Kiryu's Sprites.......and stuff like that

Started by Kiryu June 13th, 2010 6:02 AM
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Seen October 5th, 2011
Posted December 6th, 2010
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I DO NOT UPDATE THIS POST WITH EVERY NEW SPRITE I POST. SO LOOK AT THE DEX FOR UPDATES pls. Hey i'll even give ya the link =P

here -> http://crowfan.deviantart.com/art/Spiriomon-Dex-176428056?q=&qo=


5th Gen Sprites:

- Shimama - Electric - (will be redone, reason: too small, leaning to the right)

- Meguroko - Ground/Dark - N/A

Mamepato - Normal/Flying - FINISHED


HeavenEarth Fakemon I sprited (yes, scratch)


- Embabi - Fire

- Lizaber - Rock/Fire

- Dinomyte - Dragon/Fire - need to fix back shading

- Prayr - i cant remember

- Zerble - Electric

- Zamole - Electric - No its not a quilava [Picture]


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Mamepato TEST

ignore the feet and eye im still working on them and the wing shading could use some work



still has the pallates on it o.0
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Chibi Robo

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Cali
Seen April 2nd, 2013
Posted July 2nd, 2011
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Some pretty good sprites here most of them just need a smoother outline and that will make them look just fine.

Now Im going to focus most of my cc on this one sprite I have quoted up here. One of my favorite concepts you have here. Unfortunatley shading is very off. There seem to be a huge problem with lighting and shading. Picture this in your mind when creating pokemon sprites. There is a sun and it is placed in the top left hand corner of the screen. The sun shines the light down and the limbs/body/etc that is close to the sun has is brighter. Because it is closer to the sun. The limbs farther away from the sun are darker because less light shines through. Now I made an edit if you dont understand all this mumbo jumbo Im writing so you can at least use my edits as a reference to fix up your sprite.

Spoiler:


Anyways its a great start for you as a spriter, hope to see more work from you.
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thx~ that was next after i redo Shimama...which is after i finish this one:



four feet o.0 ignore the detached ones...

Heres the final version



also made another one that looks more like the sprite in the blurry pic...i post that in a sec...

and:

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D= nothing?

Frosverup- - ice - Shy Wolf

Frosverene - - Ice - Proud Wolf

Slidqua - - Water poison - Water Snake

Aquapent - - water poison - Water snake

Voltibat - - Electric Flying - ??? - repose of friends sprite (they told me to)

Quetzaleon - - Dragon - Wild Dragon - Newest
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Oripoke

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Posted September 2nd, 2019
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I like these! The designs are good and your outlines are smooth, but work on your shading. You've got the highlight going along the edge of the sprite, which results in it looking flat and 2-d. Try to study the shading on HGSS sprites. (I find it helps to put them next to whatever I'm working on on the canvas.)

Also, you could do with using brighter colors; your sprites at the moment are kind of dull and nondescript.

Esper

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Seen June 30th, 2018
Posted June 30th, 2018
I really like this one.

It's not easy making a fish look interesting, but this one is. The large fin has nice colors and shading. Actually, the whole sprite has a pleasing palette. The sky blue/icy blue color gives it a gentle feel and the gold stripes keep it from looking too plain. I think the outline on the highlighted side could be lightened around the face since it feels a little dark to me. The eye is also a little bit hard to make out since it's no wider than the stripe it's over and the stripe outline is a little dark and makes that whole area just a tad cluttered.
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idk why i posted the pic but anyway moving on

thank you and yes ill fix the outlines idk about the eye i tried making it bigger and it just looked....weird.......

i also fixed up my /online/ friend's sprite (he told me too -_-)

original:

My Version:

the drills are dunsparce...the rest is scratch
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I love that green one with wings. They all look amazing and very original. Keep up the good work!
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the koala doesnt have a name yet

and here is Felsurge:



electric/ground. also for pkmn HeavenEarth
It's good in terms of lineart but not perfect. It isn't facing towards the player which could be a problem if used in a game. Also the shading's a bit off. The light source is different from the official pokemon games.



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It's good in terms of lineart but not perfect. It isn't facing towards the player which could be a problem if used in a game. Also the shading's a bit off. The light source is different from the official pokemon games.
ya im gonna make a new one =/
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meanwhile:

Dashock:

Thundash:

Thundash was made before dashock:

Dashock has no picture =/

I really like this one.

It's not easy making a fish look interesting, but this one is. The large fin has nice colors and shading. Actually, the whole sprite has a pleasing palette. The sky blue/icy blue color gives it a gentle feel and the gold stripes keep it from looking too plain. I think the outline on the highlighted side could be lightened around the face since it feels a little dark to me. The eye is also a little bit hard to make out since it's no wider than the stripe it's over and the stripe outline is a little dark and makes that whole area just a tad cluttered.
recolored outlines and darkened the eye. better?
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:O Your Saviour Star Dragn at Sppf! (I'm Zozo1999). LOVING DA NEW SPRITES :D:D:D
hiya zozo!~ ya this place loads faster than serebii...

thx~

im making remaking the Mossrio line
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Posted October 18th, 2010
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You're sprites are good- defiantly. However, you should probably work on smoothening the outlines. Love the fish, too. Keep it up!

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