Pokemon: Vindicated

Setting:
Pokemon Vindicated takes place in the region of Arsenic. , With different geographical habitats for the 200 existing Pokémon species, along with human-populated towns and cities, and Routes connecting locations with one another

Synopsis:
The silent protagonist of pokemon vindicated is a young trainer who lives in the small town of Arsenic. The pokemon professor Ben is working on a legendary pokemon "latah" Without warning the town is attacked by team rocket who have come to steal this powerful creature. You manage to be one of the last pokemon trainers left in this small village as the other skilled pokemon trainers fled to protect their family and decide that you will use your pokemon to seek vengeance against the leader of the terrible organization. To defeat this powerful pokemon and put and end to team rocket once and for all you'll have to use teamwork with your squad of pokemon and the power of friendship.



This is for a game so please any C&C is welcome

Very interesting, I like how you involved another "created" pokemon. This one looks like it could be very good. A suggestion would be to change the team, create your own. The rockets get boring after a while. Good luck on this project.

Er.. why would the protagonist seek vengeance? Is he related to the professor in any way?

I hope the silent protagonist's name isn't Arsenic also. That could get redundant.

Either your intro leaves quite a lot out, or your plot as it is now really doesn't hold water. It has the potential to be solid, but you'd have to come up with convincing reasons for Professor Ben (is that a nod to Pokemon Brown?) to be concocting a legendary in his small-time lab, presumably with the help of at most two aides, and for Cooltrainer Arsenic to be so vengeful (being related to the professor would help there), among other implausible things. What is Ben going to do with this legendary? What exactly does Team Rocket do that scars the protagonist so badly?

I suggest you start with the legendary; come up with some solid background for it, like the purpose of its existence and stuff like that -- something beyond "because legendaries are cool and make good plot points". It seems to be the main variable in the motives of all your characters, so it should be important to the story in a logical way.

Yeah, quit with the bumping of the threads. This subforum counts with the "no bumping at all" rule.