Umbreon/Espeon?

Started by .::t w i l i g h t::. October 23rd, 2004 8:22 AM
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Should I keep it like it is?

*Looks around frantically* STALKERS!!
Seen August 23rd, 2008
Posted May 22nd, 2005
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18.6 Years
I don't know if this is in the right place, but, I'm working on a fanfic and Umbreon and espeon are the stars. Should I change it?

PS: this is what one person said about my fic:

problems

-bragging always makes your reader biased, and biased as in disliking your fanfic before they even read your fanfic

-Umbreon = OU boring junkie 80% of the time

-plot can be as lame as possible, or as slow as possible, but a fanfic with such a plot can be just as good if your writing style can save yourself. Writing style can make the most unoriginal slow moving boring plot come to a new light.
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