she was, then there would be a body, right?" Lisa's voice was quiet, reassuring. "She probably went deeper into the forest to hide. The worst that could have happened was that she got lost. We'll go to the police station first thing tomorrow and look for her, okay?"

Through her tears, Sadie saw Lisa's face, contorted to show her sympathy.

The words of Rena echoed through Sadie's mind. It had been nearly three years since she had spoken them, yet their truth had a lasting effect upon her mind. She could almost picture her friend's scowling face as she said 'Sadie, you're so dramatic! Can't you just think before you yell like that?' Sadie felt a wave of shame.

"All right..." she sniffed loudly.

"Listen... if there's anything I can do, I'll do it. I'll help you find your friend if you want," Dalton said. Sadie nodded in thanks.

They stood in silence for a moment. Without thinking, Sadie turned to look at the Drapion. Slowly she approached it, listening to the disturbance made by her every step. The grass around the area was entirely flattened from where Cranidos and Buneary had ran. Their blows had left a number of scars and bruises on its legs. Dark blood seeped through several bullet wounds in its abdomen, which Sadie guessed must have killed it. Sadie continued along its length, her eyes sweeping over the heavy damage the pokémon had taken. Its chest was sandwiched in between two fallen trees, partially crushed by the weight. Blood oozed down its arms. Despite its obvious evil intentions, she could not help but feel pity for the Drapion.

Lisa and Dalton joined her in the silent inspection. No one uttered a single word, whether it was from fear or amazement. All of a sudden, Lisa emitted a gasp.

"Look!"

Sadie turned just in time to see a murky black cloud evaporating from the Drapion's head. The entity passed through the tree leaves and branches, and eventually vanished somewhere in the sky. At that moment, Sadie felt a great weight lifted from her shoulders. Deep inside her mind, she felt something shift.

"What is that?" she whispered.

"It looked like steam!" Lisa exclaimed.

Dalton remained silent. He stared at the Drapion's face for several long moments.

"Something's not right," he said. "I saw a Starly with the exact same eye color a few days ago..."

"Really?" Sadie said, her eyes widening. "How is that possible?"

"I don't know. But there's something weird going on here. I'm getting the feeling that this attack wasn't an accident."

"How do you know?"

"Just a feeling. I've been having this feeling for quite a while now. Look, I can help you find your friend. But I need your help too."

Dalton slowly reached into his pocket and pulled out a mysterious, shining object. It was paper thin, and was molded into a crescent shape.

"What is that?" Lisa said.

"I haven't told you this yet, but I'm a soldier for the Sinnoh Armed Forces. My squad was ambushed by Darkrai in Route 203, and I'm the only survivor. I woke up in the hospital to find this in my pocket. It's called the Lunar Wing. And there's been an awful lot of strange things happening since I got it. I saw a red-eyed Starly near the hospital window, and now I see this red-eyed Drapion. It's weird. But I want to get to the bottom of this."

"You mean that there might be more of these ravenous red-eyes monsters out there?" Sadie asked, her voice rising.
Dalton nodded.

"Then we need to do something about it! We can't just let another mauling happen!" Lisa said. "I for one want to get to the root of this. There has to be some scientific explanation for those... things..."
"Well, I guess it sounds like a plan... only wait," Dalton paused. "Where's your family?"

"Mine's in another region," Lisa declared.

"My mom's in the hospital..." was all Sadie could say.

Dalton sighed. "Great. A couple of orphans. You're lucky I'm over eighteen. Anyways, like I said before, I'm staying at the Pokémon Center. You do whatever you want, but we'll meet in front of the building at nine o'clock. Deal?"

"Deal," the girls said simultaneously.
...
When Sadie reached her room in the Pokémon Center, she found it exactly the same as she had left it. Rena's blanket was still on the floor from when she had tossed it off, and her things were untouched. The alarm clock was slightly askew from when Sadie had reached out to check the time. Her backpack was in its usual spot beside her bed. She bent down beside it and took out her pokéballs, lost in thought.

If I had my pokémon with me... would things have been different? Would I have been any help?

The silence was deafening. After a quick shower, Sadie pulled the covers over her body. She closed her eyes, wishing she had never opened them.

