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Started by rainbow March 2nd, 2010 11:30 PM
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rainbow

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UK
Seen November 17th, 2022
Posted December 14th, 2021
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14.1 Years
Chapter 1: Nice to see yaaaaaaaaaaa!


It was a beautiful summers day in june, one teenage boy was out in the garden, but he was unhappy.His cystal black hair was almost hidden in the cap he was wearing.Tom (That's his name) was 15 recently but his friend had moved to Australia.
So he decided to go on Skype, luckily, his friend was on, he and his friend chatted for a while and then Tom said "well, nice to se yaaaa"
Jack, his friend stared at his pc, tom was gone, all Jack saw was him fly past the lanuage bar, at that very same moment Jack vanished.
Age 36
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Posted 2 Days Ago
This doesn't meet the standards of the section as outlined in the rules. Grammar is exceptionally shoddy: missing spaces, punctuation, and capital letters; no proper paragraphing or sentence structure; no use of spell-check. There's missing description and narration, to the point where the reader gets confused as to what exactly is going on in the story.

This needs quite some work in order for it to be an open thread. It's best to take your time writing before you post something online.

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