I'll Edit This Later.

Started by Loki October 18th, 2009 12:21 AM
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Loki

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Yeah new gallery for the cuz.
I can't think of a title right now, so that's... why the title is the way it is. xD;;

Um, guidelines....

- No I don't take requests.
- No you can't take the graphics in here without asking- though I'll probably let you take it if you ask, so don't be shy.
- Yes I never update.
- No I don't take requests.
- Yes, all the manga colorings here are free for your use! Be it in icons or tags or whatever. Go for it. For colorings, credit is nice, but not necessary.

Not gonna get too fancy with this.
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moments.

quixotic

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leave title as is
Also, you meant to say you are not taking requests twice?
Not gonna be a huge rate because I am not in the mood quite frankly, but you get some at least?

http://i520.photobucket.com/albums/w326/zetsu-bou/hei.png
Ok, this one is different to most of yours cause of the use of the C4Ds to add depth, effects and atmosphere whether intentional or not. First of all the depth is incredible. The blurred part in the foreground over to the right is excellent!
The colours and the mix of black, white and red is great. But major kudos goes to the fact that I can see that the focal is on a train, and that C4D is in there with him. 'Tis very good, and a style I have been meaning to try out and never got the chance...
Atmosphere is great, nice and dark blah.
First of all, I believe the focal was sharpened a little bit too much, it is on the verge of getting that "I was sharpened so much that now I look low quality" feel.
I also feel that the foreground stuff could be blurred a little more, but I like blurring...
So in summary, the only real thing I don't like is I think it is too sharpened (focal) and the foreground could be blurred more, however both are personal opinion.

I will actually and honestly be back for more rates later...
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lol you guys were all trying to talk to me and i was all like, AWAY!

woot, loki has a new gallery. THIS IS RENYUI/VIVAA/CHIBI BTW!

nice tagz, i like the third one. It's quite a bit out of your style, but its got a nice, fitting render, and good depth too.

The only one i kind of have a problem with is the marco tag. It just seems relatively simple, although im sure there was quite a bit of work put into it...maybe?

Nice work! 8D
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Loki

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@moments:
Yeah, it actually isn't on the verge of looking so sharpened it looked low quality, it is so sharpened it's LQ. xDD
I forgot I sharpened it in the very very beginning when I was adding my final touches, and by the time I noticed, it was already way out of my history and I already had like, four applied layers and I was like, "FML."

Blurring the foreground stuff could work. You mean like the Nebula? I feel like it'll make the whole thing kind of unbalanced in terms of sharp, not sharp, and blurred? I dunno. I probably won't change that one, like I said in the last line of my post, but thanks for the crit. |D And omg you noticed it was a train. Kudos for you. [/half the people I showed this to when I originally made it were like, "Lol is that a building?"]

@Renyui:
Lol for why? ;^;

Ah yeah the third one definitely was not my usual cup of tea. Took forever to make it look nice. <A<;;

And no actually you're right. The Marco tag was essentially no work included. Probably like, six layers at most. I added the text, decals, a few more blue swooshy things and then colored the crap out of it. Done. xDD

@Mr. Epic
Well thanks. :D

Angela

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the best here, even if you did follow a tut.

What she said.. That one looks absolutely amazing! May I ask what tut you used?


Then comes this one.. :D




I'd ask to use it.. But you didn't make a avy to match... ;;
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@CME: Yeah... My best stuff comes from tuts. xD; For obvious reasons~

@Angela: Thanks. Um, the tutorial I used is by peewee on Planet Renders.
Well for now actually, that one is probably off-limits, mostly because I used it so recently. (And because it's one of my favorites. oAo;) But yeah, there is a matching avy, but like I said.

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aaaaa loki. Orgasmic tags as always, I see.

#2 is my favorite. 8> It's so hard to start with a white background for me. >_< Orange contrasts from the B+W very nicely. I love how you do your text, especially the Marco one. It looks so... ummm I don't know how to describe it... official? Lol, idk.

Nice work. I want to marry your talent.
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I'm disappointed, probably not for the reason you are thinking though.

3rd is the best imo, best concept. Though I'd prefer to see greys in the shades rather than the bluey. Sharpen is used on too many times too.

Also fix the last? I'd say trash it, ... or just use clipping masks of older tags.

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@cherii: Thanks. :D
Starting with white backgrounds is my favorite. I love white background tags. |3
And glad you like the text on the Marco one. xD; It's pretty much all I did to that tag though. :B
Sorry, my talent is already married to my graphics guru. D: It appreciates the sentiment though. xD!