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Ah, the attacking red-eyed Drapion. I have to say that you did a much better job of handling it this time around. The way you build the suspense as the girls see something strange and creepy in the night, how Sadie's fears build as they look for the unknown entity, and then, as Drapion reveals itself as an unusually vicious creature out for blood. Very well done.

Rena's disappearance is more mysterious too... A cloud of smoke, and when it clears, both her and her Pokemon are gone... And in typical Rea fashion she races headlong into the fray right before it happens XD

There is definitely some connection between the Lunar Wing and those creepy, red-eyed Pokemon. (Yeah, I know what it is already, but I'm not gonna spoil it)

Just one issue (and I apologize for not picking it up during proofreading) :
"Weezing, use Sludge Bomb!" she cried, her voice shaking. Weezing drifted forward, and launched a jet of purple matter at the Drapion's face.
Poison Attacks against Dark/Poison Drapion = not very effective. Weezing also has Fire Blast as an attack. And it's a female :)

Other than that, very good job on a very suspenseful and creepy (in a good way) chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Sadie, Lisa, and Dalton as they prepare to depart to investigate this matter :)

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It's chapters like these that make me thankful that I did a rewrite :P This one was, for some reason, hard for me to write. I rewrote Drapion's appearance three times. But, I'm happy with the final draft, and I'm glad you are too!

And thanks for not spoiling the connection. Haha.
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Sorry for the painfully long wait. During these past few weeks, I've sort of rekindles my interest in this fic. I've been busy with school, projects, and life in general. But the school year is almost over, so I'll have more time to write.


Onto the chapter!



Chapter 10

Just outside of Snowpoint City, nestled deep in the forest of Route 217, is a snowy clearing known as the Acuity Lakefront. The actual lake is rather small, spanning only a few hundred meters. Its surface reflects that of the sky above - white and bleak. The quiet location is made famous by the building that stands at its head, what is referred to as Sinnoh's northernmost point. Through a cloak of trees, one would see the tip of a domed ceiling, followed by several standing pillars and a tall, wrought-iron fence. The building is cloaked with an everpresent layer of snow that hides the beautiful architecture underneath. To the locals, it is known as the Snow Cottage. To everyone else, it is simply the president's mansion.

The conference room is located in the very back of the building, guarded by soundproof walls and a fingerprint scanner. The room itself is modern and spacious, with walls lined with bookshelves and a snack table in the corner. A long glass table takes up most of the center, surrounded by twenty identical chairs. The seat at the head of the table is reserved for the president himself. Though it appears similar to the rest of the chairs in the room, this one is stuffed with memory foam and an extra layer of padding, for those hard days when one's head feels heavy on his shoulders. The morning of July 19th was one of those days for Dr. Berry.

It had begun, just like any other, with a hunt through his wardrobe for a comfortable suit. Dr. Berry finally settled on his favorite - a smooth black coat, with a stark white polo shirt and a solid color tie. After getting dressed, he would make his way to his personal kitchen, where he would quickly prepare a bowl of cereal and an apple. Then, with his cup of coffee in hand, he would go down to his office, and answer phone call bombardments from several political groups asking for his opinion on 'pressing issues'. Dr. Berry simply referred to them as 'spam'; nothing a personalized recording couldn't solve. Later, he would meet with his personal advisor to find out what would await him that day.

"Sir, you have an important meeting with several governors of Sinnoh, along with the navy and military generals. They will arrive at the conference room at precisely 11:20 A.M to discuss recent events," the man had said, reading off from a large planner.

Thus his headache.

Dr. Berry made it a personal policy to appear as a stoic - to not show any particular excitement or disdain towards any task. Yet he could not help but cringe as he continued to listen to the ramblings of the governor of Jubilife City, a particularly temperamental woman named Mrs. Stein.

"... my city is running low on water. There are protests going on in the streets, and the phone lines are overflowing with emergency calls. Three hospitals have already gone bankrupt. Jubilife cannot last another day without extra funding! Please, Dr. Berry, don't focus all your attention on Darkrai! The people should come first!" She pounded her fist on the table to show emphasis, sending a fresh wave of ripples through Dr. Berry's drink. He let the silence hover over them for a few moments before answering.

