The Story of BOTS!!!

Started by JasonX3333 February 24th, 2010 2:58 PM
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JasonX3333

Im accepting all wi-fi battles

Age 27
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Brooklyn
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Posted July 17th, 2011
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Note 1:If you wanna be in this pm me
Note 2: This is based on the sector level of bots just giving it a story line

The Re-telling of bots
Introduction

BOTS!!

The Scene starts with three young and inexperienced bots models the ram the patch and

Surge who have joined the war…. For the fate of cyberspace

Motherboard-Hello Jason Robinson and Uri you 3 will work together from now on, you are all the new and most efficient bots in your caliber I’m going to put you in practice
So you can get used to your new abilities are you ready?


Jason- Ram model Gx4700 Ram Edition Jason reporting for duty

Uri-Patch model Gx4700 patch Edition Uri here for duty

Robinson- Surge Model Gx4700 surge edition the job.

Motherboard: Drop the formalities im going to put you in the training camp sector your goal is fight your way through and defeat the virus bot ill create for you.Are you all ready?

Jason- Hell yes im going to kick some butt!

Uri- Yea lets go.

Robinson-Okay I guess.


Motherboard: Good luck troops Godspeed

And they were off to commence there training

More soon! tell me what you think
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Pardon me for asking, but where's the punctuation? You have some sentences with full stops, but most go without. And commas seem to have completely disappeared.

This doesn't meet the standards of this section. It's very quickly written, probably wasn't checked over before posting to find mistakes, and needs improvement to it.

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