domino the lone absol

Started by king_pyratic October 26th, 2004 10:13 AM
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Age 32
darit town
Seen December 9th, 2004
Posted December 8th, 2004
40 posts
18.6 Years
first off, domino is my first absol...sadly i lost him along time ago, however i had breeded him and gave his egg to my friend, so my friend breeded his and gave me that egg witch i grew into slear a female absol, once i had her at level 100 i desided to make eggs from slear and give them to my other games, incase the sapphire with slear in it i'd still have her offspring, her eggs hatched into flame, terek, and kogo sadly i did lose the sapphire with slear in it and my 2 ruby versions with flame and kogo, though i desides i'd try to keep it one more time, i made an egg from terek, and gave it to my best friend, sold the sapphire with terek and i moved...that ment i had NO absol desendents of domino left, but travis sent me his ruby version and gave me an egg from tereks offspring, its name was sleek so i took that egg and hatched shrilop, witch i have in my new sapphire version today, just yesterday i sent shrilop into my fire red version and im going to mate shrilop and make domino the second ,

long history eh?
Age 32
darit town
Seen December 9th, 2004
Posted December 8th, 2004
40 posts
18.6 Years
anyone gonna say something?.....
name:Jean (trainer)
age:14
gender:male
birthstone:ruby
favourite gem:sapphire
chinese sign:horse
zodiac sign:cancer teh crab
favourite pokemon:absol


name:domino (absol)
age:3
gender:male
birthstone:opal
favourite gem:sapphire
chinese sign: horse

name:shrilop (absol)
age:2
gender:female
birthstone:sapphire
favourite gem:sapphire
chinese sign: ram

name:pyra (absol)
age:unhatched
gender:unknown
birthstone:unknown
favourite gem:unknown
chinese sign:unknown

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Age 30
Paradise...
Seen August 20th, 2007
Posted September 29th, 2006
2,339 posts
19.5 Years
Are you going to make a fanfic with this Absol in it or something? I'm cornfused!(cornfused is a word I made up that I love to say and type. It means both puzzled and fused with an ear of corn.XD)
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Seen March 13th, 2013
Posted April 22nd, 2011
454 posts
18.7 Years
Good story! *claps* Wait . . . where is it? -_-;

Sorry for the sarcasm but seriously, if your going to tell us the tale of your Absol in your game, put in story form, pretend your in the game and your traveling and you almost lose Domino but fortunently breeded his Absol and so on and so forth.

Check your spelling and grammar too, they're also in dire need of help.

So good luck and

LaTeR dAyZ!

Lily

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Female
New Joisey
Seen February 26th, 2017
Posted June 26th, 2011
3,329 posts
18.7 Years
long history eh?
Oh yes! It was a long lovely history indeed! Absolutely wonderful and sublime! ^_^

...Getting to the point, unless Lily needs new glasses, she can't see a fic anywhere. Perhaps that bunched up 'synopsis' with incorrect grammar and format, but no, she honestly can't see it. Consider 'space' as your friend, it's very useful too. It could turn out to be a good fic...you just need to work on how to actually format a decent one.

Oh and Oni, verbal slap? You're so funny. XD

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Age 29
Non-binary
New South Wales, Australia
Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
14,976 posts
18.7 Years
Ugh.

a) It is boring. It doesn't even make sense, dude.

b) This is fiction, not history we are looking for in this thread.

c) Doesn't anyone use Word spellchecker? (Well I don't because I can actually spell, like many people. But people who can't spell or do grammar should really use the spellchecker. Sorry.)

d) You have a serious paragraphing and tense problem. Stay in past tense; it's often the easiest and as it's a history it's the most appropriate. Also please, one paragraph is hardly enough to be a history. Very long *rolls eyes*. It really amounts to a few paragraphs. Still very long. *double rolls eyes*

e) Why not write that into a story and THEN post it up? It might make good material, but you have to write it properly.

Stuff locking it, I'd love it deleted in case anyone decided to repeat this.

And finally, don't double post. (I'm a hypocrite.)

Sorry for flaming.

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Lily

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Female
New Joisey
Seen February 26th, 2017
Posted June 26th, 2011
3,329 posts
18.7 Years
Iveechan; might I say, welcome to the world of fanfics? ._.; Oh come on, you honestly can't say that you never heard things like these happening before. Pretty ironic, how bad fics get all the attention and the good fics get few or none. It's probably because there are more things to say and more things to criticize here...can't exactly 'prevent' it. oO;

Life's not fair at times. >.>;


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Age 29
Non-binary
New South Wales, Australia
Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
14,976 posts
18.7 Years
Precisely, Lily. All's unfair in art and fiction.

Some of the greatest fictions, like Lily's or Breezy's, never get any reviews but plenty of views.

If it's not too long, I'll review it. (You'll regret it.)

And most of us put really hard work into our stories and poetry, harder or at least as hard as you do, Iveechan. I'm always raving on about things like that.

It doesn't help.

Don't single yourself out. It isn't a good way to get attention.

Good luck with further reviews.

DP
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