"Mrs. Stein, please calm yourself. I've already ordered the shipment of food, medical supplies, and other necessities to your city, but I'm afraid that's all we can do. If we don't take action against Darkrai now, it won't just be your city. I understand that to solve this problem, some things must be sacrificed - "

"We are talking about human lives! Hundreds of people have died already because of this storm! And you think it's perfectly acceptable to ignore that, all for the sake of stopping this insignificant pokémon?"

At this, a gasp ran through the room. The murmurs stopped, however, when a beefy, bespectacled man rose to his feet.

"Insignificant? Oh, so you think wiping out an entire military squad is insignificant?" he countered. "The most important thing to focus on right now is Darkrai. Just as Dr. Berry said, it's not just your city that is suffering. We're all taking the heat here! We should strike Darkrai while we still have something to strike it with!"

“And how exactly are we supposed to strike it, Golgorov?” the man next to him interrupted. “The damn bullets will go right through! Are we forgetting what happened in Route 203?”


There was another outbreak of chatter. Several people rose from their chairs simultaneously, each trying to upstage the other. The next few moments became a blur of white noise - shrill voices, screeching chairs, and pounding fists. Dr. Berry fought the urge to rest his head. Suddenly -

"STOP!" The sudden shout rang above all others.

Heads turned immediately to the source of the sound. The door to the conference room had been opened, and on the threshold stood a tall man with smooth purple curls. Behind his silver-rimmed glasses, his eyes shone with a determination that betrayed his youth.

"Lucian?" Dr. Berry voiced his surprise. "I'm very sorry, but this is a private conference."

"I understand, sir. But I have important information to relay to you. Permission to speak?" With Dr. Berry's approval, Lucian stepped into full view. Behind him trailed the rest of the Elite Four team - happy-go-lucky Aaron, the knowing Bertha, casual Flint, and finally, the champion Cynthia. They carried themselves proudly, with a certain precision in their steps.

Lucian reached the end of the table opposite Dr. Berry, and sat in the empty chair. The Elite Four crowded around him. He began speaking immediately, his eyes darting from face to face.

"All right. By now, I assume you are all aware of what happened in Route 203. Unfortunately, such tragedies can't always be avoided. The best we can do is hope and plan for the future. And if there's anything to be learned from Route 203, it is that the current military plan is a failure. Right now, the army is broken off into separate squads that lie in wait for an attack, and there is no guarantee that there will ever be one. If Darkrai attacks a specific area, the squad there will suffer while the others won't know what to do with themselves. Instead, I propose that we have a single large group lying in wait in one specific location, while a second party lures Darkrai in."

It took a few moments for Lucian's words to sink in, during which the room was thoughtfully silent. A smile tugged at Dr. Berry's lips, but he did not speak, giving Dr. Golgorov enough time to rise from his chair.

"Your plan is interesting, Lucian, but how are we supposed to lure Darkrai?" the man asked.

Before Lucian could answer, a loud clank interrupted him. Dr. Berry had brought his mug down on the table with force, causing all heads to turn.

"Luring Darkrai will be a big operation. We must proceed with haste and caution," Dr. Berry began. "I do have an idea how to bring this about, however, it will require time and patience on everyone's part."

"Well? What is it?" Mrs. Stein said.

"Are you all aware that Mt. Coronet is a chain of volcanoes?" The question clearly startled Mrs. Stein, for she narrowed her eyes and looked around in confusion.

"What does that have to do with anything? The volcanoes have been dormant for thousands of years."

"But if an eruption were to happen then it would cause a great disturbance, no? Pokémon flee from disturbance. It is their nature."

Lucian's eyes widened. "No... it's monstrous! Stimulating an actual eruption would be deadly. Celestic Town and Eterna City would be destroyed!"

"Of course, we will do all the necessary evacuations before proceeding."

"The entire point of this operation is to do it with as little interference with the Sinnoh people as possible! Mass hysteria is the very thing we have to avoid!" Lucian protested.

