Just hanging by a moment...

Started by aRedMoon November 9th, 2004 12:47 PM
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aRedMoon

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Just some random writing I did the other night.... I've never posted any of my stuff here before. o_o This feels kinda strange.

Just hanging by a moment...

Desperate for changing
Starving for truth
I'm closer to where I started
Chasing after you


I'm putting it all behind me, the only thing I see ahead is the glory that is your smile. I'm willing to put aside all that I've held close to me, ready to give up everything that used to be everything, just to be with you. I'm in love, and I can't help myself, you're all I ever needed.

I'm falling even more in love with you
Letting go of all I've held onto
I'm standing here until you make me move
I'm hanging by a moment here with you


If it's possible, the love for you is getting deeper... flowing more smoothly than ever. I'm putting it all in the past, putting it all in the way, all I want is to be here, standing with you. Even if it's just for a moment, that moment can last a lifetime.

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely incomplete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me now...


Try not to think of my flaws, I know they're there. I'll try to let them go with everything else... but if I don't, I hope you'll still smile for me, because that smile is what makes me live, it makes me thrive. You're my everything, and always will be.

I'm falling even more in love with you
Letting go of all I've held onto
I'm standing here until you make me move
I'm hanging by a moment here with you


It's all behind me, I'm on the edge of a line, you on one side, and everything that was something to me is on the other side. I'll wait your order, I'll wait your call before I finally cross, but I won't go back, not without you.

I'm living for the only thing I know
I'm running and not quite sure where to go
And I don't know what I'm diving into
Just hanging by a moment here with you


The moment that you give me the sign, the moment you say I can come, I jump from the line, letting the life before disappear into a misty bit of smoke that is no more. But as I get closer to you... you get farther away, I'm having a hard time seeing you. The clouds are setting it, you're there but yet you aren't...

There's nothing else to lose
There's nothing else to find
There's nothing in the world
That can change my mind
There is nothing else
There is nothing else
There is nothing else


Even if I can't see you, I know you're there. You're everything, the only thing I could ever need, want, in this world. The smoke is just an invisible mist, for you are there in the center, everything I could want. There isn't anything there but you.

Desperate for changing
Starving for truth
I'm closer to where I started
Chasing after you....


My running hasn't ended, I keep chasing after you, knowing that you're just always a few steps away. I'll catch you some day, make you mine, have your smile shine down on me every day. I love you, and I won't let it end.

I'm falling even more in love with you
Letting go of all I've held onto
I'm standing here until you make me move
I'm hanging by a moment here with you
I'm living for the only thing I know
I'm running and not quite sure where to go
And I don't know what I'm diving into
Just hanging by a moment here with you


It's all been left behind, the mist that was my life behand is no more, you're standing in front of me. You're holding my heart on a string, and you smile down on me. I smile back up at you... but you turn away and begin to walk away. I can see where you're going... you're going into the life I left behind. I've fallen in love with you... and you're walking away. I've given everything... but you give me nothing to replace it. Only your smile, and the site of you walking away. You've left me hanging...

Just hanging by a moment (here with you)
Hanging by a moment (here with you)
Hanging by a moment here with you


Just hanging by a moment...


~~~~~

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Awww. That is cute. And I love that song. Who is it about? I bet Kimi wishes she'd written it about you :P


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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aRedMoon

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Awww. That is cute. And I love that song. Who is it about? I bet Kimi wishes she'd written it about you :P
Like most of my works, the characters are always unnamed.

*considers posting another story*
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Kimi loves Greggy! XD Greggy is MY Greggyboo XD.


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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Exactly. I don't know why he won't just twin with me again....

Anyway, back on topic.


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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aRedMoon

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Eh....

I would prefer if neither of you obsessed over me. <_<
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But it's fun to obsess over you.

I already have a pair, a twin, and an evil twin, and you're none of them. We need a new thread. :P


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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