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Old March 1st, 2010 (6:19 AM).
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Nice Fakemon. I like you work. Can I use your fakemon. Can you make me some. I you want please pm me. I will give creadite for fakemon. I realy need some for my hack.
Why dont you make their Back script {Shiny}.
It depends on how your hack looks and how your progress is. And I think you mean Credit. ^^ And maybe later I will make their back sprites.

Here is the evo of the panda pokémon.


And a Tropius in his origin form.
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Old March 1st, 2010 (8:56 AM).
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And a Tropius in his origin form.
Thats a nice algamon.
I see tropius,victeribell and weepinbell?
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Why does your fakemon called Syphonia, look like a recolour of scarf's fakemon?

It looks like you just recoloured it, and changed a few tiny details.
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Why does your fakemon called Syphonia, look like a recolour of scarf's fakemon?

It looks like you just recoloured it, and changed a few tiny details.
Ben. It's just a coincidence. The pose itself is the only thing that looks similar, but the details...are far away from 'similar'. If you watch at Syphonia closely, you will look that there are certain pixels where the body bends somehow, which alone explains that it was in no way pixeled over from Scarf' sprite.

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I'm going to take your sprites one by one and comment on the stuff that DOESN'T have to do with splicing (because a big portion of your sprites are more or less good splices):

Afrontree~
The shading is great for the most part, but the mouth is using a very smooth colour.
The outline is okay, on the lower part of the body, but I guess that's because of the splicing.
The upper body, and especially the hand-branches have too light of an outline.


Treemar~
Much better than the previous, but the mouth remains the same.
Also, the part of the main body where the stomach is entangled needs some shading, which is missing.


Sypha~
I don't really get what this thing on its face is. Is it a blue mask? It's somehow laced weird, as it goes off on the left. The outlines and shading are okay, though.

Syphone~
This would be my favourite among your sprites.
Great shading, coordination, concept and outlines (maybe the upper wings might need work), but overall, it's beautiful.

Syphonia~
Even if this looks mighty at first glance, I would say that it's pretty crappy. It has proportion errors, first of all.
One wing is much bigger than the other, the torso scales (the yellow ones) spin in a weird way as they come closer to the head and there seems to be a 'bump' on its belly.
Also, some outlines are bright, while they are at the same side as your dark outlines.
The only cool thing about it is the concept and shading.
Finally, as others have said before, try being more creative about names, that also counts for some of the rest of your sprites.

Peakid~
The palette chosen for this sprite is a great combination.
However, there is one large buggy proportion error: the head. It's too big, even bigger than its evo's.
Shading-wise, it's cool. Be careful on the blurry outlines on the torso and right wing.

Peawk~
It's pretty good, but it also has one proportional error that comes in and breaks the silence: the right wing is wide. It shouldn't go past the tail by the much.
Also, why did t he feet grow a brighter outline? O_O

Bunneggi~
It's so cuuuuute! :3
But I'll have to agree with this person here.

Emfeon~
The pose and concept is so cool. Still, the palette you chose has a dull selection of hues. Maybe you should change it.
Shading and outlines are fine (some outline fixes on the tail?).

Ferrex~
Okay, this goes beyond the left-out splice discussion. It just screams 'Aggron' to me. :/
The whole body is boring, and with that of a big pile of meat, you should at least play around with shades or outlines a bit more.
You should add stuff on it, and the two legs are awfully close on each other.
Probably your worse sprite here. don't worry though. :P

Scogon~
The shading on its tummy makes it looks fat.
Also, if it's looking the the lower left, the head should at least cover a bit of its right eye. It's just too big.
The rest is okay. Too bad the concept is not original.

Dragonice~
This sprite, although it's a nice concept, it shows inexperience. ~It must have been one of the first ones you made on that sheet~
It has a lot of proportion errors on the body, the head was probably spliced, the shading is dull, and the ice plates on its chest are just making it look worse.
Yeah, I guess it's an early sprite, that needs improvement. =]

Panthigris~
Probably your second best sprite. Great in terms of shading and outlining, but there are errors on the body.
The left back leg is fat, don't you think? Also, why does the tail sqirl so much? it's not growling 'hub-huba'... =D
The red eye seems a bit off. And it's looking towards the sky 0_0
Finally, the mouth hole should be black, not gray, just for a distinguishment.