"The entire point of this operation is to eliminate Darkrai before it gets out of hand!" Dr. Golgorov rose to his feet, looking Dr. Berry in the eye. "I support your plan, Mr. President. In my opinion, we must do whatever is necessary to ensure the long term safety of Sinnoh."

Once again, the room erupted in chatter. Some stood to praise Dr. Berry's plan, and others stood to challenge it. The volume climbed as each person tried to outspeak the other. Lucian's voice was lost among them, leaving his flailing hands the only sign of a moving speech.

Dr. Berry's eyes moved past the reddened faces of his colleagues, his ears tuning out the sound of their debates. His gaze settled on a tall man standing in the corner, the only one who wasn't talking. He wore a pressed gray suit, and his eyes were hidden behind coal black glasses. Too quick for anyone to notice, Dr. Berry gave him a slow nod. The man returned it, and appeared at his side a few seconds later.

"Any news?" Dr. Berry asked, leaning closer to make his whisper heard.

"The radiation has stopped. It has been found." The words were spoken softly, too quiet for anyone else to hear. Dr. Berry felt the color drain from his face.

"After all this time... it's finally happened."

For a few painful moments, the man was silent. "What now?"

"I want you to go to the general and tell him to enact my plan. Then report directly back to me. Every second counts. Go!"

With a final nod, the man slipped away from Dr. Berry. He cut through the crowd and disappeared behind the door. Dr. Berry closed his eyes for a moment, running through the previous twenty seconds like a tape recording.

Could it really be? Is this happening all over again?

When Dr. Berry opened them again, the debate was still in full force. No one had noticed the strange, silent man who had been at his side only moments before. But something in Lucian's guarded, calculating expression told him otherwise. With his lips lightly parted, he turned away from Dr. Berry a bit too quickly.

...

That same morning, in the chilly confines of the Oreburgh Town Library, Sadie sat beside a large reading table with her head propped up by her arm. In the few short minutes they had been there, Dalton had scanned most of the shelves in the Nonfiction section, stepping away from each one with a spiteful sneer.

"Mining.... mining.... and more mining..." Dalton said, running his fingers across the books' spines. "Doesn't this library have anything else?"

"Well, I have to admit, it has a good fiction section," Sadie said. She had been reading a book titled The Lone Torch, which was about a coal miner (no surprise there) who got lost in the mine. She had picked it up out of boredom, and after their first hour at the library, she had blown through the first thirteen chapters. Her eyes were beginning to grow sore, and her wrists were throbbing.

"This book is interesting," Lisa said, finally breaking her silence. She sat across from Sadie, a large book propped open in front of her. It as the same book she had been reading for almost half an hour. "It talks about the history of humans in Sinnoh. Apparently, the region was first settled over a thousand years ago. The first humans settled in what is now the Eterna Forest and Route 205. Then, some sort of... crisis extinguished the population. They know this because over the years, as they dug up bones and carbon dated them, they noticed a huge gap in the timeline. During those years, pokémon mainly dominated the region... then, the human population came back. Newer skeletons were found all of a sudden. It's amazing what you can find from bones."

Sadie's eyebrows perked in interest. She looked up from her own book to meet Lisa's eye. "Does it say what happened?"

Lisa shook her head. "It just says 'crisis'. When the humans were gone, their artifacts went too. So did their villages and farms."

"What could be so destructive as to destroy an ecosystem to that extent? As if the humans had never even existed?" Sadie pondered, her eyes drifting to the ceiling.

"No clue," Dalton said, approaching the table. "It couldn't be a disease, because that's just not the natural order of things. No matter the odds, there's always at least one survivor..."

"The Lunar Wing survived," Sadie said, snapping her fingers. "If every trace of the humans was eliminated, and the Lunar Wing wasn't, then maybe it wasn't made by human hands!"

"Wow... that makes sense!" Lisa said.

"Well, it's kind of obvious too," Dalton added. "I mean, from all the mining books I've been reading, there's no stone that is paper thin, shaped into a crescent, and heals people's nightmares."

Sadie found herself chuckling.

"The topic is interesting, though. What we really need now is something on legends, or folklore. A book that might be able to tell us about ancient artifacts," Dalton continued.

