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Old September 8th, 2010 (8:13 AM).
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    Can You make a sprite of this guy? His name is Graystoo
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    Sorry, I don't do requests and I only sprite if it's for Pokemon Dawn. You should speak with Ace/Pichuichu and ask if they accepted your fakemon. Then I will sprite it when I have the time.
    Also, aren't you a spriter yourself? Your sprite in the signature is pretty good. O_O


    Anyways, here's a sprite for Kroneon. Sorry if I totally changed the design, but I tried to keep it "evee"ish. :x

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    Old September 8th, 2010 (8:56 AM).
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      ^Ooh I like its design, and yes llennoccm8 is part of the team but I have only seen a couple of his fakemon you should probably revamp graystoo
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      Old September 8th, 2010 (2:52 PM).
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      darn i was so gonna not you jk

      Anyways, here's a sprite for Kroneon. Sorry if I totally changed the design, but I tried to keep it "evee"ish. :x

      hm the ears and tail seem a bit bulky, but otherwise i like it, and the drawing was just <33
      you did a good job again
      ther other desgin, like a thing made in paint, eh bad no offence ace dragonite?
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      Old September 9th, 2010 (3:51 PM).
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        welll i knw i been gone for a few month but im back and ready for work just tell mi wat you need k Pichuichu
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        Old September 9th, 2010 (5:14 PM).
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          hm the ears and tail seem a bit bulky, but otherwise i like it, and the drawing was just <33
          you did a good job again
          ther other desgin, like a thing made in paint, eh bad no offence ace dragonite?
          DERP. Anyhow I thought the original lineart was okay maybe it was the thickness, the lack of shading or the fact I just suck? The other Pokemon next to Kroneon won't be in ND unless you guys want him.



          Glad to see Habit12 is ready and Concept can no longer help sprite atm, I think you should have kept the tail of Kroneon btw so the sprite doesn't look so....blocky.
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          Old September 9th, 2010 (10:58 PM).
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            The only thing that makes him blocky are the rocks (Tail, ears, bangs)... O_o
            Cause, well, it's a rock design, I tried to keep it simple. I dunno - maybe it's just me that likes that. xD

            Anyways - You just have to work on the anatomy and then keep on practising, once you nailed that, just keep designing and you'll find your favourite style. Lineart doesn't need shading, thickness of line doesn't matter either if it's just concept - it's the anatomy that's important - and you don't suck cause everyone did at the beginning. xD

            Here's a really good tutorial:
            http://cedarseed.deviantart.com/art/Basic-Animal-Anatomy-16337411

            Btw, I think Coraldis will be a good addition to the ND Pokedex.
            I also worked on the concept on appaloosis (forgot the name - Rapidash evo/alt) and Valkyria. O_o
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            Old September 10th, 2010 (10:34 AM).
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              its a cool game please release a beta soon.
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              Old September 11th, 2010 (9:34 AM). Edited September 11th, 2010 by Planetes..
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                @ Acedragonite
                The only thing that makes him blocky are the rocks (Tail, ears, bangs)... O_o
                Cause, well, it's a rock design, I tried to keep it simple. I dunno - maybe it's just me that likes that. xD

                Anyways - You just have to work on the anatomy and then keep on practising, once you nailed that, just keep designing and you'll find your favourite style. Lineart doesn't need shading, thickness of line doesn't matter either if it's just concept - it's the anatomy that's important - and you don't suck cause everyone did at the beginning. xD

                Here's a really good tutorial:
                http://cedarseed.deviantart.com/art/Basic-Animal-Anatomy-16337411

                Btw, I think Coraldis will be a good addition to the ND Pokedex.
                I also worked on the concept on appaloosis (forgot the name - Rapidash evo/alt) and Valkyria. O_o
                and I actually made an OW for Valkyria so I'm thinking of using that concept
                I actually have started to get into pixels (not pokemon spriting but avys, OWs and recolors

                the thing at the bottom of Valkyria is supposed to be some kind of twister, because I'm still learning the ways of the pixel artist. Once I master Ows, I may move on to VS. Sprites. Then trainer sprites, then, and only then will I try to sprite Pokemon.
                The other OWs on the userbar aren't mine.
                @Shubhamthegreat-Thank you but please don't ask for betas
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                Old September 11th, 2010 (2:07 PM).
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                  Okay so some of you may not like this game, >.< which make me sad but i am only a beginner game dev so i'm hoping to make it better and make some of you to like it better. So here is a Character update.