@munna: ... Why are you disappointed, dare I ask? xD
3: And there's blue? I... don't see any blues? oAo; [/the color on my monitor kinda sucks though]
5: "Fix it". xDD Fix what exactly? "Everything"?



Well, I got advice on the last one from another forum, so...



We'll see. :( I added the flare on my own whim, but I'm not so sure about it anymore. x^x
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It actually might be my eyesight. I sometimes see black as dark navy.

Bad type, it's too solid and doesn't suggest fire.. like the effects do. (possible black letter instead). Also maybe a red photo filter to show the intensity of the flames. Right now he looks cold. Stretch out the flames to the right as well.
Looks like soft light and a yellow photo filter was used. xD

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@munna: Sepia photofilter. Suggest fire... xD;; I'll see what I can do about that later. I'd imagine it's probably too heavy too. I kinda think I might just kill the text in general. I can't find a good place to put it where it won't look funky. :( And... red photofilter? That might look kinda weird. But I do get what you're saying. Give it more of a glow, so it looks more like fire and less like..... smudge, right? xD I'll do something to that extent, thanks! <3

@acid: You can't do that here at PC. DDD: You actually have to comment. xD; Since this is the only time you did it, and you're new, I'll let you off with this slap on the wrist, but yeah. You always have to say at least something. :( Read the rules of this section again, ya?

@Stoutert: I gave you a yellow infraction, because you've already posted extremely vague comments in more than three threads in the whole of the Art Gallery- you need to make more specific posts from now on. Read the rules of each section carefully.

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my favorite one! i want the tutorial xD

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@CME: I did actually. :O On OM I have a more detailed list of what I actually did. I added that black blurry thing in the back, and then re-read your comment after I'd finished up, and realized that I picked the wrong shape. (AKA, mine didn't really have any streaks that could complement the light source.) So I said I would re-do that if I needed to- which I assume I do. xD

@kaylabby: Thanks. xD; Like I said, you can find the tutorial at Planet Renders. It's in a stickied thread, by peewee, so it's not hard to find.

@Naoi: Aww, sorry. ;^; I hate requests though, and people generally don't appreciate it much anyway.
Glad you like my work though. xD Thanks~


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Hmmmmm.... :< [/mixed feelings]

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Substantial enough of a length of time for me. xD;


Anyway, this is a collaboration between me and AcidNight for a collaboration SotW. He did the base, and I added some stuff, and this is after my step.
There might be another version if he decides to fix something. |3

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Epic.

Alice: Epic, tutorial or no.

Solar: OMG WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WHITE BGs ;~;

Hei: I actually don't like this one, too dark for my tastes.

Marco: Epic typography, and I wish I had your coloring skills. D:

VDubb: That text is... Well it looks REALLY awkward, the version without text is a lot better.

TMI: Awesome effects, but the render... I just don't like it. Idk why. =[

Neku tag: Only thing I don't like about the Neku tag is that the render look so oversharpenned, it's lq (Which I observe you've done before.)

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http://i520.photobucket.com/albums/w326/zetsu-bou/HIBARI.png
Lovely use of flow and negative space in this one. The first thing that smacked me in the face was the focal, did you stretch that thing out of proportion? Maybe not your fault and that of the artist, but it looks funkay.
Liking the placement of effects, however I really think you could have smudge of light texture a bit more over the render, particularly the left side to help him just blend in a little more, get a bit more depthish in there.
Text is eh, not bad but not great. Colours are great, font maybe wasn't the best choice, but it works. Perhaps a thicker font might have worked better...
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@moments: Lol, thicker, thinner, thicker, thinner! I obviously don't have an eye for this.

Anyway, I did not stretch it, it's actually the style. xD; If I stretched it out of proportion, I'm pretty sure I'd have to jump off of a cliff and kill myself for ever thinking that I was even moderately good, and seeing as I'm still alive... well you get it. xD
'Tis one of my petpeeves. |3

And yeah, I see how a light texture would look nice there. Maybe I'll throw one in there in the future. |3

@bitter end: Thanks, is all I can really think of to say to most of your comments. xD; And various "Aww"s and "I agree"s.
However on the Neku tag, I was looking for more of the pixellated look you get in-game. So it wasn't an issue of oversharpening so much this time more than an intended effect. (Especially on his arms.)




Currently: Working on a base for a second acid-loki collab and trying to get over my on-coming cold. >A<;