just a song i wrote today

Started by darkblastoise89 October 21st, 2004 12:58 PM
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Age 34
east siiide
Seen March 20th, 2005
Posted December 19th, 2004
420 posts
18.7 Years
i don't know what possesed me to write this, it was just random...

haven't seen u in a while
but i wanna let you know
that i'm feelin your style
and i won't let u go
i'll prove myself worth your while
urs to have and and to hold
when i hear your name i smile
are you tuned to my flow?
'member that time on the tile?
when we were laying on the flo'
u said i was such a child,
but now i really know.

with your hair in my face,
your lips pressed to mine
your hand in my hand,
do u remember that time?
it just flsahed across my mind
as it does every time,
when you look in my eyes,
a message so sublime....

heartbeat poundin' in your chest,
responding so gently
to my slightest caress.
i asked you do u love me,
you said more or less,
your mind says no,
but your heart says yes...
name changed to ~\Ethereal_Knight/~
Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
1,912 posts
18.6 Years
HOLY CHEESE FRIES. I love this one!!!! I think this is one of, if not your best poem/song yet, Matt! *glomps* It has an awsome flow to it, and it really speaks to me, well done, Matt! ^____^

~Kelsey
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(. (.` ♥ Kelsey

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It's not bad, it flows well and it doesn't have that annoying teenage-angst thing that a lot of 15-year-olds tend to have. (I try to avoid it but it creeps in sometimes...)


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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Random stuff? That's what works best I find. I wrote a really random song the other day. It's actually called "Stupid Song". o_O


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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Because that's when you let your creativity flow properly. I'll post some of my stuff here someday...


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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I'm just the same. I guess it's the same for everyone ^^


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
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thanx, i didn't really think it was dat good ^ ^; i was just bored so i wrote it in m [email protected][email protected] my teacher almost saw it <<; i'm glad u all like it XD
Speaking of math, I can't technically and mathematically review your poetry without going over the possible limit. So meh, be happy with that.

die math die! eh I'l shut up now

Also I write my poetry in the hard drive... Mum nearly found it... it's equivalent (ahhhh math has possessed me! j/k)

I love it. How can you rhyme so well, how do you get that flow? Wow. I have a lot to learn from you.
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I write all mine in small exercise books which I hide in the middle of my school folders - my mum's scared of their messiness, she doesn't look in them XD


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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