Birds

Started by TTYO October 12th, 2004 9:29 PM
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Age 36
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Singapore
Seen April 21st, 2012
Posted April 20th, 2012
219 posts
19.3 Years
This is a Finding Nemo-type Fic that should be made into a CGI animation.

Summary

In late Jurassic China, in a land of Dinosaurs. There was a village of small fuzzy dinosaurs called Furries led my their leader, Kangas. For years they have enslaved their mutant individuals that are born feathered. Of course, many feathered Furries or Split Furries have escaped away from the village and gathered together to find a new home.

Retribution came when Kangas's wife hatched a feathered son, Bird. He was ill treated by family and society as a slave. Bird has a good friend called Ave, the daughter of Kangas' associates who was a kind Furry who treated his servant well. In Furries, a male has to go thru a group hunting to bring a successful kill before being pronouced adult. Bird was deprived of this chance and became angry. He left for a place of freedom. Bird even allowed his flight feathers to grow freely.

When Bird was attack by Pterosaurs, a Swinger, named Wugi and Wip, a Confuses, saved him. It turned out that Wugi was the cousin of Bird. So... it turned out that Kangas' father had two sons, Kangas and Raptor,' Who was to become the White Maned Raptor'. The two of them were good brothers but when both fell in love with the same girl,Orchid, Raptor decided to let Kangas, his elder brother take her. But Orchid loved Raptor and not Kangas. Kangas was mad that his younger brother had stolen his love and the two brother became life enemies and ceased any kinship. Worse Kangas was appointed leader,feathered furries became slaves. Raptor and Orchid in order to defend themselves develop style of attacks and defense to fight their way out of the village. The two styles, called 18 Raptor strikes (For Males since it uses male energy) and the female energized White Bone Claw. Raptor also found the skill to fly, taking his bride and many feathered Furries out of the village and settled down with the Confuses. They formed their Split Furry tribe which consisted of two subtribes, Swingers and Four Wings which was what Bird was.

Wip and Wugi became Bird's friends and Bird learnt to fly. Flying is in fact a combination of skill which created powerful blows from kicks and palms.

Bird suddenly got the news that Ave was marrying his Elder brother and rushed off to disrupt the wedding. But it turned out it was Ave's sister who's the bride. Bird was beaten by his Kangas but was rescued by a Mysterious.
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Posted May 17th, 2014
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So many characters @[email protected] its sort of hard to figure out what is going on, because it seems that everyline, a new character is being introduced and it continues that way.
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