those three words...

Started by darkblastoise89 November 9th, 2004 7:29 PM
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Age 34
east siiide
Seen March 20th, 2005
Posted December 19th, 2004
420 posts
18.7 Years
i put the rose bloom in her hair,
that summer morning in the breeze
i'll never forget her loving stare
those eyes that made my thoughts freeze

second by second i loved her more,
she saw into my very core
at first, infatuation, but now i see
it was true when she said she loved me

speechless i was left,
stunned by the taste of her sweet breath
i could not bring myself to utter
the same words that made my pulse flutter

forever i wish she could have stayed
but i could not bring myself to say
the commonly misused three-word phrase
that had me mesmerized and dazed...

when i say it now, every word is true...
come back to me, for i love you...


-matt
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
1,912 posts
18.6 Years
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, it's soooooo sweet!!!!!! ^0^ This poem ish one of my favorites that you have done, Matt. *snuggles* I should try and write some new poems, but I haven't had much inspiration lately. Anyways, since I clearly know what it's about, I give you a perfect 10/10 I enjoyed reading it and the flow was done well. You had awsome word choice and it just aounds awsome!!! ^_^

~Kelsey
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Age 34
east siiide
Seen March 20th, 2005
Posted December 19th, 2004
420 posts
18.7 Years
you're just trying to cheer me up = P

well i guess it's good enough for me if even one person leaves a comment, without them i have no motive to write anything at all...thanx u guys...knowing people actually read this is what keeps me wrting.
name changed to ~\Ethereal_Knight/~
Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
1,912 posts
18.6 Years
*sits on Matt's head* Well, what's a fiance for? XD Come on, every word is true, I have alwaus admired your writing. whenever I see you post a new poem, it inspires me to write another poem of my own. I love you, Matt, even if you stop posting poems, I'll still come to read your older ones. ^_^
*snuggles*

~Kelsey
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..*) .*)
(. (.` ♥ Kelsey

Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~
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La La Land
Seen September 1st, 2016
Posted May 22nd, 2012
2,002 posts
18.6 Years
i put the rose bloom in her hair,
that summer morning in the breeze
i'll never forget her loving stare
those eyes that made my thoughts freeze

second by second i loved her more,
she saw into my very core
at first, infatuation, but now i see
it was true when she said she loved me

speechless i was left,
stunned by the taste of her sweet breath
i could not bring myself to utter
the same words that made my pulse flutter

forever i wish she could have stayed
but i could not bring myself to say
the commonly misused three-word phrase
that had me mesmerized and dazed...

when i say it now, every word is true...
come back to me, for i love you...


-matt
wow, what a poem! Its awesome! I wish people didn't missuse those words. Your poem is so true! ;)
"Life is a choice. Every breath is a choice. Every minute is a choice. To be or not to be" ~ Chuck Palahunik

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Age 29
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Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
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that's so cool, and the lines are even -_- I can never achieve that
*is inspired to write happy songs and throws her suicidal song in the bin.*

^ Don't worry, I'm not suicidal, for heaven's sake I'm happier than as happy as can be. I'm just writing about the thoughts that went through my mind when I was suffering from depression... I was thinking vaguely "You can always end it... but why do that?"
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thanks jeremy....glad u rated it...no one comes down here, so this'll probably be my last poem or song i post...thanx though
wrong, I come down here
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thanks for the rep and the reviews, matt.
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