The Time When I Used To Love You

Started by Sweet Jasmine February 5th, 2010 1:15 AM
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Age 31
Female
Chi Town
Seen July 12th, 2010
Posted March 2nd, 2010
1,040 posts
14.8 Years
Hi, It's me again, XD;, I made a very simple poem, but it does not really stand as a poem, since it's story-telling. : P, but oh well, enjoy~ ^^:

The Time When I Used To Love You


Melodies, tones, notes keeps spinning in my mind.
Trying to make a romantic song about me and you.
I wrote it in my story book, cause my mom might see it and it's my secret.
Then my mom secretly opened it and read it, I got scolded, and she burned it.
I was sad, that I broke your heart. and I'm really sorry.

I remember when the time I love you.
I remember when you were late at our first date.
But I didn't mind because I trust you.
That's the time when I used to love you.

I made another song, about us and our happy endings.
But I know that you love me and you know that I love you.
I'm very sorry but this is the best way to stay away from you.
So, please accept it, don't curse yourself cause I'm gonna curse myself too...

I remember when the time I love you.
I remember when you were saying sorry to me.
I accepted it because mistakes are often coming through us.
That's time when I used to love you.


Played my guitar, sing the songs that I write about us.
But I think the melodies are gone and the happy tones are fading.
Because our hearts is broken, and that's the time I LOVED YOU!


I remember when the time I love you.
I remember when you were late at our first date.
But I didn't mind because I trust you.
That's the time when I used to love you.

I remember when the time I love you.
I remember when you were saying sorry to me.
I accepted it because mistakes are often coming through us.
That's time when I used to love you.

Broke my guitar, crying in the corner.
I remembered the time when I used to love you..
all i ever wanted was happiness

Uecil

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Seen March 20th, 2023
Posted May 7th, 2021
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13.5 Years
sounds awesome ^^ it's great.



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