My poetry ~hope you like~

Started by XionXVI May 23rd, 2010 2:24 PM
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Posted June 12th, 2010
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13 Years
it's short, but very emotional. i don't have much to say, except there's an "e" at the end of "doubt" in the second line. i also think you should make "as much as i care about you" a new line. other than that, this is a great poem.
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XionXVI

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Age 29
Female
Medway, Ohio
Seen June 11th, 2010
Posted May 31st, 2010
4 posts
13 Years
~somebody to love~
To hold me
To love me
want me
just find me
somebody..
somebody to love

~another short on, but i actually like this quite abit ^^ comment!~

~Foolish~
you make me so mad
so flammable
your bi-polar emotions
and your foolish assumptions
i have nothing to do with you
neither do i want to be near you too
~i was seemingly "flamed off" atm i still am, i'll cool down, but this basically shows my emotions~

XionXVI

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Age 29
Female
Medway, Ohio
Seen June 11th, 2010
Posted May 31st, 2010
4 posts
13 Years
~Your Love~
What am i to you?
I thought our love grew.
How am I supposed to live?
When it is I you cannot forgive.
I need you right now,
But to ask you,
I do not know how.
Hunny I need you so much,
I need to feel your soft touch.
Please come back,
Without you my world is Black.
I need you more than you'll ever know
But i'll keep staring out the window.
For when you come walking up to my door.

XionXVI

OrganizationXIII nobody

Age 29
Female
Medway, Ohio
Seen June 11th, 2010
Posted May 31st, 2010
4 posts
13 Years
~Untitled~
No more Pain,
No more sorrow.
Sleep the Night away,
Until tommorow.

~i actually really like this one, it has really no meaning to me, i just wrote it down in my notebook one day and thought it sound pretty good, but if you like you could put your OWN meaning to it. i'm sure you'll find something good :)~