Aha, I love both of them. I agree with TJ on how the message was put across, and it is a great message, but I love that style. And for a title..? I'd say
Hooked is a good one.
As for the one about poetry, The flow is nice, and it does leave me wanting at the end, so all in all, great work Kiro!
Thank you! And I like that title way more, thank you again for that.