Trapped

Started by Kelsey October 22nd, 2004 1:13 PM
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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This poem is titled "Trapped". Of course it's by me, and I wrote it a long time ago when I was a bit depressed. But, I'll post it anyway. ^_^

Trapped

Bars all around me,
I cannot escape.
My soul is contracted,
My mouth bound with tape.

I try to remember,
My life that's now gone.
My bones are so weak,
Like a newborn fawn.

I feel as though,
I do not belong.
And so I resort to,
The strength of my song.

I have to get out,
I long to be free.
I can only rely on,
The strength within me.

Hope you like it, critisizms and compliments are welcome. ^_^

~Kelsey
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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Yes!! Pikapal I could hug you! *hugs* XD That is the exact meaning of the poem! To show that all of us, adult, teen, or child, we can all relate to the fact that we all feel locked up and trapped within ourselves at times.

And thankies for teh rating, Matt! ^_^

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Wow, Kels, that's so beautiful! I could never write anything like that. I'm just not good at poetry. It makes me feel so sad, yet happy in a way....


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Seen March 30th, 2005
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W00T! *glomps Justy* Thanks for reading it. Yeah, I wrote it in a depressed state. XD So, I guess you'd have to be in-human to not feel even a little bit sad after reading it. XD

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Its great and (even though i am a boy) wept when i read it, i can relate.
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Seen March 30th, 2005
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Thanks SWPA!!! I do like to try and tell stories when I write poems, or create them to have people be able to relate with them. Those are the best kinds of poems IMO. ^_^

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