That's about it. I'll do other comments about your updates later on. I'm looking forward to your new sprites. Take care!
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Ben. It's just a coincidence. The pose itself is the only thing that looks similar, but the details...are far away from 'similar'. If you watch at Syphonia closely, you will look that there are certain pixels where the body bends somehow, which alone explains that it was in no way pixeled over from Scarf' sprite.
Sorry for that, my mistake.
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Old March 3rd, 2010 (8:05 AM).
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@NiKaNoRoU: thank you for your comment. I will do something with it. ;) And Dragonice was one of my first fakemon indeed, it was my 2nd.

@Ben: It doesn't matter. ^^

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A Tropius in his origin form.
Wait, why did the bananas become tentacles and the whole body into worm-alade? This seems like a very different form, other than 'origin'. Anyway.

The tail is folding in a stiff way, maybe you should give it more of a round swirl. The outlines need work, especially on the lower-right corner, where they could be darker.
Also, your shading on the tail makes it look like it's a flat spaggheti, instead of a round tail. Still, the concept is unique.
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@NiKaNoRoU: thank you for your comment. I will do something with it. ;) And Dragonice was one of my first fakemon indeed, it was my 2nd.

the evo of the panda.
I see (it wasn't just a comment though, more like a sprite-reviewing parade).

Well, it seems like you've outdone yourself, the sprite is great as in concept, outline and palette-wise. The shading is also pretty good, though a bit blunt on the white colors on the body. One thing that makes the sprite look weird, I think you should make the head overlap a part of the bamboo on the left, as it makes me think like those are on its head. I love the branch chewing part. Pretty nifty.


Let's see what else you got!
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Old March 6th, 2010 (11:08 AM).
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Wait, why did the bananas become tentacles and the whole body into worm-alade? This seems like a very different form, other than 'origin'. Anyway.
It's the same form Giritina has in his own world. So if Tropius would go there he would look like this. And the bananas became tentacles because he is in his orgin form and Giritina's ''wings'' are tentacles/wisps in his orgin form .

The tail is folding in a stiff way, maybe you should give it more of a round swirl. The outlines need work, especially on the lower-right corner, where they could be darker.
Also, your shading on the tail makes it look like it's a flat spaggheti, instead of a round tail. Still, the concept is unique. =]


I see (it wasn't just a comment though, more like a sprite-reviewing parade).

Well, it seems like you've outdone yourself, the sprite is great as in concept, outline and palette-wise. The shading is also pretty good, though a bit blunt on the white colors on the body. One thing that makes the sprite look weird, I think you should make the head overlap a part of the bamboo on the left, as it makes me think like those are on its head. I love the branch chewing part. Pretty nifty.

Thnx. I tried to fix the things you mentioned and i made 2 versions. I prefer the left one.


Let's see what else you got!
I will. ^^ Currently working on the evo of Squark.
see the bold above. Please let me now if the improved version is better and which one is better.

thnx in advance.
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see the bold above. Please let me now if the improved version is better and which one is better.

thnx in advance.
Although you didn't fix a lot of stuff, the shading on the right picture is great now. You're using the perfect grey hue, which is different than the lighter, white hue.

What I said about the Tropius is that, compared to Giratina, its form is altered a lot, if you exclude the head, it almost looks like a completely different pokemon.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to see the rest of your upcoming sprites.
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Old March 8th, 2010 (2:37 AM).
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thank you. And your right about the Tropius.

You all have to wait for the evo of squark because i'm sick right now and tommorow is my birthday (becoming 18 :Dyay!^^).
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Old March 11th, 2010 (2:11 PM).
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Well i have the wip of the evo of Squark: Squibin.

