A Taillow That Once Singed

Started by pokefangunner January 31st, 2010 11:30 AM
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Seen May 1st, 2010
Posted May 1st, 2010
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"Up high in tree
one Taillow sings
but now it sits alone
with a broken wing...
For one, the format should be like that. Poems aren't just straight lines. Also, Taillow should be capitalized. Then, in your title, you put "singed." "Singed" is not a word. The correct use would be either "sang" or "sung" I myself and not entirely sure. Other than that, it was a pretty simple poem.
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Posted November 25th, 2014
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For one, the format should be like that. Poems aren't just straight lines. Also, Taillow should be capitalized. Then, in your title, you put "singed." "Singed" is not a word. The correct use would be either "sang" or "sung" I myself and not entirely sure. Other than that, it was a pretty simple poem.

I fixed it thaks for telling me :)