Heres my first comic I made on my own time, Ive notice how all the other pokemon sprite comics go according to the games, or the shows, well im trying to make my different : D
so enjoy.
Please leave feedback,
-Scripting maybe?
-Possible jokes for future comics.
-maybe some sprites i could possibly use.
Please Note -
-The story is basically, The hero stealing his fathers pokemon,A Charmeleon, which was left behind. while this comic only shows this battle, I need help on more of the story.
The first problem I noticed was that you're using D/P overworlds and R/S overworlds. They don't go together. So, I searched for a Brendan D/P sprite for you and:
However, if you use this, give credit to the original author (DaS.) Also, the plot is simple... at the moment. It could have been more eventful, and we could have at least been introduced to these characters. Also, there is a typo on the fifth slide (it says unstopple instead of unstoppable.) On the other hand, we rarely see comic's anymore, so it is nice to see a new one. :)