Sadie rose from her seat, closing her novel. "I'll go check. But first I want to put this book back."

"I'm gonna keep reading this," Lisa said, not moving from her spot.

Sadie left the reading area, and began pacing through the aisles. The green carpet muffled her footsteps as she walked past a maze of shelves, dodging the library's other patrons. Finally, she came across a shelf bearing a plaque labeled 'Fiction'.

In contrast to the musty Mining section, where covers were dusty and sand lodged in between pages, the fiction books were shiny and colorful. She quickly returned her novel to its designated place, dodging the library's other patrons, and made to exit the section. But just as she reached the exit, she came across something unusual - a thick volume lying on its spine, wedged messily into the shelf. Its end was sticking out noticeably, and the surrounding books were displaced from lack of space.

Well that's no way to treat a book! she frowned. It took considerable force to pull the book out, and when she did, several more fell to the floor. Its previous reader had to be either very careless... or in a hurry.

After returning all the fallen books to their place, Sadie turned her attention to the one in her arms. She flipped the book over, careful not to strain the nearly broken binding. The front cover read 'The Complete Creation Myth'. The pages, she noticed, were very yellow. Sadie cocked her head slightly to the side. She found the nearest table, sat down, and began to read.

The silence that followed lasted nearly half an hour, during which Sadie's hand became sweaty against her cheek, and her wrist numbed from lack of movement. The text on the pages was tiny, and Sadie had to squint to decipher most of it. Pictures were common, depicting colorful scenes of rising mountains, churning oceans, and pokémon Sadie had never seen before. A particular picture made a lasting impression on her mind, though she couldn't guess why - it depicted a strange, blue pokémon with a graceful neck and beady pink eyes. Its face, tiny and angular, was wedged in between two crescent-like shapes that came together at the top of its head. On its back was a banded ring, colored many different shades of pink. The caption read Cresselia arcus.

Soon, Sadie became so immersed in the book that the ticking of the wall clock became mute to her, as was the hushed chatter that surrounded her. It was only when a loud slam on the table shattered the silence that Sadie snapped out of her trance. She now found herself face-to-face with Lisa, who apparently had skipped over to her table only moments before.

"Sadie! Yoo-hoo!" Lisa said, waving her hand in front of Sadie's face.

Immediately, Sadie noticed how heavy her head felt. Her first response was to yawn. "Mmm?"

"We were wondering where you went," Lisa said. "Anyways, Dalton thinks we should leave. he can't find anything else, and neither can I."

"Wait, wait." Sadie shouted, as loud as the library regulations would allow. Lisa paused in mid-step. "This book is just what we need! The Complete Creation Myth." Sadie beamed. "We have to show Dalton!"

Lisa carefully took the book into her hands, wincing as her palm ran over the dusty, ripped cover. "My gosh, this thing is a mess! Where did you find it?"

"Right here, in Fiction. It was shoved right into a shelf. Someone must have left it here."

"This sounds like a good book!" Lisa said. She turned, and the two made their way back to the Mining section, here Dalton was waiting at a table.

"Where were you?" he asked.

Lisa placed the book carefully onto the table. "Sadie found what we need. It's the complete Sinnoh creation myth. It includes stuff about other regions, but it's mainly about this one."

Dalton leafed through the pages. He turned to Sadie. "How much did you read?"

"It's talking about how some poké-god called The Original One created all the regions we know today. Its power was very immense, but it couldn't directly run the planet itself, because it was trapped in a different dimension. So it created pokémon to keep balance. Kind of like Lugia and Ho-oh for Johto, and Mew for Kanto."

"What about Sinnoh?" Dalton asked.

"I just started that chapter. It says that Sinnoh was the last region it created, and it rose from a chain of volcanoes. The tallest one became Spear Pillar, and that's as far as I could get."

Dalton looked away from the book, rubbing his chin. "My doctor gave me a book on artifacts while I was in the hospital... It was a crappy book, but it said something interesting about the Lunar Wing. It was discovered in the 1800s, at the top of Spear Pillar.

"And there's more," Sadie said. Dalton and Lisa both turned to face her.