                  Del: Your best freind and neighbour since you moved there. His Dad owns Geonite corps and del is a part time worker for him but people say he has a very important job.
                  he doesn't agree to your dissicuns alot because he thinks that he is supirour to you. and always finishs his sentences with Yo.

                  please this is NOT the final version so i can get constructive critisicm on him. the name del is final though.

                  Also here is a badge update an it is for the first gym which is a ghost type.

                  credit to colbalt'scizor and niknaks for this wonderful badge.

                  also from now on i will update every week but i will update over the next few days. Oh and constructive critiscm is greatly apprecated.
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                  Old September 11th, 2010 (2:12 PM).
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                    Good thing you changed it, but I don't think his Dad should be owner of Geo. Corp, that's cool that the badges are based on Pokemon, if I can find a tut, I'll try making a Stonbii badge for Craig
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                    Old September 11th, 2010 (7:03 PM).
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                      Nobody? well progress will be slow cause i just started school, but i am still working on the game but slowly kay? please guy don't quit on us now.
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                      Old September 11th, 2010 (8:03 PM).
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                        Nobody? well progress will be slow cause i just started school, but i am still working on the game but slowly kay? please guy don't quit on us now.
                        same here, but I'll prob be free on weekends. and who is "guy"?
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                        Old September 12th, 2010 (6:45 AM).
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                          heh sorry i meant guy's........
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                          Old September 12th, 2010 (8:17 AM).
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                            I tried to sprite a STONBII badge
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                            Old September 12th, 2010 (8:26 AM). Edited September 12th, 2010 by BennyTuckman.
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                              I know a bit of spiriting now, Pichuichu. What do you want me to do?

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                              I tried to sprite a STONBII badge
                              It doesn't look like one Niknaks and Scizor made. That's okay, though; maybe use some of the colors from the shine from their badge?

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                              Del: Your best freind and neighbour since you moved there. His Dad owns Geonite corps and del is a part time worker for him but people say he has a very important job.
                              he doesn't agree to your dissicuns alot because he thinks that he is supirour to you. and always finishs his sentences with Yo.

                              please this is NOT the final version so i can get constructive critisicm on him. the name del is final though.

                              Del's a good name, and maybe explain that people's opinions of him make him so high and mighty, and maybe he thinks he'll become the owner of Geonite Corps. Good idea with being an arrogant person towards the player, but don't you think arrogant people try to sound dignified, instead of saying yo?
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                              Old September 12th, 2010 (11:04 AM).
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                                I know a bit of spiriting now, Pichuichu. What do you want me to do?



                                It doesn't look like one Niknaks and Scizor made. That's okay, though; maybe use some of the colors from the shine from their badge?
                                Niknaks and Scizor have sprited a hell of a lot more than I have


                                Del's a good name, and maybe explain that people's opinions of him make him so high and mighty, and maybe he thinks he'll become the owner of Geonite Corps. Good idea with being an arrogant person towards the player, but don't you think arrogant people try to sound dignified, instead of saying yo?
                                Del used to be the main evil guy in the old story, that's where the name comes from, and he's actually heir to Quartz Corp. a rival to Geo. Corp.
                                But he's still rich and snobby.
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                                  Del used to be the main evil guy in the old story, that's where the name comes from, and he's actually heir to Quartz Corp. a rival to Geo. Corp.
                                  But he's still rich and snobby.
                                  But does he really need to say "Yo?" Not many snobs say that; they're more dignified xD
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                                  Old September 13th, 2010 (3:21 PM).
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                                    yes he tries to hide the fact he's snobby! i have a da account and will update a little more frequently on there. in my sig |
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                                    Old September 13th, 2010 (3:32 PM).
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                                      you're a pretty good tilespriter, but you need to work on your mapping skills.
                                      Ps, I didn't know you were from canada
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                                      Old September 13th, 2010 (4:55 PM).
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                                        oh im living in canada but im english i was born in england and so was my intire family!

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                                        Old September 14th, 2010 (11:31 AM).
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                                          Hey there haven't posted in a while since I was busy, anyways. I think if we want to acquire more support for the game, we'll need the following:

                                          -A really well written plot. Doesn't have to be changed, just well written and rational.
                                          -Make the first post appealing.
                                          -Upload 1 or 2 screenies, even though if it's still WIP.
                                          -Make some banners.

                                          It's kinda the first impression that kinda attracts people.
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                                          Old September 14th, 2010 (1:00 PM).
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                                            Agreed i'll make banners now. im updateding the story soon cause we edited some. and im adding screenies soon.
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                                            Old September 14th, 2010 (1:06 PM).
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                                                Old September 14th, 2010 (1:43 PM).
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                                                  Yes thanks tnguye7 i will fix that now and poeman yes i wil get better at grammar and spelling.
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