I have to do the outline, some shading and have to reshade the tail, because it looks like rubbish now. I know it looks not very good because of the outline and stuff but that's logical and it will look a lot better when finished, but just wanted to give you the impression of how it wil look like eventually.

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Old March 13th, 2010 (7:00 AM).
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And Squibin is finished.

Credits to Kamuchi for the concept.

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Old March 19th, 2010 (6:29 AM).
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A WIP of a repose of Lugia.


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Why does your fakemon called Syphonia, look like a recolour of scarf's fakemon?

It looks like you just recoloured it, and changed a few tiny details.
Why does no one tell me my sprites are being hijacked? No, I can see it wasn't taken from mine (or if it was it was very heavily modified) but I am curious as how you ended up with a similar design and pose. Was yours based on anything? I got mine from a drawing someone gave me.

And while I'm here I may as well give a small critique. Some of your sprites could use work on how the borders are shaded, like on your Tropius evo/prevo/whatever. The tail has a dark border on the right, but the body doesn't have a similar dark border and some of the leaves have more of a border than others. Same deal with your Symphonia and Dragonice. It makes them have different levels of contrast and that makes them look unfinished and inconsistent.
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Why does no one tell me my sprites are being hijacked? No, I can see it wasn't taken from mine (or if it was it was very heavily modified) but I am curious as how you ended up with a similar design and pose. Was yours based on anything? I got mine from a drawing someone gave me.
I drawed it by myself. And made a sprite of it. So it's a 100% own design by me. ^^ It's in my Art topic. But no one replied to it.

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And while I'm here I may as well give a small critique. Some of your sprites could use work on how the borders are shaded, like on your Tropius evo/prevo/whatever. The tail has a dark border on the right, but the body doesn't have a similar dark border and some of the leaves have more of a border than others. Same deal with your Symphonia and Dragonice. It makes them have different levels of contrast and that makes them look unfinished and inconsistent.
I was going to revamp the one you mentioned, so it will get fixed.
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And Squibin is finished.

Credits to Kamuchi for the concept.

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I like it. I give 9/10. I think it is Dark/Fire type. It would be better if you make a Pre Evo. Form it. Why don't you place it to your fakedex and othere that you make before. Why don't you make a Dragon/Dark type Fakemon. Good luck
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I really liked this one, as the title says I'll give it a 9/10 becaise his ayes are big XD
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I like it. I give 9/10. I think it is Dark/Fire type. It would be better if you make a Pre Evo. Form it. Why don't you place it to your fakedex and othere that you make before. Why don't you make a Dragon/Dark type Fakemon. Good luck
Thanx. There all ready is a pre evo. Squibin is the evo of Squark. ^^ And I was going to add it to my fakedex, but first wanted to finish the lugia. ;)
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I like your Lugia but why it has Red out line?
It has red outline cause its a wip(work in progress)
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Your sprites look kind pro to me. XD I'm jealous...

I especially like your reposes. <3 ;_;
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And Squibin is finished.

Credits to Kamuchi for the concept.
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This is cool. The shading on the chest is a bit weird but it's cool. You're improving!
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What the...
Am I the only one that thinks that you shrinked its head?
I'm waiting for the final version, so that I can tell comment on it precisely.
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Am I the only one that thinks that you shrinked its head?
I'm waiting for the final version, so that I can tell comment on it precisely.
I know his head is too small. I'm working on it. ^^

all the others, thank you for the praises.
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I do like a lot of your sprites even though they a splices.
Squibin is awesome but doesnt really look like its pre-evo at all.
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I do like a lot of your sprites even though they a splices.
Squibin is awesome but doesnt really look like its pre-evo at all.
Only two are splices (dragonice and ferrex). Well, they have some parts of other pokemon (Dragonice has only the mouth) . ^^

And Squibin his the evo of Squark not it's pre-evo. ^^

The Lugia is finished. It took so long because i was busy and had no time to sprite.


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Here is a dex-update. De numbers 1 and 2 are now Nafda and Pandisah. And I changed Ferrex.


Rates on Ferrex (or other fakes)?
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