"I saw this really strange pokémon in the book..." Sadie began leafing through the pages. "It had the same exact colors as the Lunar Wing. There!" She exclaimed. Lisa and Dalton leaned in to look at the picture.

"Cresselia arcus..." Dalton read. "Pokémon of the moon, supposedly. One of the First created by the Original One. Represents the crescent moon. Served as a vector for The Original One's power, and has never been seen since. Its Wing, the only object it can be summoned with, was lost with its disappearance."

The three exchanged glances.

"The Lunar Wing," Sadie said, her heartbeat quickening with the excitement of discovery.

"So this is where it came from..." Dalton said, his eyes never leaving the pages. "It makes sense... I mean, they are the exact same color."

"And according to this book, the Lunar Wing summons Cresselia," Sadie pointed out. "But why summon it?"

"Apparently The Original One will channel its power through it," Lisa replied.

"And why do we need that?" Dalton asked, strumming his fingers on the table. "Maybe to help wake more people afflicted with nightmares?"

There was a prolonged silence.

"We have to get this book," Lisa finally said.

Sadie sighed. "That's going to be a problem."

"What do you mean?"

Sadie flipped back to the inside cover, showing them the 'PROPERTY OF CANALAVE LIBRARY' stamp on the pages.

Sadie watched Lisa's smile wilt. "What kind of idiot..." her voice trailed off as her fingers ran across the stamp.

"Shouldn't there be an Oreburgh copy here, though?" Dalton asked. "If Canalave has it, then this place should too. We probably didn't see it because someone checked it out."

"Well, Sinnoh's libraries are 'themed' by their location," Sadie explained. "This library deals with mostly mining because we're in a mining town. And Canalave is the main port city of Sinnoh, so they get all kinds of tourists there."

"So we have to go all the way to Canalave to legally get this book?" Lisa said, her voice rising.

"Of course not," Dalton said simply. "That'll take too long. We'll just sneak it out."

Sadie's eyes widened. What shocked her even more was the nonchalant tone he used.

"No!" Sadie's exclamation came out louder than she intended. She scanned the area for any onlookers, then dropped her voice down to a whisper. "We can't sneak this book out! First, they'll assume that we want to take it without checking it out, but when they see the label... They'll fine us! Fine us for a book we didn't smuggle!"

"It's not like this book will be missed," Dalton shrugged. "We need this information more than anyone here does." Before Sadie could make a move, Dalton lifted the book from the table, opened a flap of his jacket, and zipped the book inside. Surprisingly, it was barely noticeable due to the jacket's bulky material.

"But..." Sadie said, her voice reaching a frantic edge. "Can't we just put it back and come back for it tomorrow?"

"We can't risk someone else taking it," Dalton said. "Walk slowly, and we won't attract attention."

Sadie looked to Lisa for support, but was shocked to see her rising at Dalton's command. She approached Sadie and gently pulled on her arm. "Let's go."

With both of them looking at her expectantly, Sadie had no choice but to get up. With Dalton leading the way, they exited the reading area, passed all the major sections, and came to the lobby. The clerk on duty, nodded at them as they passed.

"Have a nice day," she said with a smile.

Dalton nodded. "You too."

"See ya," Lisa waved.

Sadie had to clench her fists to keep her hands from shaking. One by one, they filed through the tall sensors that stood by the doorway. Her breath froze as Dalton stepped on the mat. She braced herself for the alarm, but nothing came. Lisa went next, then Sadie followed suit. When they had all safely exited the building, Sadie heard Lisa let out a sigh of relief. They had made it.

But despite their victory, Sadie could still feel the clerk's gaze bore into her back as they left the library, even as they crossed the street onto a different city block.

"Will you relax already? We made it." Dalton said. "When we're done with the book, we'll sneak it back in."

Sadie nodded, but maintained silence. They made their way through the rest of the town, stopping when they reached the familiar Pokémon Center.

For a few seconds, no one spoke. A few trainers shoved their way past them, and entered the building. Finally, Sadie stepped forward. "I guess I'll take it. I've read the most, and I really want to finish it." Sadie narrowed her eyes. "I don't want to see anything happen to this book - I'm not letting it out of my sight!"

