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Old August 30th, 2009 (5:23 PM).
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    Hi everyone!

    I love to make music and I also love to write lyrics! So, because I want to make everything perfectly, there are only 2 lyrics I wrote I'm satisfied with. So, here you have them, please rate them!

    Please remember, I'm from Austria and I can't speak english very well, so please don't be too angry with embarassing grammar-mistakes or something like that .

    And I stole the melodies from Billy Talent's newest songs. The first song can be sung along with "Bloody Nails + Broken Hearts" and the second with "Pocketful Of Dreams". I'm glad about any kind of feedback .

    Nobody’s Perfect

    The glass is broken, the door is closed
    Is this the kind you get sorrows solved
    How can you think something bad like that
    Don’t you remember the time we had
    So many times you’ve just thrown away
    Because I’ve thrown every lie away
    I’ve told you every mind I kept

    Inside of me, you can’t stand the fact

    No, you’re not this perfect person that you thought
    And it seems like you forgot reality

    Reality

    Nobody’s perfect, it’s a lie
    Nobody, neither you nor I
    Can say mistakes are never done
    No, neither you nor anyone

    I was just trying to show my views
    You turned your back and behaved so cruel
    I’ve criticized many sides of you
    But you can’t say that you’ve not done too

    No, you’re not this perfect person that you thought
    And it seems like you forgot reality

    Reality, reality

    Nobody’s perfect, it’s a lie
    Nobody, neither you nor I
    Can say mistakes are never done
    No, neither you nor anyone
    Nobody’s perfect, it’s a lie
    Perfection, neither you nor I

    Can say mistakes are never made
    I’ve never said

    I’ve never said, I’ve never said
    I’m never gonna take the blame
    I’ll never say, I’ll never say
    It’s better to throw away the blame

    You don’t account for the things you say

    Who is when nobody’s left to blame
    You’re far away from reality

    Nobody’s perfect, it’s a lie
    Perfection, neither you nor I
    Can say mistakes are never done
    No, neither you nor anyone
    Nobody’s perfect, it’s a lie
    Perfection, neither you nor I

    Can say mistakes are never made
    I’ve never said

    I’ve never said, I’ve never said

    Let Me Break Away

    Everyday you’ve played the hypocrite
    You said you love me even though you never did
    You’ve never told me why you didn’t care if I’d break, I’d break
    You went away to another one
    I’m all alone and starring at the mess you’ve done
    But now you’re sorry, knocking at my door, it’s too late, too late

    I don’t love you, this is what you said
    I can’t stand you, this is what you meant
    You didn’t care about the
    Way you let me break away

    You used to need a pencil made of pain
    To get this sentence written in my pate
    You threw away the chance to get me back
    You’re scared now to try cause you may break your neck

    Is this is a game you try to play with me
    Am I supposed to play if I don’t want to win
    Love is nothing you can get whenever you want, you want

    Now I love you, this is what you say
    Now I need you, this is what you mean
    You didn’t care about the
    Way you let me break away

    You used to need a pencil made of pain
    To get this sentence written in my pate
    You threw away the chance to get me back
    You’re scared now to try cause you may break your neck

    You used to need a pencil made of pain
    To get this sentence written in my pate
    You threw away the chance to get me back
    You’re scared now to try cause you may break your neck

    You used to need a pencil made of pain
    To get this sentence written in my pate
    You threw away the chance to get me back
    You’re scared now to try cause you may break your neck

    You used to need a pencil made of pain
    To get this sentence written in my pate
    You threw away the chance to get me back
    You’re scared now to try cause you may break your neck

    You used to need a pencil made of pain
    To get this sentence written in my pate
    You threw away the chance to get me back
    You’re scared now to try cause you may break your neck
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