My Immortal

Started by Starr Leonhart November 6th, 2009 2:54 PM
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Starr Leonhart

Summertime <3

Age 25
Female
Not at your house.
Seen August 8th, 2017
Posted June 24th, 2013
54 posts
14.5 Years
My Immortal
Starr cried. She cried a lot after he died. After Squall died. Her husband of two years. Squall had been in a terrible car accident. He had been hit head on.
Killed instantly.
Starr remembered the day he was buried. It was one of the many days she wanted to forget. She remembered that she had two of her best friends hold her up because she was afraid she would collapse. Her friends were Nami Kitsu and Destinee Landler.
They were by her side that night as she cried out her heart. They were beside her as she screamed herself hoarse. They were there as she said Squall's name over and over and over.
They were both there as she finally fell asleep. All of her troubles finally forgotten. At least for now they were.
They couldn't help but think the same thing as they walked out of her room.
Squall was really gone.
But his memory here will always be Immortal.
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"I'm so tired of being here, suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave, I wish that you would just leave
Your presence still lingers here and it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream, I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me

You used to captivate me by your resonating light
Now, I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream, I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me, I've been alone all along

When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream, I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me, me, me."
THE END...
I love Castle.

Charmageddon

Charizard has evolved into ^

Seen April 25th, 2016
Posted June 3rd, 2012
859 posts
14.4 Years
You may want to change the title - when I saw this thread I immediately thought of the infamous Harry Potter fanfic of the same name.
"Strong Pokemon. Weak Pokemon. That is only the selfish perception of people. Truly skilled trainers should try to win with their favourites."
- Karen, Pokemon Gold, Silver and Crystal

Age 30
Male
Melbourne, Australia
Seen January 8th, 2013
Posted April 30th, 2012
1,031 posts
14.1 Years
You may want to change the title - when I saw this thread I immediately thought of the infamous Harry Potter fanfic of the same name.
If I'm not mistaken the poem is the lyrics to the song "My Immortal" by Evanescence, but like I said just from memory because I haven't heard that song since it was on the radio five or six years ago. But yeah, as for the actual fan fic goes, I can't say I'm really a fan. I'm sure it means a lot to you, so I'm not saying it's bad because it depends on the person reading it, but to me it doesn't really impact me emotionally. Sorry.

Starr Leonhart

Summertime <3

Age 25
Female
Not at your house.
Seen August 8th, 2017
Posted June 24th, 2013
54 posts
14.5 Years
If I'm not mistaken the poem is the lyrics to the song "My Immortal" by Evanescence, but like I said just from memory because I haven't heard that song since it was on the radio five or six years ago. But yeah, as for the actual fan fic goes, I can't say I'm really a fan. I'm sure it means a lot to you, so I'm not saying it's bad because it depends on the person reading it, but to me it doesn't really impact me emotionally. Sorry.
yes it is evanescene.
and i'm sorry you didn't like it.
I love Castle.