Dalton handed the book over, chuckling. They said their good-byes, and went their separate ways - Lisa to her own hotel, and Sadie and Dalton to their respective rooms.

When Sadie closed the door to hers, she was momentarily overwhelmed by its silence and emptiness. Through the windows, she caught a glimpse of a peaceful, happy world. After a brief pause, she plopped down onto her bed, her book in her hands. It didn't take her too long to open it up to Cresselia's page. For a few minutes, Sadie stared at the picture, taking in every detail. Cresselia, was floating against a blue-black background, the colors of its body standing out in contrast. Its eyes were perfectly round and defined, staring out at Sadie's face almost as if they could see it.

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I must say, I'm a bit on the fence over the whole "volcano eruption" plan. On the one hand, it's gonna displace a whole lot of citizens and probably is going to cause mass chaos. On the other hand, Darkrai appearances and attacks have been random, and it's been impossible thus far to predict where it will strike next. Should Darkrai react instinctively, at least this gives the army a definite location where they can confront it. Of course, this still leaves the question, "What do they do about Darkrai once they've cornered it?" One thing I do know is, if Dr. Berry does go through with this plan, there will be no margin for error. He will emerge from it either as a hero or as a mass murderer. Certainly it's a plan which cannot be undertaken in haste - careful considerations and precautions must be considered.

Not a lot of action this chapter, but it's not really needed. The story itself, in just two scenes gets some major developments. First was the revelation of Dr. Berry's plan for drawing out Darkrai and the split opinions about it among the other leaders (as well as my own divided thoughts on it). Second was the old library book and the myths contained within. Perhaps a closer study of it will reveal why the Lunar Wing has suddenly reappeared in Dalton's hands.

And that Dalton... always willing to take the sort of risks that Lisa and Sadie wouldn't even consider trying, lol

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I must say, I'm a bit on the fence over the whole "volcano eruption" plan. On the one hand, it's gonna displace a whole lot of citizens and probably is going to cause mass chaos. On the other hand, Darkrai appearances and attacks have been random, and it's been impossible thus far to predict where it will strike next. Should Darkrai react instinctively, at least this gives the army a definite location where they can confront it. Of course, this still leaves the question, "What do they do about Darkrai once they've cornered it?" One thing I do know is, if Dr. Berry does go through with this plan, there will be no margin for error. He will emerge from it either as a hero or as a mass murderer. Certainly it's a plan which cannot be undertaken in haste - careful considerations and precautions must be considered.

Not a lot of action this chapter, but it's not really needed. The story itself, in just two scenes gets some major developments. First was the revelation of Dr. Berry's plan for drawing out Darkrai and the split opinions about it among the other leaders (as well as my own divided thoughts on it). Second was the old library book and the myths contained within. Perhaps a closer study of it will reveal why the Lunar Wing has suddenly reappeared in Dalton's hands.

And that Dalton... always willing to take the sort of risks that Lisa and Sadie wouldn't even consider trying, lol
I'm glad I revised how Dr. Berry came up with his plan. This one makes him seem more... forceful and knowing rather than just another person proposing something.
I'm also happy with my revisions with the book part. Glad you liked it :)
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I'm seeing some serious connections here:
First off, the Drapion attacked during a New Moon, which is when Darkrai is said to appear. Second of all, Cresselia (in the games, at least) can wake people from nightmares.
Perhaps
Cresselia gave Dalton this item in order to save Sinnoh from Darkrai, and the Drapion came from a nightmare, and escaped when Dalton used the Cresent Wing.
Either way, the story is good, so far.

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I'm seeing some serious connections here:
First off, the Drapion attacked during a New Moon, which is when Darkrai is said to appear. Second of all, Cresselia (in the games, at least) can wake people from nightmares.
Perhaps
Cresselia gave Dalton this item in order to save Sinnoh from Darkrai, and the Drapion came from a nightmare, and escaped when Dalton used the Cresent Wing.
Either way, the story is good, so far.
It goes a bit deeper than that, but you're on the right track :)
Glad you like it so far, and thanks for commenting!