The Crazy River (Rated PG)

Started by T.J. October 27th, 2004 10:52 PM
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Age 30
Titan Tower
Seen January 11th, 2005
Posted November 12th, 2004
124 posts
18.7 Years
Um........Well, hi. I'm new. This is my first fic here so, yeah. It's, obviously, a one shot! So............Please reply!



The Crazy River
(One SHot)

It was a nice morning on the beach. well, without the four rivers intersection near where Gold stayed.

He had black spiky hair, a yellow and black hat worn backwards, a red sweater, goggles over her hat, yellow and black shorts.

Water was sent up alot, making it hard for Gold to relax. It wasn't long for him to get annoyed.

"Why don't you leave me alone?"

His goggles shined with light. As if to answer, the water sent up a wave of water, soaking Gold.

"Fine! Be that way! I'll just move to the other side. It looks MUCH drier their." Gold yelled.

He grabbed his stuff and walked over the river. "Dumb river." He muttered, "At least till it gets too hot."

He grinned. and sat down. "Ah. Much better!" He said, relaxing.

He almost fell asleep when, SPLASH!! Gold was soaked again.

"WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU!?!!?!?!?!?" Gold exclaimed.

It sent up a BIG splash of water towards Gold. "WHY YOU!!!!!"

He grabbed a Pokeball and threw it. It exploded with light and a Matine appeared. "Tine!" It excliamed happily.

"Mantro, Ice Beam the river!!!" Gold exclaimed, pointing at the rivers.

"TinE" Mantro said as it shot out a beam of ice.

The river instantly froze. "Yeah! Return!" Gold yelled as he returned Mantro.

"Once I leave, I'll dfrost it with Typhlo's Fire Blast." Gold said.

He got into his bathing suit and bathed in the sun. Later, about and hour, "I wanna swim!"

As if it heared Gold, the ice cracked, sending a tidal wave fo a river at Gold. "Crap."

Gold was soaked. "Well, at least I got to swim." He chuckled.

The river continued splash him with water for the rest of the day. Gold yelled everytime.

"Why did the next town have to be sofar? Why did I have to lose My Skateboard? Why can't I have a car? Why can't I drive?" Gold complained.

The water attacked again. "Aaaaaaaaaaaargh!!!!" He exclaimed.

He jumped into the river to see what the problem was. He saw a Magikarp shooting a water gun at where he should have been. Aha! Gold thought.

He grabbed the fish, got out slowly and threw the karp as far as he could. "So, I got mad at a Magikarp? A FISH!!!!!" Gold exclaimed.
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Seen March 13th, 2013
Posted April 22nd, 2011
454 posts
18.7 Years
One this before I start:

He had black spiky hair, a yellow and black hat worn backwards, a red sweater, goggles over her hat, yellow and black shorts.
Uh oh, gender switch! o_O Lol. Sorry, couldn't help it . . .

Anyways, its an interesting fic which I think is the only way to describe it lol. Interesting plot, interesting tale, interesting ending . . . the works. Grammar needed some work in some areas along with using the wrong tense (or whatever its called, can't remember the word at the momento) of "there."

So um . . . yeah heh. ^^; Interesting fic like I said. I didn't know Magikarps could learn Water Gun though or break an ice river but meh. =P

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