I guess all my other poems can be locked as I've put them here in one bundle.
Please don't hesitate to review/rate. Preferably both. Also I wouldn't mind re- *ahem*.
Don't go why don't you stay awhile?
Don't leave me here all alone in the silent sadness
I know you say well you have to go
But when you leave you take with you all my gladness
You're like a platform of safety
Like a bright glowing buoy for a shipwrecked girl in the sea
I'm like an owl without the night, like the world without the sun
When you go home and leave me
Well when I'm here I'm smiling
When you leave I'm crying
'Cos you quash my fears and dry my tears
And stop my heart from dying
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Every word you say is like a light
Bright and radiant and I feel enlightened
And I felt your touch and it comforted me
With you I can't get frightened
The door slammed and you disappeared
The depression wave roared in my ears
I was drifting in the dark terror realm
Where the icy cold pain most of all sears
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
BRIDGE:
So when you say you love me
I float up to the top
So when you say I'm your one
I'm aerial
When you say you have to go
I'm falling hard
And when I connect with the ground
The pain devours my heart
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Please come back to me
yup and DP's very first poem (my RL has written poems since she was tiny).
All I know is I'm drowing
In the tsunami of tears
All I feel is the ice
As I fall into the realm of fears
I'm shattered I'm splattered I'm broken in three
I'm crying I'm dying I'm screaming to you to, tearing out my hair
My tears run wild, I'm alone in the darkness
But it's not like I'd expected you to care
Oh yeah I'm terrified and lonely,
I'm trapped, because I let you in
You sucked me dry like chocolate
Then threw me like a wrapper in the bin
I didn't mean anything to you
I was just a toy for you
To play with but when it's broken
It's replaced - my love at least was true
Maybe you didn't care - but I did
The rubbish truck overflows
With all your discarded trash
Everything you tired of
Everything you smashed
I was just a crash test dummy
I had no feelings, at least that's what you thought
It's not like I'd be hurt
When you threw me away, when in your equasion I was nought
Oh yeah I'm terrified and lonely,
I'm trapped, because I let you in
You sucked me dry like chocolate
Then threw me like a wrapper in the bin
I didn't mean anything to you
I was just a toy for you
To play with but when it's broken
It's replaced - my love at least was true
Maybe you didn't care - but I did
Well, why should I feel pain consuming me
What did I deserve to do this?
I blame it on you, it's not fair that you can hypnotise
With the gentle brush of a kiss
So what? You're gonna get sick of her
But I'll never let you back in
Cause I don't care... I don't care
Still, it excruciates me within
BRIDGE:
So when you throw her away
Don't expect her to stay
It doesn't matter anyway
It doesn't matter anyway
Why should I feel pain biting inside
You're just a sleaze who doesn't care
You didn't listen, your love wasn't there
So when you want to recycle
It'll be too late
Too late
Too late
It doesn't matter anyway
oh yeah that was inspired by many poems. but mostly what I kinda guessed.
seeing as I've only felt the first poem personally. *shudders*
Man that was scary.
Watch this space for more poetry.
I wrote some untitled crap love poem today. The last verse is irregular deliberately.
I'm escaping the misery I used to live
Hand in hand with you, in rapture
And we'll run over the grassy fields into the twilight
'Cause my heart you'll capture
And when the darkness catches me I'll fall
Right back into your love
'Cause you'll light up all the doubts and fears
And take me to a place above
We'll tell each other sweet things
And escape the drudgery of this world
When I look up into your face you'll glow like my diamond
And I'll try to be your loved one and shine like your pearl
The sweetness of life has only just begun
Now that you've made my icy heart melt
The depression and doubts are all gone
With all your passion and love that I've felt
So draw me near you and tell me you love me
I need you to dry my tears and to make me feel good
About myself; it's not like I've ever felt these wonders before
So ask me would I ever love you; I do and I would
I'll tell you all my angsts and thoughts
And you'll sympathise and care
We'll be telepathic mutuality bound by love
We'll understand the sorrows we share
And if I wake up in the sunlight
And find the morning warmth on my skin
I'll be smiling for once
On the outer and within
I know that you can't just live on dreams
But in a world of sorrow
How can you wait until you fall asleep
For happiness tomorrow?
So I'll just close my eyes and forget my blues
And fall asleep
And dream you all again
Oh, that shall be so sweet
Happiness is possible now
Even when depression is nearer
That dream has made me
Hold life's value dearer
I'm not alone now
I have a dream that's like a diary
My confidante, my soul, my mind
Happiness is never far behind
A dream
A dream...
Sorry for making you sit through utter crap.
~DP
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