Freindshp battles

Started by TimeDialga33 October 6th, 2009 3:42 PM
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Athabasca , Alta
Seen December 18th, 2009
Posted December 13th, 2009
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14.1 Years
One Morining , Morace woke up in a happpy mood.He was excited. His mom shouted"Morace i got somthing to tell you!"Morace walked down stairs slowly in bright clothes. he asked"what do you want to say?" " Well, your freind joesph came looking for you,he said he was wanting to play with you. but,he is now at relic town, could you please go see him?" "okay Mom.Morace replied in a happy way.
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This has a lot of issues with it. Grammar, spelling, lack of description, lack of narration, too short.

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Right now, this is closed for not meeting the standards of the section.

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