i need u

Started by darkblastoise89 October 28th, 2004 4:47 PM
  • 923 views
  • 8 replies
Age 34
east siiide
Seen March 20th, 2005
Posted December 19th, 2004
420 posts
18.7 Years
here goes another one of my songs...thanks for reading

(verse 1)
u asked me
if i'm
feelin for you...
my question
to you,
is do i bore you?
baby
u should
know that i adore u
and i'd
never
put anyone before u


(chorus)
u make me
u keep me
u love me
u hold me
and I
need u
so baby
console me

I miss u
Id never dis u
I wanna
kiss u
Its true
Believe me
Baby I
need u


(verse 2)
so tell me
why do
u have doubts?
if I
wanted to leave,
id already be out
I love u
I want u
I cant do
without u
and I thought
that u
felt the
way I do

(chorus 2x)

[hook]
and maybe baby I was wrong
but Ive been thinkin bout u all night long
and girl u

(chorus 2x)
name changed to ~\Ethereal_Knight/~

Kylie-chan

[span="background:#000; padding: 2px 10px;"][color=#C47399]NERF [b][i][color=#789DED]THIS[/color][/i]![/b] [color=#F7E1EE]♥[/color][/color][/span]

Age 29
Non-binary
New South Wales, Australia
Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
14,976 posts
18.7 Years
It's pretty cool, but a bit... *pukes* UGH. kissing. (why do I write about it so much then? strange.)
PON PON WAY WAY WAY

あの交差点で皆がもしスキップをして もしあの町の真中でてを繋いで空を見上げたら

Kylie-chan

[span="background:#000; padding: 2px 10px;"][color=#C47399]NERF [b][i][color=#789DED]THIS[/color][/i]![/b] [color=#F7E1EE]♥[/color][/color][/span]

Age 29
Non-binary
New South Wales, Australia
Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
14,976 posts
18.7 Years
oh so sweet... *looks wistful* Stop reminding me I don't have a boyfriend or any admirer! j/k

So great. A bit shorter than your former ones, but heh what can I say? Exemplary.
PON PON WAY WAY WAY

あの交差点で皆がもしスキップをして もしあの町の真中でてを繋いで空を見上げたら
Seen May 18th, 2007
Posted May 18th, 2007
1,008 posts
18.6 Years
The subject of the song is sweet.
The over all feel and beat to it is good.
Though have to say it is short 8/10
Still good though.

I have found my fist account(in the new forum-can't go all the way back XD) So i am going to stick with that one. I miss it so. Please don't PM this one.