Short poetry is okay so long as they have nice flow and they're tonkas, Cinquains(I think), and haikus.
I'm not sure if I misunderstood you here. Are you saying that all short poems have to be structured like cinquains and haikus?
You guuyyyys. Just cuz there's a stickied list that tells you about different types of poetry doesn't mean that everything you write has to fall within the constraints of a certain style or pre-arranged structure/rhyme scheme. Historical knowledge of poetry is great, knowledge of popular styles and formats is all good, but don't let it ultimately control and restrict your writing. Your poem will suffer for it if you try to squeeze it into a rigid format, I guarantee it. Some people hate free verse but in my opinion it is always 1000000x better than forced rhymes that make no sense within the context of the piece.
And if that's not what you meant, cookie, I apologize but I had to get this little rant-type thing (though I don't know if I'd call it that, I'm not angry) out sometime.
AS FOR THE POEM IN QUESTION, since I feel bad about coming into this thread to derail it, I thought it was nice and hangs together well. Here's a little hint, if you want the last stanza to form a coherent "sentence" like the other ones do and thus conclude the pattern, you could add a colon after "myself". :)